Walking With YOU (MN).chp25...12/10..pg 143

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mayur_eternal

@mayur_eternal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#531

Lovelyupdate Fiza..
I felt as if I was part of a real marriage, all the rituals and customs so vividly described😳
Waiting eagerly for the next part😛

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Mamoona

@Silent.Dreamer

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#532

ist of all Fiza hats of to you for writing all this in complete detail, Using verses u portray the emotions and Rituals very well, its not easy for girl to leave all this behind, and Mayank's dad was so right that he should keep balance btw his Mom and wife after Marriage Because it happens in every Family, and Samrat and Mayank's Brotherly and Teasing Moments were very cute and nice, lotto dialogs of mayank were so hilarious, iss ka kuch nahi ho sakta lolz, Mayank was so good as she is girl so its not easy for her, and sweet ritual was so sweet lolz, and Finally they are Together and Mayanks wait is over, Fiza outstanding Part and dnt know what to say more simply hats to You and Waiting for next part, and Ramadhan Mubarak to You too and this is longest comment ever..😆

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nerdndproud

@nerdndproud

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#533

i can't xplain it in words...so i'm not trying

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556195

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Posted: 14 years ago

#534

hey fiza api🤗just started reading the parts i missed😳

part 5 and 6

OMG!! mai gayab kya hui ye dono itne comfortable hogaye😳
kitan sweet sweet hai sab kuch..it is nothing like fairy tell but yet it feels so amazing..always there is a smile on my lips while reading it😳
and the way you write it seriously took me to the dream land😍
and 25th december your parents wedding anniversary?..😆 its my birthday too😳..and now mayur anniversay too😃
will comment for the other parts as i read them😛

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556195

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Posted: 14 years ago

#535

part 7 and 8

OMG!!!😍
fiza api..you know what i want to marry too and asap🤣🤣
well now coming to parts...just one word beautiful!❤️
amazing..🤗...and specially that honeymoon part🤣..really mayank is so impatient you see😆
and picture sending part...that was just awww😍..i wonder what must have nupur's feeling knowing that mayank saw her before😆and seeing that pic😍..she must be feeling blessed to have such an awesome person as her life partner😳
i need to read them today only..cant wait😆

Edited by vampire_girl - 14 years ago

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556195

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Posted: 14 years ago

#536

chapter 9 and 10

mayank is a dream guy of any girl😳
he is such a sweet personality...sometime thora thora flirt sometime gusse se bhara bag😆...just loved his character...and also respect it!
and chat chat wala i dead is great..mayank i am with you pls continue🤣..and samrat..uff..!! again his one liners😆
i just dont want to get up..aisa lagraha hai bas parti jaun parti jaun😳 you truly have the ability to take the readers in dream world!😍though its very close to reality😳

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556195

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Posted: 14 years ago

#537

part 11

amazing..amazing and amazing!!!...🤗i so much love you for this ff <3
this is one of the best i have read so far...truly beautiful api😳

and i am gonna comment on the rasam wale part individually cause you wrote them so gorgeously how can i be kanjus in comments..will be back with elaborated comment...now gonna read the rasams😳

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#538

beautiful update

luved each n every bit of the update...mind blowing

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Sanchari

@--Sanchu--

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#539

wow a very grandweddding...

very nice part...

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556195

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Posted: 14 years ago

#540

chapter 12

aawww...haldi ki rasam😳
that was so amazing...i was feeling as if i was actually attending a haldi😆
and uo kalawa nahi hota api..phansi ka fanda hota hai jo gale me nahi haath me bandha jata hai😆🤣...totally enjoyed the haldi🤗
mai thora late hogayi warna mai bhi tayiar shayiar hoke ati😳😆..koi nahi ab dance kar leti hoon..by the way awesome part api🤗
loved it <3

Edited by vampire_girl - 14 years ago