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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow...
I think he'll be maan...ryt???
Omg can't wait n plz pm me...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
awesome update
loved it
precap sounds good
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
muahhhhhhhhhhhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz add me in ur pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
Excellent writing Zoha.. Keep writing.. I am loving it. 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks a lot for you love and support.
i really need it..
plz also invite your friend for my ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
the intro interesting
love all parts
fabulous update
pls cont soonnnnnnnn
thank yuuuuuuuu
pls do pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey read ur both update loved it....
ye drunk man may b maan bt cant say may b possible dav too....or annie's husband....
well thnx 4 pm
waiting 4 nxt part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting!
continue sooN!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 3

When Savita left the hospital geet sat in her cabin and start to read the file and collect all the information she required and made suitable notes she needed. "Aaahhh I think it's enough for today."

KHURANA MANSION

Savita was sitting in her room and thinking about geet. She was having a feeling that geet can only cure Annie. A smile crept on her lip when she thought about geet beauty, "she is so much like an angel". Her thought were disturbed by knock on her door.

Savita: "come in"

A girl came running and sat beside her.

Savita:" hello Annie. So how was your day?"

Annie: "mama it was just nice" she said sadly and pout. Savita smiled "why beta doesn't you like your toys which I bought"? Annie looked down sadly "mama I like them a lot but there is no one with whom should I play". Savita put her hand on her head and says: "beta you know what? ..Now I think soon you will have someone to play with."Annie got excited "really mama... whose it?? Will she really play with me??

Savita:"yes beta I am sure she will"

Annie:" wow mama I'm so happy. I will just go and clean my room. What if my friend come and my room is so dirty... she will not like it' so I will go and clean it and sleep soon " she smile widely and excitedly went to her room.

Savita sat there and start to think the dreadful day which snatch all her happiness. A tear escape from her eye thinking about the accident which took place 3 years ago, which snatched her husband, and maturity of Annie, her brain has stopped working. She is 19 year old but behaves like a 5 year old girl. The happiness of khurana family went too far away with that single accident. Her younger son is no more seen in the house and the elder one just busy with his business. Savita took the frame of her family and cried by remembering the happiness which are gone far away from them. She always prays to god to bring the happiness back to their family. She tried to bring a bahu but his sons never pay attention toward her. That's why she tries to bring Annie's life back to normal. "Maybe she can bring something back" her mind then again went to geet and her smile "I don't know why but this girl brings so much hope in my heart in just a few minutes".

Three days have passed. It was midnight, geet have researched the entire imp think for Annie case and she was ready." hmm... now I just need to call them." She completed her work and walk to the balcony for fresh air. Just then her eyes fell on the image down the balcony. There was a boy lying in middle of the road. Without thinking she rushed out the building and ran toward him. She lifted his head toward her. He was not conscious. She called him many time but he was not reacting. She search here and there and found a bear bottle beside his leg. "So he is drunk" she patted his cheek and again called him but no reply. An idea came in her mind and she ran in building again and catches the water bottle and again ran outside beside the boy and throw water at him. After few minute he starts to squeeze his eyes.

He was having a blurry image but able to see a girl after few minute. He tries to stand up but fail. His head was paining a lot. He holds his head and again tries to get up. This time geet help him to get up. He was still holding his head with one hand.

Geet: "are you ok?? What are you doing here at this time of night?? Where do you live?? What is your name? Why were you lying here in middle of road?" She asked in one breath.

Boy: "you talk so much''' can you please make me sit? He said with lots of difficulty because of high headache.

Geet help him to her room. She herself doesn't know why she was bringing a stranger in her room in this time of night. But she considered it necessary. She laid him in the bed and brings for him lemon water. "Here take this. This will make you feel better" handing him a glass.

A boy takes the glass and drinks it. After some time he goes to a washroom and vomit there. He came out cleaning his face; his eyes fell on geet who was still standing at her place with worried expression. He goes near her." Thanks miss" he forwards his hand to her. She hesitantly takes his hand. "It's geet" he smiles at her gesture "hi geet'. It's Vikrant ... nice to meet you." She smirk "not a nice way to meet"

Vikrant chuckled "ok geet I think now I should go." He starts to walk to the door. "But I don't think you can walk as you are still not fully out of alcohol" he was already outside. "It's ok I can manage. Well thanks again" she smile and say bye to him.

She makes her way again to her room. "Don't know why people drink so much if they can't handle it" she changes her cloth and lie down. She has to wake up early as she has to meet anvesha tomorrow.

Recap: MAAN SINGH KHURANA...

NEXT: PART 4

Edited by zoha25 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thnks sweety.. hope im doing it gud...

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