~~MADE FOR EACH OTHER~~Pt 18 pg 137 Note pg 145 - Page 58

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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing FF!!
Aww priya is so cute!!
And she can talk now!!
She was calling maan dusht dhanav lol
Maan & dr will not allow priya to meet geet!!
Aww that's not fair...poor priya!!
Can't wait for the update!!
Please continue soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
am in Q... waiting! for long update!😉
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PART 16

[note:the doctor and maan's mother were friends and so maan will call her auntyan dher name is naina]

They reached the hospital and priya was constantly calling her mama and maan was getting irritated by her.They entered the cabin

Naina:namaste dadi hello maan

Dadi:namaste beta

Maan:hello aunty

She noticed that priya was in someone else's arm

Naina.:yeh kaun hai pointing toward geet

Priya:meli mama

Naina was shocked listening to her

Naina:dadi priya kabse bolne lagi

Dadi:aaj se hi issi liye hum isse lekar aaye hai aur yeh geet hai maan ki secretory priya isse bas mama mama bula rahi hai

Naina:priya yeh kaun

Priya:meli mama

Naina:aapki mama hai

Priya:meli mama achi usht neee

Naina:dusht nahi hai

Priya:papa usht aanav itna bara showing with her hands

Maan was boiling and his face was red.Dadi and naina were trying not to giggle but they could not stop themselves and started laughing

Maan:dadiii

Dadi:kya hua

Maan:aap hansh rahi hai

Dadi:toh sahi toh keh rahi hai

Naina:priya aapke papa dusht danav kyu hai

Priya:papa mama par chinnaya mama kaha usht aanav papa usht aanav pliya par chinnaya(papa ne mama par chillaya mama ne kaha dusht danav papa dusht danav priya par bhi chillaya)

Maan angrily:geeet

Priya angrily:aaiii

Everyone were shocked listening to her as she was literally shouting at maan

Maan:priya kya kaha tumne

Priya:aaaiii

Maan:geeet tumne mere baare main aur kya kya kaha hai

Geet:ku..kuch n'nahi si'sir

Maan:geeet bolo

Priya:aaaiii mama mat chinnaya(aye mama par mat chillao)

Geet:priya aise koi chillate hai kya

Priya:heee(haan)

Geet:priya maan sir ko sorry bolo

Priya:neee

Geet:priya apne papa ko sorry bolo

Priya:neee neee

Geet kept her down and turned towards the other side

Geet:aap jab tak apne papa ko sorry nahi bolte main aapse baat nahi karungi

Priya:mama sholly

Geet:?

Priya: mama sholly

Geet:mujhe nahi apne papa ko kaho

Priya went towards maan

Priya:papa sholly

Maan:?

Priya:papa sholly

Maan turned his face towards the other side

Priya:pliya ne sholly papa sholly

Maan was not listening to her and then she used her weapon

Priya: wouaaa wouaaa😭😭

Maan turned towards her side and saw that she was crying

Priya:sholly *sob* pliya *sniff* *sob* papa ko *sob* *sob* sholly bola

Maan could not see her tears and picked her in his arms

Priya:pliya sholly

Maan:main kabhi apne baby se naaraz ho sakta hoon kya

Priya:baby kon

Maan:aap

Priya:main

Maan:haan

Priya:main pliya

Maan:par aap toh meri choti si baby ho na

Priya:sholly

Maan:theek hai

Maan:aunty aap iska check up kar lijiye

Naina:haan chalo priya

Priya:neee

Naina:beta chalo

Priya:neee mama paas pliya mama paas

Maan:priya andar jao

Priya:mama saath

Naina:theek hai aapki mama bhi jaigi

Priya:aap achi

They went inside and naina did the check up.They came out after sometime.

Dadi:geet priya ko bahar lekar jao

Geet:ji dadi

Priya:bii biii(bye bye) waving a hands at everyone and while she was going out she struck her tongue towards maan.Maan was smiling at her innocence.Geet went out taking priya in her arms

Dadi:sab theek hai na

Naina:haan sab kuch theek hai

Maan:achanak se priya kab se bolne lagi

Naina:priya geet ke saath kab se hai

Maan:ek mahine lekin aap geet ke baare main kyu puch rahi hai

Naina:mujhe sab kuch batao wo priya se kaise mili thi

Maan told everything about geet and priya.Dadi was shocked listening to him

Naina:ab mujhe samaj main aa raha hai priya ko geet main apni ma dikhti hai geet ke pyar ke kaaran hi aaj priya bol rahi hai maan jo keh raha hai uss se mujhe pata chalta hai ki priya aur geet ke beech jo bonding hai yeh bonding waise hi hai jo ek maa aur ek bacche ke beech main hai geet ko yeh baat pata nahi hai kyunki agar priya ke jagah aur koi bhi hota toh wo bhi usse aise hi pyar karti iss liye priya jitney geet ke paas rahegi utna hi uske liye acha hoga aur wo achi tarah se bol paegi aur jis tarah priya geet ke liye chilla rahi thi uss se pata chalta hai ki priya bohut possessive hai geet ke liye

Dadi: achi tarah se bol paegi matlab

Naina:priya abhi jaise bol rahi hai wo do saal tak ke bacche bolte hai priya ne abhi se bolna shuru kiya hai iss liye priya ko kam kam se kam do saal aur lagenge achi tarah se bolne main aur iski language bhi improve ho jaegi

Maan:aur sab theek hai na

Naina:haan

Dadi:maan tum bahar jao mujhe naina se kuch baat karni hai

Maan:kya baat

Dadi:tum jao priya ke paas main aati hoon

Maan went out and started recalling what naina said

Maan thinking:mujhe priya ko geet se dur rakhna hoga aaj uske kaaran priya mere paas bhi nahi aati hai aur geet ne priya ko mere baare main pata nahi kya kya bola hoga jo wo mujhe bolti hai priya bhi copy karne lag gayi haan main kal se priya ko office nahi lekar aaunga

Inside the cabin

Naina:dadi aap ko kuch baat karni hai

Dadi:haan main geet ke baare main puch rahi thi

Naina:geet bilkul sahi hai maan ke liye aur priya ne bhi usse apna liya hai

Dadi:aur geet ko maan se darr bhi nahi lagta

Naina:matlab

Dadi told her about the mandir incident

Naina:matlab priya yeh sab geet se hi sikha hoga

Dadi:haan jab geet ne kaha hoga toh shaayad priya ne sunn liya hoga

Naina:aap maan se baat karegi shaadi ke liye

Dadi:abhi nahi pehle mujhe inhe paas lana hoga

Naina:par kaise

Dadi:kuch sochna hoga

Dadi left the cabin.Outside maan was sitting with geet and priya

Dadi:chalo ghar chalte hai

Maan:haan dadi priya chalo

Maan tried to take priya from geet but priya was also not leaving her.Geet was trying to leave her but she was holding her tight

Maan:geet choro na

Geet:sir maine toh kab ka isse chor diya hai priya hi mujhe nahi chor rahi hai

Maan:priya chalo

Priya:neee neee neee

Maan:priya

Priya:pliya mama saath

Geet:priya mujhe ghar jaana hai

Priya:pliya mama saath ghar

Geet:par

Priya:neee

Geet:sir aap kuch kahiye na

Maan:mere kehne se kya hoga agar priya tumhari baat nahu manegi toh meri baat kaise manegi

Dadi:geet tum humare saath ghar chalo

Geet:par dadi

Dadi:kuch der ke liye chalo phir tum aa jana

Geet:theek hai

They left for khurana mansion

Precap:maan not taking priya to office and priya getting sick

PMS LATER


Edited by sweety.2 - 14 years ago
sb1412 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww...priya is sooo sweett...love priya's talk...
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nice part...seems like bound b/n priya nd geet is quite strong...awesome update...cont soon..

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Posted: 14 years ago
priya is so cute and possessive - papa ki tarah!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Priya very cute
dadi is great she will do some thing
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
man priya and geet r best together...
priya copying geet when scolding maan...
maan bahut selfish hain...
sirf apne baare mein sochtha hain...
doc ne kaha let priya b with geet per nahin yeh toh apne mann ki malik hain...
since priya is getting more attached to her than him he wants his own daughter to suffer and putting her at risk...
i want him to feel very very bad when priya falls sick bcoz of him...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update...
Priya is so adorable...<3
cont soon... ^_^
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww
geet n priya bond is sooo strong
n luv when priya tells mama
n precap oh no priya ill

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