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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
congratz on ff sweetie
awesome update
loved it loadzzz
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great start zoha. Congratulations on your first ff. I see you are taking this FF DMG style 😆. I guess we all love DMG 😛.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#23

Though it was bit short it is really nice

Plz continue soon! waiting!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
nice one.. sounds interesting.. add me onto ur pm list.. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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part 2

She goes to caf, orders a sandwich and a black coffee and sat n a corner to eat... After sometime, she feels someone's hand on her shoulder, she turn around to find a group of people watching her with surprise expression. As she stood up but become shocked because of the tight hug from all of them.

Geet:" ahhh' guy's move I can't breathe". She managed to speak n very low voice due to not able to tight hug.

All of them let go of her.

"Oh wow geet what a surprise yar. Tu yaha kitne time baad ayi hai aur bataya b nahi" said Aryan.

"Han geet this z not fair u should have at least came to meet us". Said jia angrily.

Geet:" ufho don't b so dramatic just came few time ago. Was doing my breakfast. . So I thought I should meet u after that".

Gautam came forward n put his arm around her and said:" its mean we will have to meet some high class people haina". He said excitedly.

Anjali came forward to geet and ask. "Is this file of the patient?" she asked while taking the file from her hand to read the name.

Geet:"yes anji it is".

Aryan: whose it? He asked to anjali curiously after seeing a shock face of her love.

Anjali: "It's... It's... Oh my god' guys it's the KHURANAASSSS" anjali said excitedly while jumping in joy...

gautam: what??? The khuranas???? His eyes popped out.

Jia just jump at geet and hug her very tightly,

"Oh my god geet Teri to lottery lag gahi yar." she said hugging her tightly...

"Aaahhh... Jia plz move ... She said and shoo her away from herself...

"Uufffhhh... Jia u should loose some wait... I can't handle so much weigh". She said laughing at jia who fumed with anger and hit her arm...

"Ok now both shut up "anjali said coming in front of geet holding her by shoulder." Geet dear you don't know who the khuranas are'??? Haina? She asked with the smirked.

Geet: "Well I know they have a huge business and the are some rich people"

Aryan: "Oh what an info geet "giving a high five to her. To which all the other just giving them an angry glare.

Geet: Ok. Ok. Guys now tell me what's so special about these khuranas" she said annoyingly.

Anjali:" Geet they are the biggest business class people in Delhi. And u knows what the special part is"? She said excitedly.

Geet: "What"? Rolling her eyes.

Jia:" Geet there are two sons of khuranas who are most eligible bachelor off town' Wow they are hottie" folding both her hand she start dreaming.

Geet: "So what can I do if they have what so ever"?

Jia: "Sweaty u don't do anything but just make us meet any of them who came to meet u for their sissy"

Geet: "Don't u worry jia Cox none of the bachelor z coming here. But the mother of the patient will come at any moment"

Anjali: "Oh... now that's sad" making sad face.

Just then there was announcement for geet.

Geet:" Ok guys time to go. Will meet u all later". She hugged all of them n rushed to her cabin.

She entre in her cabin where a beautiful lady smile at her. And raise her hand for shake.

Lady:" hello. I'm savita khuranas".

Geet:" hi I'm dr geet. U can call me geet". Shaking her hand.

Savita:" hello geet ". Please ma'am has a seat.

sitting n her seat she ask:" so u r the mother han".

Savita:" yes geet I'm mother of Annie"

Geet ": Annie??"

Savita:" oh Annie... Anvesha your patient. She said smiling at her confuse face.

"Oh she z so beautiful... Never seen such a beauty"... Thought Savita.

Geet": well madam I have not yet read your daughter's file. So when I will read it then only I will be able to tell you that wither I will accept your case or not".

Savita:" please doctor geet. Please help me. My daughter really needs help". She starts to have tears in her eyes.

Geet stood up n went in front of her, hold her hands and say "please ma'am doesn't cry everything will be ok. I just have to go through the history of your daughter n it will take time. I have to research and many other things. Which can take time? So I can't reply u know"? She says wiping her tears.

Savita: "but please don't say no. you are only our hope now"

Geet: "I know... you don't worry... but just give me time. "

Savita: "ok... but plz do fast"

Geet: "madam if you waited for so many year then I think you can also wait for some time... im sure I will ust take your minimum time" she said smiling at the worried face of savita.

Savita: "thanks dr thank you so much"

Geet: you're welcome' I will call you when I will finish all the research. Will you please give me some contact number?"

Savita:" oh sure why not "she gives her the number and tell. "It's my son number, you please call him and he will surely be here". She said and gives her a card.

Geet:" thank you." She standup and shake her hand with Savita.

Precap: geet alone in street with a drunk man. ;) guess with whom??
NEXT: PART 3
Edited by zoha25 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
g8 update
pls update soon
may be maan
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27

nice update

the precap is good too
continue soon
love
Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
wow awsome one yaar....loved it !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29

nice,,,,,

thanks for the pm and the precap looks nice and hope it's dev or vicky

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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
Great part and thanks for pm😛

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