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Posted: 14 years ago
sounds scary 😔
if it is a starting what will happen in furtur parts😭😭
may that girl is safe now
althiugh it just startted i can't imagin what she must have been suffered
hats off to that girl who survive after all these & creat awareness about that👏
hats off to you too who have guts to potrait this side of society👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: indepgal

my god! i am shocked at this update ...r u OUT OF YOUR MIND???????? writing an FF involving the rape of a 11 yr old child???? this is even worse than your other FF "Remorse" where the heroine was abused/ raped and verbally assaulted by the so called hero...i also remember your comment on another FF which depicted Geet being raped by Maan and u stating that did not constitute a rape...now, after reading this FF, i say you have gone too far! ....U r NOT ALLOWED TO TAKE SUCH LIBERTIES IN THE NAME OF CREATIVITY!! there has to be a sense of responsibility when u write...IF is an open forum that can be accessed by one and all..do you know how many peodopiles , child abusers etc could be visiting this orum and be tittilated and encouraged reading your disgusting FF????
i take strong offense to the premise on which this FF is based and would ask that you delete this update and change the nature of this FF else i will be reporting it to the moderator.....and NO , i SHALL conveniently NOT ignore the FF and turn a BLINd EYE as i feel very strongly about this!!

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i think you need to understand this piece of writing, by analyzing it outside the box; not as being a geet-maan story or any ff story.... u need to read as a mirror to rural and tribal and unfortunately REAL India....
Kyama is only trying to narrate a real story ... there is no misuse of creativity, its only narration with little changes, so to reduce the pain and the terror....
keeping ur eyes and ears closed to the real problems and facts of the society will not change face of mankind....

if u feel that this story offends you .... you are very much free to shut ur laptop or stop reading this fiction....
but ur cant stop people from bringing the facts in front of people or raising their voices against the inhuman behavior....

i would appreciate if the people read such stuff and try to realize the real problems faced by some unfortunate beings rather than gossiping about their b/f, g/f, bosses and other irrational stuffs....

nothing to offend anyone... but i think its a high time to face reality....
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Posted: 14 years ago
woohoo a new FF
Congratz
Feel sorry 4 geet as she is only 11 & she'z been forced 2 hav sex poor girl got no support wiv her
Sad 2 know that this really happened in real life
Cont soon Xx...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Congrats on a new FF!
interesting intro!
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Posted: 14 years ago
I am scared. Shocked. But this is the reality. I am so happy that you have the gut to bring such a topic up. Hats to you.
I am waiting
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: indepgal

my god! i am shocked at this update ...r u OUT OF YOUR MIND???????? writing an FF involving the rape of a 11 yr old child???? this is even worse than your other FF "Remorse" where the heroine was abused/ raped and verbally assaulted by the so called hero...i also remember your comment on another FF which depicted Geet being raped by Maan and u stating that did not constitute a rape...now, after reading this FF, i say you have gone too far! ....U r NOT ALLOWED TO TAKE SUCH LIBERTIES IN THE NAME OF CREATIVITY!! there has to be a sense of responsibility when u write...IF is an open forum that can be accessed by one and all..do you know how many peodopiles , child abusers etc could be visiting this orum andbe tittilated and encouraged reading your disgusting FF????


i take strong offense to the premise on which this FF is based and would ask that you delete this update and change the nature of this FF else i will be reporting it to the moderator.....and NO , i SHALL conveniently NOT ignore the FF and turn a BLINd EYE asi feel very strongly about this!!


Do u think keyma supports all this ...big no
She is shocked beyond words herself with all this .. Here she is trying to tell us some thing real issue & trying to seek our help to solve this matter...
If it ever can be..
Even in remorse she tried to potray the reality
But every one is forcing her to make it a happy ending
If she wanted she could have written a lot over their wedding night
But she didn't ... Because it is not about all that.... It is abt this poor girl whom her keyma's heart cries for.. At least listen to her bit of story then take a decision
She is not encouraging she wants us to fight for it!!!
Wat if the wrong guy reads is..
All good readers should write aptly wrong abut the ma'am here... Should say *****
Then they will know wat we mean ... All those say good story not encourage the maan here but to keyma's writing!!! To appreciate her efforts to bring in the reallty so convincingly
My plea is give her chance & take it in the right spirit
She wants justice for the silent cry of geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
i second u muskan....
keya... its really painful to know that its a true story....
in the intro it self feeling disgusted.... dont know hw that lady whom the story is abt might hav gone thru!....
i hav ful confidence in u and ur writing skills....
wil pray for the silent protagonist though!
pls cont..
we all are with u...🤗
Edited by MaanEET_FAN - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: MaanEET_FAN

<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="2">i second u muskan....</font>

<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="2">keya... its really painful to know that its a true story....</font>
<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="2">in the intro it self feeling disgusted.... dont know hw that lady whom the story is abt might hav gone thru!....</font>
<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="2">i hav ful confidence in u and ur writing skills....</font>
<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="2">wil pray for the silent protagonist though!</font>
<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="2">pls cont..</font>
<font face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="2">we all are with u...🤗</font>


Exactly!!
I like that word silent protogainst
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Posted: 14 years ago
the update was good, no doubt about that!
but, the fact that this happened in real is disturbing😲
also, to see maan in this light is not a very happy state😭
but, would love to see the story unfold...pls continue...i will be off IF for about a month;will read when i am back....pls keep sending pms.
thanks
Love
Swati
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Posted: 14 years ago

wowowo wot n FF i lov it! sacaryy!! poor geet .....mera maan kho fir se vilian bana diya ehhehee

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