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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#81

hey really different !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
looking fwd..........

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Anu

@anuandavi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#82

Oh my my. U started a new FF. Nice concept. I am all for it. Do continue. I am a little scared for the little girl. Make her man a bit sensible and soft at heart with her.

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Ash1991

@Ash1991

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#83

feeling sry fr the little grl.....do continue.......

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KissTheSky

@KissTheSky

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#84

plz add me to ur PM list!😳
love ur writing!

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sweet cherry

@sweet cherry

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#85

it reli interesting

but only if u made geet bout 15 instead of 11

do continue

it sound interesting

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JayaR

@JayaR

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#86

that was a shocker......

i really wouldnt want to see this story coming out as Maaneet characters....but still..i hope they are not heart breaking......

she is jst 11 and he is 20......god!!! at least he could have used his brain.....im sure this guy is unpadh(illiterate) ...

though the story liine is good....and something about social issues......so i would back u up.....

go ahead girl.....

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ixiaa

@ixiaa

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#87

This ff is a success

so many comments........positive as well as negative...........U have made ppl comment on ur ff keyama. Its just great. Now about ur story............ it certainly is very....shocking........none d less but....true. Child marraiges r still taking place in dis part of d world.....but changes r happening.

plz continue d story....... just few qs

will maan have a -tive charactar?

will geet grow up to b strong n independent girl?

will geet be able to love maan if he is rude to her?

will maans character be like brij in d serial?

Plz update Asap