~~MADE FOR EACH OTHER~~Pt 18 pg 137 Note pg 145 - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51

Wowwwwwwwwww
Lovely part
bt tooo short yr
Plz update a long part plzzzz


Anyways very nice update
Love it alot
Mauhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Thanks 4da pm dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
part 1
nice part.................
poor Geet......................
cont soon...............
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

PART 2

In office

Adi came to maan's office

Adi:si..sir

Maan:kya hai

Adi:sir wo log hume land dene se mana kar rahe hai

Maan:kyaaa

Adi:ye..ye..yes si..sir

Maan:theek hai main kal hoshiarpur jaake baat karoonga

He left the office and reached his home

Priya was playing with dadi

He lifted priya in his arms

Maan:aaj priya ne kya kiya

Priya:??

Maan:dadi doctor ne kya kaha

Dadi:doctor kya kahege wahi jo har baar kehte hai

Maan:dadi paheli mat banaiye

Dadi:doctor ne kaha ki priya kabhi bol nahi sakti

Maan:nahi aisa nahi ho sakta

Dadi:par

Maan:main kal office ke kaam se hoshiarpur jar aha hoon

Dadi:theek hai

Next day

Handa haveli

Geet was getting ready when channi came from the window

Geet:tu yaha kya rahi hai

Channi:tu yaha se bhaag jaa

Geet:kyaa

Channi:haan

Geet:par

Channi:tere paas koi raasta nahi hai tu yaha se bhaag jaw o log teri zindagi barbaad kar denge

Geet:main kaise jaungi

Channi:maine sab intezaam kar diya hai tu yeh khirki se chali ja gurwinder tera niche intezzar kar raha hai wo tujhe bus stop la jayega aur tu waha se delhi chali ja

Geet:par delhi kyu agar ghar main kisi ko pata chala to

Channi:delhi main teri dost hai na pinky uske ghar tera papaji ne baat karli hai

Geet:kya papaji ne

Channi:haan unhone mujhe bheja hai unhe rohan ke baare main sab kuch pata hai

Geet:kyaa

Channi:haan ab jaldi se tu kapre badal jab tak main tere kapre dalti hoon

Geet:haan

She went to change her clothes and channi packed her things

Channi:chal

Geet:ruk main ma ko letter likh deti hu

Channi:theek hai

She wrote the letter and kept it on the table

Channi:jaldi

They both reached down and hugged each other

Channi:gurwinder ise ache se lekar jaana

Gurwinder:theek hai

They left for the bus station

On the other side maan finished his work and was going back

Rano came to call geet and found she was not there she saw the letter and started reading the letter

MAA

"Main yaha se ja rahi hoon muje uss insane se shaadi karke apni zindagi barbaad nahi karni chahti hoon .Main wapas kabhi nahi aungi aur mujhe doondne ki koshish bhi mat kijiye main yaha se bohut dur jaa rahi hoon"

Apki

GEET

She went outside and showed everyone the letter

Brij was furious he took the talwar and went outside with his men to search for geet

Brij:geet aaj tu mujse nahi bachegi

PRECAP:MAAN SAVES GEET

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Edited by sweety.2 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
very nice but why short update give a long one
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
waiting for an action pack update between Maan and brij
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
Fab update
Yayy maans going 2 save geet
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
Great Start. I had missed it initially and just saw it in the forum.
One request - Can u please add date or part in the title of the FF so that we know when it is updated.
Thanks,
Ritzy
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
wow nice one.. precap is nice.. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
nice update but waiting for the next one to c how maan is saving geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60

pls next update

longer
i'm happy for
geet that she run
way i'm sure
priya will talk
when geet come
precap sounds
good
fantastic update
pls cont soonnnnnnn
thanks pm
thank yu dear

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