MG FF: THE CUPID WAR!!Season2~PART 37:pg 121 - Page 69

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Posted: 13 years ago
Lol...Dadi rocks!!!😆

And now hum tum ek kamre mein band ho!! Aur Handa haveli so jaye!!🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update!!!
Dadima ne kya chakkar chalaya...
Both of them have to stay together in Handa Haweli...


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

hiii madhu..
hope this affection showered by geet's family is genuine and not a ploy to trap her...
loved the way maan supported her cares for her...i am just overwhelmed😛
preacap is interesting but i cant believe that maan is just gonna be mute spectator...he is def goin do something naughty😳
will b waiting 4 next part
keep writing
and thnxx for this wonderful super duper update
love u and ur ffs
reva


hope this affection showered by geet's family is genuine and not a ploy to trap her. : Hope so coz they never hated Geet except for Brij.

loved the way maan supported her cares for her...i am just overwhelmed : Thats the charmer MSK 😉

preacap is interesting but i cant believe that maan is just gonna be mute spectator...he is def goin do something naughty : 😳 😳 😳


Thank U dear for all the support 😊

Luv uuu 🤗 🤗


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

Hum to aiwain darr gaye the Madhu ji...that NT has called her so must be something wrong...but here the scene is totally different...

Maan ki to badi khaatir-shaatir ho rahi hai Damaad jaise... don't think anything else ( I am straight haan ok) but I want to kiss Dadi...ab to HUM-TUM IK KAMRE MEIN BAND HOON TO KYA HO JAAYE...😍☺️

awesome update...thanx for pm

Hum to aiwain darr gaye the Madhu ji...that NT has called her so must be something wrong...but here the scene is totally different... : Cool na 😎

ab to HUM-TUM IK KAMRE MEIN BAND HOON TO KYA HO JAAYE...😍☺️ : aye hayeee...Tushti goin naughty... 😳 😆

THANK U for comments 😃


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Lol...Dadi rocks!!!😆


And now hum tum ek kamre mein band ho!! Aur Handa haveli so jaye!!🤣

hum tum ek kamre mein band ho!! Aur Handa haveli so jaye!! 😉 🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank You so much for your wonderful comments 😊

As usual trying to compensate the delay by double update. 😳


PART 35


A baffled Geet took him to her room like a robot while Maan silently thanked daadima for her thotful act.

As soon as they were alone in the room, Geet turned towards him with accusing eyes.
Geet : Its all your plan,he na? Apne hi dadima ko kaha hoga. Isi liye ap mere sath aye...

Maan stared at her with his hands crossed over his chest.
His silence hushed her as she could read his eyes saying,'chup bilkul chup'

Maan: ho gaya? (letting out a deep breath) Chill Geet. Atleast u can think before talking.

She lukd at him questioningly.He smirked and shook his head.

Maan: U think that i need such lame xcuse to get lockd up with u in a room! Well then let me warn u Ms Geet Handa,I would have got u in MY room or even in MY bed long before if ever i had wished for it !

She blinked her eyes with the authority in his voice.The possessiveness in his words just made her weak by her knees.

He continued (still in MSK style) : Not that i don't crave for u.Ofcourse I want U! I had been waiting for u since the day U walked out of my life.I would sit in your room and talk to you for hours.I am so crazy about you that for feeling you around me always i kept myself aloof from others.I had built a huge wall between me and this world. And inside this wall,i lived with you,for U...each of my heartbeat screaming out your name! And i know u will hear them wherever you are and one day you will stand in front of me and here u are!

Geet stood there in awe.Each of his words stuck her heart breaking the fake walls of her insecurities...shaking her soul...realising the truth that the man whom she left forever to live happily was madly in love with her. No matter however they live,nagging and waging war all the time, their happiness lied on each other! Yes, Maan ki Geet aur Geet ka Maan.They don't belong to themselves. They belong to ea
ch other, then how could they leave the other!!
An awestruck Geet could only ask him,' Then why are you holding back yourself?'
Maan: I told you Geet, this time its ur turn, U will ask me to marry you and i wont claim you until then.






How much she wanted to tell him that moment that she loves him and is crazy about him.She wanted to run into his arms and claim him..love him..kiss on his lips..and...

But sometimes when emotions overpower you,all that you could do is to freeze,your thots or acts...

The way she lukd into his eyes,he knew she is so vulnerable to him and how could he not utilise this fact?
He moved towards her again crossing her as she stepped back with each of his step.
Maan: waise Geet,why are u making a fuss of this whole thing,hmm?

He had cornered her to the wall and now blocked her way with his strong hands and his body pressing on her.

Maan : batao na Geet, are u scared of being with me in the same room? Kya tumhe lagta he ki mere sath tum apney apko rok nhe paoge?
'Maan',she moaned as his lips were dangerously close to his.Unable to hold back her hands were wrapped around his waist...pulling him even closer to her...he nibbled her lower lip..feeling her errotic heartbeats against his chest.His hands slowly slid inside her top feeling her bare skin...she was responding to him as she stroked his back with desire.She parted her lips and he was goin in for a deep kiss...they heard a knock at the door.
Maaneet straightened themselves.
Taiji kept on calling,'arey Geet puttar darwaaza khol na jaldi'
Geet quickly opened the door to find Taiji standing with a glass of milk.
Geet : ye kya he Taiji?
Taiji : wo kesar wala dudh he,damaatji ke liye.

Geet lukd behind to find him standing like a perfect son-in-law or husband material with a smile of courtesy and Taiji luking at him with reverence.The scene was just too much for Geet.So she decided to disperse it quickly.She took the glass.
Geet : ji Taiji,me unhe pila dungi. Ap jaiye.
She closed the door and sighed in relief. Maan took his shirt off and lay flat on the bed with his head resting on his folded hands.
It was indeed an awkward moment for Geet. She wanted to tell him that her heart only beats for his..she is his,but she wanted to make it special for him.But he on the other hand was making it difficult for her.She dared not luk at him in his black vest and track pants.She had no need to luk at him to tell that he is awfully sexy.She closed her eyes and was about to gulp the whole milk,when his voice stopped the glass an inch away from her lips.
Maan:ek minute,i thot thats for me!
Geet: but..M..Maan you don't drink milk.
Maan: i want this one!
Geet rolled her eyes and gave to him trying to maintain as much distance from him.
He drank it .
Geet: ap bhi na..aisy bhi kya zid he?
Maan: Coz i dont want my room mate to have a stomach upset!
Geet (surprised): u know?
Maan: of course! Yaad he, Rajji ke entrance ke time u drank the milk which she refused to have and next day you were throwing up! Ahh...i don't want any trouble again

She whacked his arms playfully.He chuckled and got off the bed.
Geet : kya hua Maan?
Maan: umm..i will sleep on the couch.U sleep here.
Geet : But Maan...
She held him by wrist.A lump was forming in his throat which slowly ran down to his stomach,as he realised that this is the first ever attempt that she made consciously after four long years.He stood there still as she said,'I want to sleep in your arms, Maan!'
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PRECAP: GEET REALISING MAAN'S LOVE 😳 😳 😳 😳

I definitely didn't thot of writing a whole part on bedroom scene and still not completing it.Sorry! 😳

Will update in a few minutes...
Hope this is not boring...



Edited by madhubala123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Here we go... 😳

PART 36


He couldnt believe his ears! Did she just say that??

He turned around and saw those beautiful brown eyes full of love and desire.Thats what he wanted all these time..that one look of love..passion from her.He didn't need anymore words from her but still his heart yearned to hear her confession...He smiled slyly and asked,'kya kaha tumne ? mene suna nhe Geet'
Geet: mujhe apki baho me sona he Maan...
She pulled him once more and he let himself fall over her.
Maan: Geet tum...
She placed her finger on his lips.
Geet: shh... I know i owe you an explanation but...can we talk later?

Her voice almost cracked in his need.He couldn't take his eyes off her..drowning into her alluring eyes..he gave in himself to her craving for him.He dipped his face on her neck inhaling the scent of her smooth hair... 'oh Geet.',he moaned as placed wet kisses on her neck to her curves... His hands slowly moved to reach the buttons of her top feeling her aroused over her shirt.She arched back pressing them closer to his skin... As he unbuttoned her,she clutched his hand and removed his Rolex with a tempting smile.The beast in him could no longer wait as he quickly threw her top and skirt in air.She hugged him tightly as if to cover herself and whispered,'make love to me Maan..'
He moved back and lukd into her confessing eyes. He always knew she is his,and its not just the physical need! CUPID struck the arrow of love on them,the day he saw her in front of her house! And its that unconditional love that attracts them like the opposite poles of a magnet,the repulsive attraction... the CUPID WAR...to make them fall in love...to let them know that they are born for each other and they are ONE!

She opened her eyes feeling him drifting away and enjoyed the beautiful sight in front of her. Her man undressing for her.. She lifted her hands to embrace him and the rest of the barriers were cleared in seconds.
He was feeling her all over with his lips as she wriggled and moaned to each of his ministrations.His hands roughly kneaded her b****** as she smiled in content with the pleasure and parting her lips for his.. He breathed into her and she could feel his hardness rubbing against her inner thighs. She held him tighter and rolled over him with her on top of him.Maan was loving this dominating Geet and gave in to her will. He just loved to pleasurise her..

She ran her soft hands over him,feeling every inch of his skin..from his hair to his sensitive earlobes.. moving to his stubble..down his chin feeling his Adam's apple as he gulped closing his eyes...and feeling the masculine broad chest and making him smile as she imitated him teasing his nipples moving down to his abs...rounding his navel...and sending jolts of current as she stroked his already aroused manhood...He moved his hand down her waist and parted that sensitive skin between her legs,urging her to take him in...
With his touch,the resistance that she was faking broke and she raised her hip. He cupped her bottoms and eased her to get him in. She moved up and down...thrusting him into her as his lips worked on her curves that came out to him with each of her strokes...their nerves felt tightened with an adrenalin rush and he rolled over her even then showing he was the one in command.


He thrust into her with more force and vigour entering completely into her and taking her into a world of ecstasy'.filling her with his passion as they reached their climax together filling the room with their love,passionate moans and the tweaking sounds of the old bed of Handa haveli'.

He kissed her collar bone as they lied their panting.He was about to get off her when she stopped him.

Geet : Maan don't go. Let me feel you'.

She could feel him hardening again inside her and blushed.

He kissed on her lips as he managed to say, " I love you so much Geet'"

And yet again they repeated their act of love the whole night'.as long as their bodies had energy to bear their passion'.having lost the track of time, place or even the situation that they were into'..

And when finally when they were relaxing in each others arms she mumbled, " I love you Maan" But when she tried to look into his eyes, she couldn't stop herself from giggling as she saw fall into a slumber with his lips slightly parted and cutely snoring in a low ruffled voice. She touched his lips just to make him aware and he stopped snoring pulling her closer to him rubbing his rough jaw on hers. She hugged him and slept resolving to herself that she would make it definitely special for him. Her man who made every moment of her life feel special deserved a "special confession" from her.

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Huhh... i can't believe it i wrote all these 😳 😳 😆


I know these are two short updates but i gotta go.Will be back next week.Now don't u think they are too much in love 😉 Well u can guess ofcourse wats goin to happen next...

PRECAP : JEALOUS MAAN 😳 😳


THE CUPID WAR is going to end soon...

I wish to open a new thread if only you can help me with comments.

NEXT : PART 37 ; page 121





Edited by madhubala123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 35 n 36 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d update ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
both parts r nice
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww
two part in one go
seem some one is very happy

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