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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#551

Originally posted by: 18anila1
awww 😊
loved it lodsss

APIII mind blowing update👏👏👏

aap se hum aur kya kahe SUBHAN ALLAH...aap kya likhti hain...👏

n NIKAH ka sab kuch apne itni bariki se samjhaya hain ke hum to fidaa ho gaye apne Fiza Api per...😉🤗

MashAllah apko kisi ki nazar na lagey...🤗

sab kuch itne acche se apne likha hain ke humey laga hum sach main nikah mein shamil ho rahe hain...😳

n sare emotions itne acche se apne bataya hain...👍🏼

sach mein humey bahttt pasand aya...👏

awww ADI bhai sach mein bahut acche hain jistarha se unhone mayank ko tease kiya phir ammii ko bhi sambhala...wah brother in law ho to asa...😉😳

n Mayank ke BABA ne jo batein mayank ko samjhaya wah humey bht accha laga...un sab baton ki gehrai usse agey bht jald samajh a jayega...n unhone jese saas bahu ka rishta samhal ne liye salah di woh to kabeel e tarif hain...👏

n inn sab baton ke liye sab se jyada aap ki tarif karni chahiye...👏👍🏼👏

awesome update...😃👏

May ALLAH bless u alwaysss🤗🤗🤗

RAMZAN MUBARAK to ALL...🤗

may dis HOLY month bringsss a lot of happiness n success in all our lives...

May ALLAH fulfill all our dreams...

...ONU

thnku so much anu

JAzAK ALLAH ..thnku soo much

finally kisi ny tu notice kiya k nikah hum ny define kiya hai

thnku so mcuh

it was just for u all to know tht

thnkus o much sweet heart

glad u all are soo much enjoying evry update and feeling like there

i really want to show diffrent shdes of realtions

aww thks a loot for saying so dear..glad ur liking and enjoying this journey

thnkuuu

ameen

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#552

Originally posted by: crazymayurian
wow u explained all things sooo beautifully
their r many things which i came to know about our rituals from here lol

ary wah

OS se SS tak tu tum agai hoo

umeed hai ff per bhi lay aao gi mein

thnku soso mcuh glad u liked it

lo...koi baat nhi mein ny bhi buaht pocha hai mjhy bhi nhi pata tha

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#553

Originally posted by: tukun2009

oh gosh such a wonderful work. u descrbed the wedding so perfectly so beautifully that i felt like i was watching the wedding myself.great job done👏

thnks dear

so gr8 o knwo u r actually enjoying it a loot

thnku soo much for ur words

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#554

Originally posted by: gopi06
beautiful updt
cont soon
thanks for the pm

thnku soo much

Originally posted by: -roshnee-
simply mind blowing.

thnku so much

Originally posted by: chandu-mayu
beautiful, amazing. mindblowing cant described in words. continue soon fiza

thnku sooo mcuh dear

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#555

Originally posted by: DhanakZ
That Was So Lovely
I really font have Enough Words to explain my emotions

Amazing

Congrates for this beautiful part

thanks for pm

cont soon

thnkuu so much

im ssooo glad u liked it that much

thnkuu for ur words

lov ya

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#556

Originally posted by: mayur_eternal
Lovelyupdate Fiza..
I felt as if I was part of a real marriage, all the rituals and customs so vividly described😳
Waiting eagerly for the next part😛

thnkuu so mcuh dear

han han i know ur so desperate to read next...will update soon

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#557

Originally posted by: cutiepie12
perfect...😃

thnkuu

Originally posted by: ridi_onasis
i can't xplain it in words...so i'm not trying

ohh thnks ridi

thnks aloot

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti
beautiful update
luved each n every bit of the update...mind blowing

thnkuu so much dear

glad u liked it soo much

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#558

Originally posted by: -moona-
ist of all Fiza hats of to you for writing all this in complete detail, Using verses u portray the emotions and Rituals very well, its not easy for girl to leave all this behind, and Mayank's dad was so right that he should keep balance btw his Mom and wife after Marriage Because it happens in every Family, and Samrat and Mayank's Brotherly and Teasing Moments were very cute and nice, lotto dialogs of mayank were so hilarious, iss ka kuch nahi ho sakta lolz, Mayank was so good as she is girl so its not easy for her, and sweet ritual was so sweet lolz, and Finally they are Together and Mayanks wait is over, Fiza outstanding Part and dnt know what to say more simply hats to You and Waiting for next part, and Ramadhan Mubarak to You too and this is longest comment ever..😆

ahhh a bear hug for the coment

thnks a loot mona darling for ur such kind words...so

glad u like each n evry bit and thnks for mentioning it too

thnk ur coments always made my day ...

thnks aloot

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#559

Originally posted by: daniella05
lovely update!!
waiting for the next part...

thanks 4 the pm

thnkuu

will update soonn

Originally posted by: arjun-forever
wow a very grandweddding...
very nice part...

thnku soo much

gald u liked it

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#560

Originally posted by: .SilentPrincess

Res...

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Fiza that was just amazing... Sach main shaadi wali feeling a raha thi...

A very emotinal start, jahan sab ko ehsaas ho raha tha ke Nupur ab chali jaye ghi.
It was very well described... It was simply amzing

And the nikkah part it was nice, the nervousness etc... And Diya's teasing everything it was mindblowing... A brides emotions and feelings at that tim eyou wrote it all very well...

Aur phir finally milan... It was really cute they way >Mayank was looking at her and Adi had to get him out of his trance... Very sweet...

Aur bidaii it was nice, I'm happy it wasn't very long nor to emotional it was great.. Aur Mayanks gesture was really sweet... They way he silently was consoling her..

Aur fireworks were funny... But I liked Samrats statemeant... Its true naiy dulhan ghar main aiy hain. toh khub tarha say batana chahiye...

Over all it was a fabulous update... Everything described perfectly...

Okay I'm more excited about the walima rather than the wedding night.. 😆
But yes waiting for that too...😉

& Haan ek request hain jho aap ne har haal main pura karna hain... Nupur ke walime ka dress aapne full detail ke saath explain karna hain... I want to know everything... so a ful deatiled dres... :)

& update sooon... 😳

-Laiba

thnks aloot laiba

gr8 to know u also enjoyed it n felt it too

i tried to make it a bit nt to much emotional n so glad u liked it that way

thnkuu soo much

lol dekho ab mera bhi tu haq banta hi na mayank ko tease kerny k

i know i know...u all r waitng foi it n i some how feeling aahhh

vlaima drees ki ap fikar na keray ...ap ko zayda imagine bhi nhi kerna paray ga thnks ot faira hse made me faint with siigi...i hope u all will like it too

update hopefull 2morow