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BluntlySpeaking

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

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siroilily

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

Pls continue. Hav faith in u.

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samiakhanom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Pls don't change ur story line. tum ne jo vi likha woh 100% truth hay, asa hota hay, mere ek aunt ke sath vi asai hua tha& now she is 27 but still she can't forget her suffering nights .aunt ki age jab 10 thi tab aunt ki sadi hui thi, that time unki menstrual-cycle vi nehi thi, aue sadi ki 12 sal baad uncle aunt ko divorce dia tha & now she stays with me, mane jab aunt ko tumhare is FF ke bare me bataya tab woh rorahi thi,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, u r really a true Writer of every once heart

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BluntlySpeaking

@BluntlySpeaking

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

yes, i did..coz i was just repeating my thougts..no point...

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aali

@18mypride

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

keym plz continue.... one word is enough... v TRUST u!

waitng for more updates....

agar reallity mein kisiko madad karni hai toh crime hone se pehle unlogon ko educatekaro. ke sahi kya hai aur ghalat kya hai... agar kuch nahien karsakte toh- jo likhni unki himmath badhavo....

am sorry .... plz keym waiting ....

of course am greedy and naughty i want some cute maaneet romantic moments... chilpil yaar..🤗

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swetha10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

OMG scary one.. looks interesting.. poor girl.. continue soon

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known

@simi91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#78

wow fire doing awesome job to write this it happen in real life i saw it me my dad went africa two yrs vacation i saw 12yrs married two almost

a man in 40yrs

we were shock she take all house

whole so happy that showing the

awereness into ur FF

i'm sure the reader shock but they

i'll realize soon it happen in real life

keep the good

amazing concept👏👏👏

lovely update

pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnn

thanks yu so much

my dear

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Dilsay

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Posted: 14 years ago

#79

I was really very upset when I first read your update and infact I was the first one who started bashing for even plotting the story..........

We r very fortunate that we live in a world where we r not faced with situations like this unlike many others who go through traumas right from their very birth.................

Such evil issues r common in many parts of the world.It is a shame to the humanity that even today minor girls r married to trees,holy books etc.

I know to pen down such an issue on this platform u need lot of guts .............hats off to u for doing so 👏

I am so sad to know that this minor girl who is now 21 is on her death bed..................I sincerly pary for her health and early recovery.

Keya go ahead and unfold the story...I am eagerly and patiently waiting for your updates.

Yes I would like to know as a reader what happens next to this little girl and why is she on her death bed today......and then hopefully a happy ending in writing as well as in real.

Keep up your good work.

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