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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful update
loved maan geet sweet,romantic lunch and dance
maan teasing geet was coooooooooool
loved geet's shyness
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was flawless
beautiful & romantic
love it
cant wait to read more
of maaneet moment
pls cont soonnnnnn
thanks pm
thank yu dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome one...
Really enjoying their talkin'...
Waiting for more lovely scene
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 11

They remained in each other embraced for some time. He strokes her bare back softly. She starts to giggle which make him frowned. "What's wrong?" she giggled more and holds him tightly bringing her face near his neck. "I'm very ticklish... And you are tickling me." She whispered due to shyness and hides her face between his neck. He was silence for some moment and then smiles..."ohh" he starts to stroke more... "Maaann" she moaned and tries to move away but he brings her back close to him. And hold her by waist tightly with his both hand. They were again lost in each other eyes, in each other embrace hearing each other heartbeat. They were madly in love with each other... "You are not allowed to leave me today" she put her hand on his shoulder... "Only if you stop tickling me" he didn't say anything just kissed her head and hug her close to him... She rested her head on his chest hearing his rapid heartbeat... after some time he gently move little away from her. "I want to give you something"...she just smile at him... but her smile faded when she saw Maan taking her hand and slowly putting a beautiful diamond ring in her finger, she gasped looking at the ring in shock. "Maan?"... he kissed her hand and look at her " though our relation is very beautiful, but I wanted it to give it a name and make it more beautiful"he said with a sweet smile, geet was only looking at the ring still in shock... "Maan... You... I mean... Don't you think it's so soon?" he holds her shoulder but she didn't look at him. "Well for me... it's not soon" she still was not looking at him, Maan frowned. "Don't you like it?" she just hugs him tightly hiding her face in his chest. Maan waited for her answer but she was just holding his shirt at back tightly. After some time he feels his shirt getting wet. He frowned and lowered his head to see her face, but she was hiding it in his chest... "Geet... Are you crying?? He put his hand on her cheek and moves her face toward him. He become alert to see her face full of tears. "Mishti... what's wrong??"... "Maan... you shouldn't have done it" she said without looking at him. He cupped her face and makes her look at him. "Why?" she look at his worried face. "You... you don't know anything about me Maan". He only looks at her indicating to continue. "You don't know anything about my family, me... And your family... they also don't know about us"... He didn't say anything, just bring her close to his heart and hug her, rubbing her back. "Please stop crying first... it hurts to see you like this". They remained like this for few moment, she stop crying after sometime. He cupped her face. "Now look at me mishti" she looks at him with her red and teary eyes. He gently kisses her both eyes wiping the tears with his thumb. "First thing... I do know you geet, and that's enough for me... about your family... I know there must be a reason you left them, and I know you will surely tell me when you feel like telling... I don't have any problem with that... and last about my family... They will also be happy geet. Because my happiness will be there happiness." He stops for a moment then kissed her head."And remember one thing mishti... I cannot live without you... you have brought so much happiness in my life that I don't want to loose you for a second. I want you to be with me, beside me in all my life. I want you to be forever with me". She holds his hands which were on her cheek and finally smile crept on her lips...

She moves her arm around his neck and hugs him. She holds him tightly for a moment then kiss him on his neck and softly says. "I LOVE YOU." I took few moment for Maan to come back to reality... he lowered his head toward her. "What did you said?" She hides her face in his neck and repeat again. "I LOVE YOU MAAN." He was surprised by her sudden words. It was first time she told him openly that she love him. He was out of the world, his smile widened, he kissed her hair and come close to her hear. "I LOVE YOU TOO MISHTI" she move away to look at him. Both smile at each other. Their first confession... Maan lean forward to her face and wisphere. "Can I?"... she frowned not understanding, but next moment she froze when she feel his lips at hers. He waited for her response and was delighted to receive it. They were kissing softly and gently feeling each other. He was stroking her bare back and she brushes his hair. They were losing them self to each other, none wanted to be move away. Soon the kiss become passionate, he entered her mouth nibbling and sucking her lips. Geet could feel he was losing his control, she moves away from him. He saw her blushing hard with her cute red cheeks. He gently kisses them. "You taste so good." He wisphere teasing her, she hit his chest. "Maaann". He move behind her and quickly blindfolded her. "Maan... what are you doing?" he wisphere. "Sshhh mishti... lets go" they walk for some time holding hand still geet was blindfolded.

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He stopped walking and stand behind me holding me tightly from back. He always holds me tightly as if I will go away from him. Soon I felt cool breeze passing. Maan open my eyes, blinking little time I saw the most beautiful site in my life. There was a waterfall opposite of us and I was standing at the edge. It was so beautiful, so soothing to see such a calm view and feel the breath of your love close to you. I hold his hand tightly which were on my stomach and close my eyes to feel the moment. He really made this day special and memorable of my life. How can someone love you so much, endlessly, unconditionally? I looked at my ring again. He named our relation, without even knowing anything about me, without even telling anyone. He hold my hand from behind and kiss my finger, I smile at his gesture. I felt him kissing my neck; I shiver by his lips touching my skin. They were so soft, so deli gent there was so much love in his touch. His lips move from my neck to my shoulder. He was kissing continuously, making me crazy by his touch. I turn around to look at him putting my hands on his cheek. I wanted to thank him, for giving me so much happiness, love and care. I can't express my feeling in words. Words are so less to express, he is special to me, the most special person in my life, he doesn't needs my words. I just kissed him on his cheek thanking him, for being there with me, beside me. I cupped his face and the only words which came on my lips. "I promise to always be there for you. FOREVER WITH YOU." With that I sealed my lips with him...

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Precap: little twist... 😊

NEXT : PART 12

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Edited by zoha25 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
me 1st b4 d pm.
wow!!!!!!!!!!!! wat an amezing update dear. simply luved it.
u r an awesome writter.😊👏
Edited by maanluvsgeet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Beautiful confession

loved it

Beautiful and romantic part!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazinggggggggggg!!!
Loveeeeee the confession scene!!!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.


Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved all the 3 updates.....................
oh god he gave name to their relation......................loved it.............
that was the most romantic day out..............
uff u hv sasha in this.............just hope she gets thrashed by geet............when she tries to belittle geet......
woh no ab yeh twist kya hain..........acha hi toh chal raha tha............hey just now they r together pl yaar yeh twist wist karke unke beech mu mat karna
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome, beautiful part. loved it.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg its beautiful confession..........
lovely upd.......
superb.....
gud wrk...........
do continue soon......
thanx 4 pm......

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