MG FF: THE CUPID WAR!!Season2~PART 37:pg 121 - Page 16

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Posted: 14 years ago
HIII
awesome update
loved it
loved maaneet
cute
h8 NT
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved this ff. new concept
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeee!!!!
LOL!!!!...armaan took the situation in a wrong way!
NT was just finding a way to accuse geet...
wonder what will the trio do now...
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update. Loved it. Maan is so naughty ek bhi mauka nahi chhorta always in romantic mood 😉 he shud tell geet dat he loves her n try to win her trust. love is in d air but geet is still unsure about her feelings 😕 . Armaan really cares 4 geet dats y he fought wid his best fren maan but dey shud clear der MU nahi toh dis nt 😡 ll surely try to take advantage of d situation. It was a fantastic update n m curious 4 next part pls update soon. 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part...

ye NT bhi naa...now coz her ...she wants them to get out...

continue soon...

thnx for PM..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Sorry for late update...Actually i started one more FF. So struggling to update...😛


So here is the next part with a twist 😉...

PART 12

Maan started his jeep and was waiting at the gate.Yash handed over the key with a sad smile to Rajji who would burst out any moment.Yash got into the jeep.Maan still didnt start and was looking straight avoiding any eye contact with Armaan who stood to the right of the jeep lukin away.
Yash got out and pulled Armaan's bag.
Yash:arey chal yaar...
Armaan snapped 😡and walked in the opposite direction.
Yash: Armaan..yaar meri baat to sun..Armaan...
Maan:Yash tumhe ana he?
Yash got into the jeep silently.
Maan booked a resort exclusively for the remaining 2months.Yes thats more than enough as they are about to finish their specialization within a month.

In the bedroom:
Yash: Maan i came with you coz i know Armaan to phir bhi maan jayega but U! Huh, never! Lekin ha Armaan ka gussa to jayaz he.
Maan:kya? Hmm..kehna kya chahte ho tum? Kya galat kiya mene? 😡Do u thing i misbehaved with her? Fine i did! U know why bcoz I hav the right to do so. Wo meri he sirf meri samjhe tum?


Yash shocked.😲
Maan: its true that i used to flirt with girls but SHE is different.Me apne apko uske karib jane se rok nhe pata kyu ki me janta hu ki wo sirf mera haq he.And i'm not at all sorry for what i did,do u get that?
Yash:chill man! Saaf saaf kyu nhe kehta that u r in love!
Maan blushes.
Yash:oho! Maan Khurana in love! Phir to aj treat he na
Maan:done buddy!
Yash: Hail Caesar!
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Nite @ PUB:

Maan sitting in a corner havin a coke.Yash havin his Nth drink.
Yash talkin to a foreigner sitting nxt to him.
Yash:so..ur name kya tha ha.. Ron!
Ron: yeah!
Yash: Ron bhai! Aj me pike mar jaunga! Pata he kyu? Aj aisa din he ki mujhe khushi se aur gam se peena pad rha he.Pyar ki khushi dosti ka gam! Ek frnd khush dusre ka rosh aur beech me phasa Yash! Samaj rhe ho na Ron bhai?
Ron:😕
Yash:arey tum kya samjhoge? Us bhai ka dard jiske behen ke liye uske dono dost bichad gaye! Wuuaahh.😭.meri behen...wuaahh😭 mere dost...😭
He starts cryin like a child. He rolls on the ground.
Maan was losing patience watching Yash and a helpless Ron.Finally he got up and dragged Yash to his jeep with Adi on help.Yash still managed to a get full bottle of whisky.He stood on the jeep...Talking rubbish.They driving through the beach side.
Yash: arey samandar.Chalo Maan jeep rokho! Mujhe is samandar me dub jane do! Me ye gham nhe seh sakta...(in a sad tone) Arey jaan pe bhi khelenge..
Tere liye de denge...
Aagey yaad nahii...
Par ye dosti (with an emotional sob) hum nhe todenge...😭
Todenge dum magar tera sath na..(sob) chodenge...
Maan:Yash agar abhi tum apna bakwas bandh nhe karoge to me khud tumhe is samandar me duba dunga!😡 😡
Yash:arey ja bewafa dost! Mera Caesar nikla Brutus! U too Brutus!!
Maan shot an angry glare.😡
Yash:acha to is sharab me dub jata hu. Uske liye tera permission nhe chahiye mujhe.
(As he sips the drink)umm... Armaan mere yaar...mera bacha...
Maan:lagta he nashe me pagal ho gaya.Me Armaan nhe Maan hu! 🤔
Yash: Arey Maan nhe Armaan.dek to mera Armaan bhi dosti ke gham me khudkhushi karne ja rha he..
Maan luks at the direction shown by Yash.Armaan was standing on the beachside.
Yash:gadi rok Maan warna mera yaar.
Maan:oye nautanki band kar aur use jake bula!
Maan stops. Yash almost falls getting down the jeep.He ran to Armaan almost pushing him into the sea.
Yash: Armaan nhee..dnt commit suicide.Me hu na! Phir kyu?
Armaan: Yash muft me milta he to itna kyu pita he?
Yash:arey muft me nhe gham me piya he.Wo bhi humare dosti ke naam! Aur tujhe laga ki me aivayi piyakkad banda hu? Isse acha to me abhi mar jau!
Adi & Maan reach near them.
Yash: Adi bhai iska bag jeep me dal do.
Armaan: nhe Yash!
Yash:tu a rha he mere sath.Nhe to me aunga tere sath.Chal hum chorus me suicide karte he,chal!
Armaan: Yash me koi suicide nhe karnewala.😡
Yash:ok.me akele karta hu.Tu nhe ayega to me karta hu suicide.
Armaan:nautanki sala! 🤔 Adi ye bag jeep dal.
Yash:matlab tu a rha he?
Armaan:ha sirf tere liye!
He luks at Maan.A-M Eye-lock!
It was broken when an excited Yash pounced on Armaan hugging and kissing him.Armaan got irritated.Maan lukd away smiling.Once again they all left together.
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3 weeks passed.Nothing changed.Armaan & Maan didnt talk to each other.Its not that they were angry but their ego...
PONDICHERRY INN
Rajji came back from school.
Rajji:dii
Geet: i'm here only.Y r u shouting?
Rajji: arey di aj me wo Armaan se mili.
Geet:acha..how is he?
Rajji: fine di.Wo log XYZ RESORT me he.
Geet: 3 together?
Rajji:hmm..Par jab mene Maan ke bare me pucha to Armaan ne kuch nhe kaha.Think they are not yet done.
Geet: watever! 😕 Let them solve it.
Rajji:waise di wo log itne bure nhe the.It was fun havin them.
Geet:umm..
Rajji:apne kyu jane diya unhe?Chalo ek kam karte he sabko wapas bulate he.Ha if u want hum us Maan ko avoid karte he.Uske wajah se ye sab hua tha,he na?
Geet:arey nhe Rajji.Maan ne kuch nhe kiya.Wo bura nhe he..bas thodi masti zyada he.Aur us din to wo bas mazak...

Geet stopped as she saw as she saw staring at her,her hands crossed over her chest.
Rajji:got u!
Geet:kya?
Rajji:ha dii..ye jo apke aur Maan jiju ke beech jo tom & jerry chal rha tha na wo to mujhe bohat pehle se pata lag gaya tha.Aur usey confirm karne ke liye mene apne hi 'jeejaji' pe line marne ka natak kiya!
Geet:natak?😲
Rajji:ha..nhe to me kaise dek pati ki ap 'jeejaji' ko leke kitni possessive ho! Sab kuch theek tha.Lekin us din ka wo jo "Get out " tha na. Usi ne mujhe confuse kiya tha.Lo ab wo dur ho gayi.Kyu meri jerry di ap Tom jiju ko itna kyu tadpa rhe ho? Apne is jung ko khatam karo aur apne pyar ka izhar kar do na.

Geet blushes.☺️
Geet:par Rajji me bolu kaise?😕
Rajji:apne muh se
Geet: oho tu samaj nhe rhe.Mene itna sab kuch kaha ab jake agar me bolu to wo kya sochenge?
Rajji:itna mat socho.Ap bas bolo phir dekte he.
Geet:kya me bol du?
Rajji:haa di.Resort ka numbr ye rha. Cal him.
Geet:me?
Rajji:ok me cal karti hu.
Rajji calls and Maan picks the phone.
Rajji: Hello Maan ji..(Geet eyes her)
Maan:kaun Rajji?
Rajji:ha.Actually Geet di wants to meet you.
Maan:ok i vl come to your home.

Geet animates nooo.. Waving her hands.
Rajji:noo...(geet signals beach) beach kal shaam 4pm ok?
Maan:done sweety.
Rajji shows a thumbs up to Geet. 👍🏼
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NEXT DAY:
BEACHSIDE 4PM.


Geet was waiting on the beach side.She was wearing a simple white anarkali suit lukin like an angel.She was admiring the sun which was getting ready to set. Maan came there in his jeep. He saw her standing there admiring the sun...her cycle parked a few distance away...and she was there waiting for him.He would stand there whole life admiring her.She turned around and waved her hand calling him.He walked towards her. They stood there silently lukin everywhere else but not facing each other. Finally she spoke.
Geet: Maan i'm sorry for that day..wo..
Maan:nhe Geet it was my mistake.I crossed my limits.


She lukd at him wondering.Limits?was there anything like that between them?He didnt even askd for an apology when he almost tried to make love to her. Y now?
Geet: Maan u dnt hav to be sorry!

He was shockd to hear that😲.Did she even know what those words mean? He stood there dumbstruck.

Geet stepped forward lukin down her cheeks were pink as she blushed.She slowly held his hand.He stood mersmerised.She lead his hand to her waist.Geet was still lukin down.Maan felt like his blood rushing through his nerves when he felt her soft b****** on his chest.He could feel her n****** getting hard & erect against him.She hugged him.Maan was losing himself😳.His hands encircled around her waist tightly bringing her even closer to himself.Geet felt goosebumps as she cocooned herself in him. She rested her head on his chest.
Geet: Maan,why are we doin this? Both of us know what we feel for each other.Why cant we just accept it and live with it. This is so beautiful.Ap jante ho Maan jab bhi ap mere karib ate ho me janpuchkar apko rokti thi kyuki...kyuki me apne apko nhe rok pati😳. Har baar me bohat mushqil se apse haar manne se bacha leti hu apne apko.Lekin Maan ab se me zindagi bhar apse har manne ke liye taiyar hu.Maan me sirf aur sirf apki hu. I love you Maan...
She lukd at his eyes ever lovingly and then her eyes slowly moved to his tempting lips.She rubbed her soft cheeks with his rough chin.He couldnt hold back anymore and their lips met exploring each other...finding the taste of each other...tongues entangling...and nibbling each other.As she moaned, Maan came back to reality and opened his eyes.Geet could feel him suddenly not responding to her.She opened her sparklin eyes and lukd at him innocently.Maan pressed himself on her a bit rough almost pressing her private part with his manhood.



Maan: pata he Geet,kal tak jo thrill tha na jo tumhare peeche gumne ka.Lo ab,bas isi second me khatam ho gaya.

Geet lukd at him shocked!😲 😲 He released her with a smirk and announced, "Maan Singh Khurana ke use and throw list me ab ek aur naam GEET HANDA!!

His words echoed in her ears.He just said that! She was nothing to him.But then,she had seen the love in his eyes! Was she a fool who was not able to read the truth behind those eyes? He turned around & walked back while she stood there still. 😲



How she wished he would turn and come back to her with his seductive yet caring luks and say, "just kidding mishty "
But nothing happened.He got into the jeep and lukd at her.No,she wont breakdown in front of him.She gave him a cold look.She took her cycle.He didnt wait for her to go and drove off quickly!

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PRECAP: GEET IN KHURANA MANSION!


HOPE U DONT KILL ME AFTER THIS...😛

WAITING FOR UR COMMENTS

EXPECT NEXT UPDATE AFTER 3 DAYS...

Edited by madhubala123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ouch! Yeh kya hogaya 😲 wats wrong wid maan y he is not confessing his love to geet 😕 . Geet in km sound interesting. Pls update soon 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: siroilily

Ouch! Yeh kya hogaya 😲 wats wrong wid maan y he is not confessing his love to geet 😕 . Geet in km sound interesting. Pls update soon 😃

Thnx for the comment...😃

Maan dusht..danav..😡

vl continue sooonn...

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Posted: 14 years ago
i am going to strangle maan and roast him in fire...
kamina kahin ka...
all these days he was following geet like a lovesick puppy and now see the guts of the man, he has the audacity to say geet handa is one more name added in the use and throw list of maan singh khurana...
i am eagerly waiting for the next update...
what the hell, he was happily confessing to yash that he loved geet and now he is doing this...😡
gadha kahin ka
BTW an amazing update
keep writing
love u and ur ffs

reva
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

i am going to strangle maan and roast him in fire...
kamina kahin ka...
all these days he was following geet like a lovesick puppy and now see the guts of the man, he has the audacity to say geet handa is one more name added in the use and throw list of maan singh khurana...
i am eagerly waiting for the next update...
what the hell, he was happily confessing to yash that he loved geet and now he is doing this...😡
gadha kahin ka
BTW an amazing update
keep writing
love u and ur ffs

reva

Thnx yaar for the comment 😃

And Maan 🤬

U just said it yaar.. He is a gadha 😆

Thnx once again for all your motivation...It really means a lot...😊


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