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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 10

He only looks at her lovingly for a moment. "You have to promise me one thing first" she only smiles at him. "Fine..." he put his forehead on her. "Tomorrow you will have to spend full day with me only" she was surprised "but Maan... Annie?" '.. "No' no one else then me and you... I didn't have any time with you for long'" she can't deny him. "Theek hai' only you and me" he smile and kiss her forehead. She finally managed to go to hospital with the driver'..

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Next morning geet woke up with the bell on her door, she open the door to find the driver standing with a box in his hand.

Driver: "madam yea Saab ne diya. Aur kaha hai jaldi aane ko. Main aap ka intezaar kar raha hu bahar." She took the box and told him to wait' When she opens the box and finds a beautiful white sari with red thin border and a note top of it.

"Waiting for my mishti... please comes soon."

YOUR LOVE...

She smile reading it and go to change. She was shocked to see the blouse was backless with only a ribbon to tie at back and sleeves were so thin that even unable to be seen. She hesitantly wears the sari and covers herself with a shawl. When she step outside her flat driver was waiting for her, she silently sat in the car. The journey was quiet long. It took two hour to reach there.

When the car stop driver turn around. "Madam aap jaaye, Saab yahi hai." She nodded and makes her way outside. Driver reverses his car and went from there....She looks here and there but didn't find anyone. Suddenly she feels two hands encircling her'. hearing the heartbeat she knew who it would be. "Maan"... she smile and turn around to find him in white shirt and jeans. He was looking handsome she thought. Maan move the shawl away from her shoulder. Which make her shiver. "Don't worry mishti... here is no one then me and you"he slowly move the shawl away from her and smile at her which make her blush hard and she lower her lashes. "Lets me take you somewhere" with that he take her hand and start walking. After five minutes geet saw a beautiful house in front of her.

"It's my farm house" she looks at him and then the house again. "Maan its so beautifull."He holds her waist and start moving inside. When they reach inside, the whole house was decorated with candles only, there was no light and in middle a table was set.

Geet was mesmerized the beauty, she was unable to express her feeling. Her smile only widened. He makes her sit in a table and sit beside her. Geet was just looking at him, he take her hand and kiss it. "Don't you like it mishti?" he looks at her worried. "You don't have to do all this Maan..."

Maan: "I know sweaty' you like things to be simple'.. But I wanted this day to be special and memorable of our life..."she put her hand on his cheek. "You are the most special for me Maan" he kiss her palm. "And your smile is special for me' and I can do anything for it." He moves a little back. "Let's eat something'. And you know today I will feed you" he say with a sweet smile which make her smile to. He fed her lovingly and she fed him. They sat there and talk for some time about each other' "So mishti' what did you expect when I told you about spending the whole day with me" he says moving his hand on her bare back and come closer to her. She put her head in his shoulder. "Hmmm'. I was not at all thinking about it Maan' I trust you more than myself." She said looking at his eyes... he kiss her forehead and smile. "But I didn't expect this much" '.. "There's something else for you" she looks at him in surprised. "More??... But what?" he stood up, hold her hand and they went to another side of the house

There were red and white petal all around the ground and light was dim. "Maan what's this?" he only guide her to the middle where she can hear light music playing. He holds her by her waist and brings her closer to him. "How about a dance honey?" she only smile at him and move her arm around his neck. They just look at each other lovingly... lost in each other's love, there was pure love in their eyes and they can read it clearly. She put her head on his chest and closes her eyes to feel the beautiful moment. They remained in each other embraced for some time. He strokes her bare back softly. She starts to giggle which make him frowned. "What's wrong?" she giggled more and holds him tightly bringing her face near his neck. "I'm very ticklish'. And you are tickling me." She whispered due to shyness and hides her face between his neck. He was silence for some moment and then smiles..."ohh" he starts to stroke more... "Maaaann" she moaned and tries to move away but he brings her back close to him. And hold her by waist tightly with his both hand. They were again lost in each other eyes, in each other embrace hearing each other heartbeat. They were madly in love with each other'.

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NEXT : PART 11

Precap: there more going to come'..😉

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Edited by zoha25 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ossum one.................i liked the home which u suits frm them
i may hope to listen those 3 magical words frm them plssssssssssssssss😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful romantic part. loved it.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
i like dthe way u mayke them to be...........a beautiful farm house ..........pls make them to say those 3 magical words plsssssssssss😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely romantic update
continue soon
love
Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
thats beautiful, never thought of him having so many ideas
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Posted: 14 years ago

Wowwwwwwww

Lovely part
Love it
Mauhhhhhhhhh


Sorry yaar i'm not able to presss like buttons due to some error but really i love ur update
Alottttt
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful part. Waiting for next part.................
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful and romantic update
loved it..waiting 4 next update.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hilaaaa!! Romantic.......

PLzzzz UPDATE SOOn!! can't wait!!



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