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Posted: 14 years ago
jaldi jaldi update karo
me eargely waiting 😍
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PART 18

It's been a week that priya is not meeting geet and her health was becoming worst.She was becoming more thin and she did not have the strength to walk also.Maan and dadi tried to talk to her but she would not listen to anyone instead she used to cry.Whenever dadi asked her if she needed anything she would say mama but her voice would not come out.Only her mouth used to move but her voice was not heard .It was as if she lost her voice and she became like a mute person.Dadi tried to tell maan to call geet but he would deny

Morning

Dadi entered priya's room and saw that she was sleeping.She went near her and tried waking her up but she was not getting up.She touched her forehead and it was burning.She called maan

Maan:dadi aap ne bulaya

Dadi:maan priya ko bukhar hai

Maan:kyaaa

Dadi:haan

Maan touched her forehead and it was burning

Dadi:maan please naina ko phone karo

Maan:ji dadi

Maan called naina and she reached after sometimes.She checked priya

Dadi:naina sab theek hai na

She did not say anything

Maan:aunty sab theek hai na

Naina:kuch theek nahi hai

Dadi:matlab

Naina:priya ko hospital main admit karna hoga

Maan:par kyu

Naina:priya ko bohut tej bukhar hai aur upar se yeh bohut weak bhi ho gayi hai isse saline lagani paregi

Dadi started crying:priya ko kuch hoga toh nahi

Maan:dadi aap kaie baatein kar rahi hai

Dadi:sab tumhare kaaran hua hai maan

Maan:maine kya kia hai

Dadi:kya kia tumne hi priya ko geet se nahi milne dia agar tum priya ko nahi rokte toh aaj yeh sab nahi hota aur na hi priya bolna band karti

Naina:matlab

Dadi:jab se priya geet se nahi mili hai wo tab se bolna band kar dia hai aur jab bhi bolti hai bas mama kehti hai par uske muh se awaaz nahi aati hai

Maan:dadi aap kya keh rahi hai

Dadi:main sahi keh rahi hoon tum din bhar office main rehte ho toh tumhe kaise pata hoga

Naina:maan hume priya ko hospital le jaana hoga

Maan:theek hai

Maan lifted priya in his arms and took her to the hospital.Naina admitted priya to the ICU as she was having difficulty in breathing.A needle was pierced in her hand through which glucose was being given as she was becoming very weak.Her mouth was covered with mask from which she was given oxygen

Dadi could not see her in this condition and started crying

Maan:dadi please mat roiye

Dadi:maan agar priya ko kuch hogaya toh main tumhe kabhi maf nahi karungi

After sometime she woke up.Naina helped her to get up.

Naina:beta aap theek hai na

Priya:mama

She whispered but her voice was not heard.Naina checked her again

Dadi:sab theek hai na

Naina:wo'

Maan:boliye na

Naina:priya apni voice kho chuki hai

Both were shocked listening to this

Maan:nahi aisa nahi ho sakta

Naina:aisa hi hai

Maan:par wo bol rahi thi

Naina:wo iss liye bol rahi thi kyunki geet isske paas thi agar tum geet ko bulao toh shayad wo theek ho jae

Maan:nahi main geet ko nahi bula sakta

Dadi:par maan kyu

Maan:kyunki main nahi chahta ki priya geet ke kareeb aye

He left saying this.Dadi was very worried about priya and so she decided to call geet.She dialed geet's number

Geet:hello

Dadi:geet

Geet:dadi aap

Dadi:haan

Geet:dadi aap ko kuch kaam tha

Dadi:geet pleasa hospital aa jao

Geet:hospital par kyu

Dadi:priya

Geet:priya ko kya hua

Dadi:geet please jaldi aa jao and started crying

Geet:dadi aap roiye mat please

Dadi:pehle tum hospital aa jao phir main batati hoon

Geet:theek hai main aati hoon

Dadi:jaldi

Geet:par kaunse hospital

Dadi:sanjeevani

Geet:ji

Geet kept the phone and hurried to the hospital.She went to the reception

Geet:priya khurana

Receptionist:ICU seedha jaake right

Geet:thank you

Geet reached there and saw that dadi was sitting outside and was crying

Geet:dadi

Dadi:geet beta aap aa gayi

Geet:dadi priya ko kya hua

Dadi:priya ko bohut tej bukhar hai wo bas tumhe bul rahi na hi kuch kha rahi hai aur na hi medicines le rahi hai please dekho na

Geet:dadi aap roiye mat main dekhti hoon

Geet saw priya from the small window.She was covered with different instruments and was looking very pale and weak.She was going to open the door when someone caught his hand.She turned and saw maan standing

Geet:sir aap

Maan:haan main tum yaha kya kar rahi ho

Geet:wo'

Maan:bolo

Geet:main

Maan:geet bolo tumhari himaat kaise hui yaha aane ki

Geet:dadi ne bulaya

Maan:toh kya hua

Dadi:maan

Geet:sir main ek baar priya se mil kar chali jaungi

Maan:nahi

Geet:sir

Maan:bas ek aur sabd kaha toh dekhna tum mere office main secretory ke post pe kaam kar rahi ho na ki priya ki care taker toh jao yaha se

Geet:sir

Maan:geeet

Dadi:maan geet ko ek baar milne dijiye

Maan:nahi

Geet turned back and saw priya.Priya woke up hearing geet's voice.She raised her hand as if asking her to come.She turned the other side to leave and then priya started to cry.Geet left from there but priya did not stop crying.She kept on whispering mama mama but her voice already faded

Its been a week that priya was in hospital and her health was getting more worst day by day.Maan came to office as he had a very important meeting.Geet came to his cabin to give him some files

Geet:sir files

Maan:hmm

Geet was still standing there and was knotting her duppata

Maan:geet jao

Geet:?

Maan:geeet

Geet:huh

Maan:kuch kehna hai

Geet:haan

Maan:kya

Geet:wo..umm

Maan:bolo na

Geet:wo.. wo'.

Maan:geet bolo ya sirf wo wo karti rahogi

Geet:sir priya kaisi hai

Maan lied :wo theek hai

Geet:ji sir

Geet left the cabin and thought that maan was telling true

Precap:

She hugged her tight and cried on her chest.She was still in her hospital dress

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Edited by sweety.2 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome yaar .. loved it !!
u left in such a point yaar ...
update soon
i hope priya gets her voice back
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Posted: 14 years ago

Plz can i kill Maan Plz

He is such a jerk
He is letting his daughter die jus because he fears sumthg
How can he thnk abt himself than Priya who is jus getting more critical as days were passing by
I so hate man
He dosent deserve to be called a father
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part...cont soon...waiting 2 know wt happens next...precape is very emotional...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome!!!

Maan has become a dumbo ...stupid.

Beautiful part!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sweety..yeh Maan ko kya ho gaya...why he is behaving like this... why he is not looking his daughter's condition.

Thanx for PM...and Maan ko thodi akal do.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow he is such a jerk!!make prya well
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update. aweee poor priya in hospita. 😭😭😭 and can't talk. what's wrong with maan. can't he saw priya bad condition and let geet meet her.
love the way geet asked about priya and maan trying to ignore her.
thanks for pm and pls update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...
love it...
poor priya...
priya's health is getting worse...
whats wrong with maan...
he can see his daughter die but did not let geet meet her...
plz plz update soon...

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