~~MADE FOR EACH OTHER~~Pt 18 pg 137 Note pg 145 - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
Gud part Waiting hw priya speaks bcoz of geet. By d way priya is very cute. Plz long part update kiya karo bahut jald khatam ho jata hai.
Thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
part 2
nice part......................
hope Maan arrives on time to save Geet.................
cont soon.................................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
Nice FF....

cant wait fro next update...I hope she will be able to make maan;s daughter talk....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
kahani shuru,,... thanx papaji ne geet ki madad ki jhanni ke saath... uff hooo... yeh maa ko kya hogaya jaake sab ko letter dikhadiya... stupid geet kya zaroorath thi letter likhne ki...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
wow gr8
muje geet ke purane epi yaad aa gaye.
madly wating for update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66

Niceee... wish the original GEET had also done smething like this.Then we could hav avoided all these MU & MC...and only MAANEET

Priya cant talk...wish her first words would be Maa seeing GEET...😍

update soon...thnx for pm...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
i loved ur ff...
add me too in the PM list...
& plzzz update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
Loved it,wowww,it's gr8. 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
PART 3

Maan was going out of hoahiarpur when suddenly one of the tyres got punchered

He started changing the tyre

Gurwinder and geet reached the bus station and bus was going to arrive in some time

As the bus was coming brij and his men came and one of them saw geet and they started going towards them

Geet was going towards the bus when she heard someone calling her she turned around and saw that it was brij she started shivering seeing him

Brij:ab tujhe koi nahi bacha sakta tu yaha se zinda bachke nahi jaiygi

Geet:nahi

She started to run but brij caught her and threw her on the floor blood was oozing from her head

Briz was going to attack her again when gurwinder came in between

Gurwinder:geet jaldi se bhag jaa

Geet:nahi

Gurwinder:jaldi jaa main inhe rokhta hoon

Geet:main nahi jaungi aap ko chor ke

Gurwinder:tu jaa warna yeh log tuhje maar denge

Geet:nahi

Gurwinder:jaa

Geet ran away from there gurwinder was trying to stop them but some how he failed

Brij and his men ran after geet

Maan was going to sit ih his jeep when a girl bumped into him it was geet

Geet:please mujhe bachao wo log mujhe maar denge

Maan:jao yaha se

Geet:please

Maan:jao

Geet turned and saw that they were coming so she ran from there towards the jungle

Brij:wo rahi jungle ki taraf ja rahi hai chalo aaj wo zinda bachke nahi jaayegi

They went after geet meanwhile maan heard everything

Maan:kahi yeh log uss larki ko sachi mein toh nahi maar denge nahi lekin maar bhi sakte hai un sabke haath main talwar bhi thi agar usse kuch ho gaya toh

He ran in search of geet

Brij caught geet and all the men were surrounding her

Brij:ab tu kaha jaegi

He caught her by her hair and started slapping her

Geet:please nahi and she started to run when brij hit the sword on her hand

She screamed as it was paining and one of the men covered her mouth and they started hitting on her body with sword first her arm then her back her legs

She started to become and was not able to stand so two of the men caught her and brij was now going to cut her neck when the sword was stopped by maan brij turned to see who it was

Brij:oye chor meri talwar

Maan:nahi chorunga

Brij:main tujhe bhi maar dalunga

Maan:teri itni himmat nahi hai with that he punced hard on his face

He starts to beat everyone and brij was now collapsed

His men came with the sword to beat maan when he took out his gun

Maan:jao yaha se warna main tum par goli chala dunga

They left taking brij when one of the men said

Men:abhi to hum jaa rahe hai lekin hum wapas zaroor aayenga

He rushes back to Geet, and tries to wake her up.

Maan:utho utho he pats her cheek

He sees that her face was covered with some strands so he pushes a strand of hair off her forehead, and she wakes up. When she realises it's Maan, she hugs him and started mummering

Geet:please mujhe mat maro main wapas aisa kuch nahi karungi please

Maan sees that she is crying so he hugs her back and tries to console her

Maan:main hoon na tumhe koi bhi kuch nahi kahega

After some times she stops crying and faints in his arm due to weakness

Maan sees that she has fainted and blood was oozing from most of her body part

Maan:kitna khoon beh raha hai main isse hospital bhi nahi leja sakta aur jeep bhi bohut dur hai mujhe isse koi safe jagah par le jaana hoga

He carries her in his arm and starts searching for some place

He sees a small hut and ask if anyone was there and no one replied so h

e sees a door,and kicks it with his legs, and sees haystacks everywhere.

He gently places Geet on one, trying not to cause her too much pain, and closes the door and finds a lantern and lights it up, and holds it up and h

e started staring at geet and turns away realizing what is he doing.

He sits in one corner when and looks at her face and starts thinking why did they want to kill her

She started murmmering and maan went near to hear what is she trying to tell but couldn't and sees that she is whimpering with pain

He took out his hanky and tied it around her arm but that was not enough so he tore his shirt and started bandaging her

He decides to go when geet woke up with a jerk and started crying and she sees maan and hugged him

She looked up at him and leaves her and stands up to leave

Maan:bahar mat jao wo log abhi tak nahi gaye

She sits there near him but not to close and sleeps

Maan sees a that her head is moving here and there so he shifts a bit and she keeps her head on his shoulder

She snuggles more close to him and rests her head on his chest and hugged him by his waist and maan's hand automatically went towardsher waist and they slept

Sun rises and rays fall on there face

Maan wakes up and sees how they were sleeping cuddling each other and he starts waking her up

She wakes up sees how she was sleeping and gets embarrassed

Geet:umm sorry and starts getting up but falls in his lap due to weakness

Geet:sorry

Maan helps her getting up and they leave the hut

They reach the jeep

Maan:bolo tumhara ghar kaha hai main tumhe drop kar dunga

Geet:mera koi ghar nahi hai

Maan:kya

Geet:aap mujhe bus stop par chor dejiye

Maan:par tum kaha jaa rahi ho

Geet:delhi

Maan:main bhi wahi jaa raha hoon main tumhe drop kar dunga

Geet:nahi

Maan murmmered:ziddi larki

Geet:kuch kaha

Maan:nahi

They reached the bus station and geet left towards the washroom to change her dress without saying any thing

Maan:ajeeb larki hai and he left

Geet came out wearing full sleeved clothes and covered her face with dupatta so that no one can notice her

Geet was sitting in the bus and was thinking about her family

She reached delhi and came out of the bus

Suddenly a girl called her name she got scared and turned around and she suddenly hugged her

Pinky:oye geet kaisi hai tu

Geet:tum kaun ho

Pinky:bhool gayi

Geet:haan

Pinky:main pinky hoon main hoshiarput aati thin a

Geet:are haan sorry

Pinky:chal ghar chalte hai

Geet:par main kaise

Pinky:uncle ne phone kiya hai aur tu hamare saath hi rahegi

Geet:uncle

Pinky:tere papa ne ab chal ghar chalte hai

Geet:chal

They left towards her house

PRECAP:GEET IN KC

Edited by sweety.2 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
Gr8 update
Yayy maan saved geet
Awww both slept cuddling each other
Cont soon Xx...
Can't w8 4 geet in KC
Thx 4 the PM

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