MG FF: THE CUPID WAR!!Season2~PART 37:pg 121 - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago
super duper
love it
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thnx for all the comments...😊

vl b back on 20th JUNE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rsroopali

madhu kya yaar

precap yesa deke ab thu 20 june ko ayegi
jaldi aneki try karna
plzzz
n awesomeee update
d way maan made rajji understand wowww
n maan n geets kiss was awesomeee

😃 I vl try to come back asap...thnx 4 the comment...

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Posted: 14 years ago
its june 20 update please
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneet_mansi

its june 20 update please

vl update sooo...n to be honest i lost the track of the story myself lol...😆 vl try to update today itself...
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Sorry for late update...


PART 10

As they reached back to Pondicherry Inn they found a Honda City parked near the gate.Maan parked the jeep inside. They got out.Just then Brij was abt to pounce on them.Maan stood in front of the girls protectively.Before he could do anything to the girls a young lady rushed to the spot & stopped.

Lady: ye ap kya kar rhe he? Bache he.Inhe kyu dara rhe he?
Brij: Tara tumne dekha nhe,ye ladkiya din me hi kisi gaer mard ke sath yu ghum rhe he.Humare pariwar ke izzat ka inhe khayal hi nhe.😡
Tara: ap shant ho jayiye.me samjha dungi.
Brij backs off.Maan & Brij exchange an angry glare at each other 😡while Geet & Rajji luk a bit confused & scared.
Tara: to ap Geet he aur ap Rajji?
Geet:ha lekin ap kaun?
Tara:humara naam Nain tara he aur hum apke bhabi he.
Geet(excitd):matlab veerji ne shadi kar li? Wow!
NT smiles.
NT:When i came to know about u two i insisted ur Veerji that u should be living with us.aise akele dur desh me...nhe..u should come with us.
Geet:thank u bhabi.but v cnt leave this place.we hav our papaji's memories in this place.We dont want to leave it.
NT(lukin at the entire place): hmm...kafi ache jagah chod ke gaye he apke papaji...nhe mera matlab he kafi yadein hongi na.Nyways our doors vl b always open for u.Take ur own time & think about it.

She hugs Geet and then Rajji.Maan was watchin al these.He wasnt liking the very appearance of NT.He felt she is more dangerous than Brij.Brij can harm physically but this lady...her eyes spat venom and he could clearly see that.Her words were extra ordinarily sweet and this sudden change of mind made him skeptical.He wanted to warn Geet but decided to keep quiet.
Later when Brij & NT left Geet sat alone in her room.It was then she remembered all the events of the day.But she was confused with the feelins in her mind.She didnt know y she felt bad when she saw Rajji in his arms...y she wants to know his opinion on NT & her decision to stay back.
Geet:enough.Y should i think about him?Nhe geet tu pehle jaise hi theek he.Dnt confuse urself ok! Hmm...
Just then Rajji enters her room.

Rajji:di ap soye nhe?
Geet:chal aja aj tu mere sath so na

Rajji jumped on the bed.
Geet:oye bistar mat thodnaa...
They cuddle up together.


Maan on the other side was realising the newly born feelins for...his mishty...he knew y he always thot abt her...y everything relatd to her was wonderful for him...y he wasnt able to think of nyone else than her...he smiled as he found his answer...yes he is in luv...he kissed the forehead of a child whom he was checkin on his rounds.The child smiled & it reminded him of her angelic smile...
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Few days later Geet got a legal notice by NT & Brij claiming their rights on her papaji's property.After Maan rennovated the restaurant the market value of the place shoot up rapidly.Sensing this NT changed her husband's stand & tried to bring the girls back to HP.But now that Geet wasnt budging she had to reveal her ugly side.Maan, Armaan & Yash were fumin as they came to know about this.Maan roared sayin that he was already doubtful about that witch(NT) 🤬.Somehow Geet & Rajji convinced them that they vl face this alone & as long as they r togethr nothin vl break them.Maan wasnt convinced but they made him to promise to stay away frm this.He did that unwillingly.
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Few weeks later,

Maan was leavin from his duty in the morning.While Yash & Armaan were on duty.They were in locker room,Maan packin his stuff while Armaan & Yash gettin ready for duty.

Yash: yar Maan u r becoming way too professional.I mean earlier u never go for nite duties.How come now Maan Singh Khurana is not partyin at nites & on duty!
Maan: V r docs. & v need to be serious!
Armaan:point.

Just then they heard Sameera's voice.Maan hides behind the locker.
Sam:xcuse me did u see Maan?
Yash: Maan? Umm... (Maan indicates dnt tel her) nhe..(Maan sighs in relief)par us locker ke peeche nhe he.

Maan luks at Yash angrily & comes out with a grin.
Sam: Maan r u avoidin me?


Maan:no..nothin like that.Actualy i'm busy & i need to go now...

Sayin this Maan rushes to the car park.Sameera runs after him calling out, "Maa..n Maan".But when she reachd the parkin lot his jeep was already at the exit.She took her scooty to follow but he was jst too fast.Maan knew that she would look for him.So he left his jeep at Adi's shop & reachd home.But when he saw her scooty there he understood that she would be waitin for him upstairs.Maan tip-toed to Geet's backyard.Luckily the kitchen door was open.He entered the kitchen but she wasnt there.He peeped through the window to keep an eye on Sameera.But then he heard the sound of her scooty leavin & he sighed in relief.He drank a bottle of water in one sip.Then he decided to look for Geet to get his room key.

Maan: Geeet Geet where r u?

He heard her voice from the dining hall & proceeded towards the source of voice.

Geet:kaun?
Maan(smiled):me tumhara Maan

Geet(imitatin him):'tumhara Maan' tum kabse mere hue?
Maan:jabse tum is duniya me ayi.
Geet:oho.. Mr.Majnu Singh Khurana dont u even try to flirt with me.U vl fail miserably.

Maan(smirked):i dont feel so...

He reached the dining hall & was amused by the sight in front of him.Geet was wearing a knee length white skirt & a sleeveless pink top.She was standing on a ladder with a broom.
Maan:geet wat r u doin?
Geet: dikta nhe he kya? Me madhumakhi ka chatta saaf kar rhe hu.Dekho kitna bada ghar bana rakha he mere ghar me!
Maan:arey geet be safe..they r really harmful.
Geet: i know.Thats why i got rid of them by showin fire.Bas ab ye mess clean karna he.Geet Handa knows how to tame wild beasts!(she remarked sarcastically)
Maan(sensing her sarcasam): hmm..janta hu.waise bi mujhe aisi sir firi ladkiya achi lagti he.Tum kahu to me le jau tumhe mere sath dilli...waise dadi ko to me mana lunga.meri khushi se badkar unke liye kuch bhi nhe he...aur tum apne in jangli rishtedaro ke beech itni problems kyu face kar rhe ho??? I vl make u the queen of Khurana Mansion...wat say??
Geet:did u just proposed me Mr.Maan Singh Khurana?
Maan:jaisa tumhe theek lage.
Geet:theek to mujhe bilkul nhe lag rha...Maan stand away.

Maan was standing jst below her ladder lukin upwards.Geet was now really uncomfortable with the view that her knee length skirt is giving to him.

Maan:kyu? Kya tumhe kuch kuch ho rha he? (he runs his fingers gently on her toes almost tickling her)
'Maa..n' she moaned.he lukd away smiling to himself.
Geet:wat r u doin here now?
Maan(again luks upward):tumhe dekh rha hu..ache se..
Geet: uff...I mean y r u in my house at this time?
Maan:wo Sameera mere peeche pad gayi thi.to bachke yaha aya & i want my key.

Geet:ok u go & sit in the hall.i vl come in a few minutes.
Maan:no i'm ok here.
Geet:but i'm not.
Maan:ok to me upar ata hu.
Geet: Maa..n no...
Maan(climbs the ladder &she shakes):oh mishty...meri mishty
geet: Maan don't!!
Maan gets down & shakes the ladder.She slips & falls on his arms...He tightens his grip on her & she struggles to free herself...
(this song is frm the original movie on which the ff is based.Just think of Maaneet in this song.This is more like a conversatn so i wont be able to make a word by word translatn.I request you to watch the song to get into the mood.I vl include the translatn if u need it.So plz do tel me.)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kI1dJCBpbmA



After a long chase geet runs to the store room.Maan pins her to the wall.She luks at him shockd.😲

Maan(in his seductive tone):kab tak bachogi mujse huh...his lips brushes hers...
Geet:Maan ye kya...
Maan:chup bilkul chup!

She luks at him without even blinking her eyes.His hand moves down to her bare waist inside her top.She closed her eyes feelin his electrifying touch.He slid her top & she raised her hands helpin him.He undressed her upper body completely & made her lie on an old bed made of spring wire which was kept there.




She was carried away by his mesmerising aura to realise wat was goin on there.He was filled with passion & he expressed it by claiming her bossom with his hands,lips and teeth...suckin...licking & biting them...makin her moan with pleasure.He kept on rubbing his private part on hers that was creatin some ecstasic feelin in her.


She moaned out his name,'Maaa..n'😳
That was it.He lost himself completely.He had almost removed her skirt and she was lying there in her inners.He left her to unbutton his jeans.Thats when reality struck her.Wat was she doin? Almost givin away her womanhood to a man whom she is not even sure wat she meant to him.She tried to get up but he pinned her down...But she couldnt allow this & she was determined.She knew he was not in his senses but she tried to call him.But his name from her mouth was havin opposite effect on him😳.He was tryin to remove her panties...the only barrier between her remaining dignity & his uncontrollable desire.Her hand searched for something nearby to get his attention.She felt a stick and picked it up.She tried to give him a last warning.
Geet:Maan chodo mujhe..
Maan(stil lost):hmm...nhe mishty..i cant
Geet:chodo mujhe warna..
Maan:warna kya? Hmm...(stil kissin & caressing her)
She closed her eyes & hit him with the stick.Thats it Maan yelled in pain & then he was silent.She shoved him off her & got up.She didnt realise that he was unconscious.She dropped the stick & quickly got dressed up.She threw his shirt at him but he wasnt movin.
Geet:Maan i'm pissd off.stop ur drama & get up.leave now!Maan me...

Thats when she noticed that what she hit him with was not a stick but iron rod.She was horrified seeing blood near his head...😲
Geet covered her wide opened mouth with her hand.Tears rolled down her eyes😭.She knew it wasnt jst his fault.She gets carried away with him around always...She wantd to knock some sense in him.Thats y she hit him but she never wantd to hurt him even though wat he was doin to her was wrong...she knew this was a war with him since she saw him in real after that dream.She always had to put up that brave face to resist him when he came so close to her, not just physically...she knew he was so close to her heart...but this was a war of inner turmoil & she never wantd to shed blood...his blood in this.
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PRECAP:

GEET: Get out all of u!!!!!!! now😡...i dont want to see u three in my house...😲


Hope u liked this part.Plzzz do comment...plz let me know that i'm not boring u...😒 plzzz...

vl update nxt part on MONDAY!!!!(hope so 😊)

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Originally posted by: namita25

awesome update..

loved it.

thnk u 😊
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Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

superbbb update... loved it

Thnx Dreamy_Mystique for all ur regular comments which have always motivated me 😊

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Originally posted by: Shalve

wow...wonderful update...

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