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daniella

@daniella05

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#541

lovely update!!

waiting for the next part...

thanks 4 the pm

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556195

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Posted: 14 years ago

#542

part-13

😍😍 😍.😍😍😍.😍
what a mehendi it was!!...and that palki😳you know i just love palki..it was beautiful..the bond between adhi, dia and nupur just fab!
and samrat..gosh! he shoul be kept in museum 🤣
it was beautifully written api...i am truly enjoting this as if i mam truly in a wedding..well wedding enjoy karne me baa mzata hai par aaj pata chala dulha dulhan ki kya feelings hoti hai😆🤣
thanks a bunch for such an amazing FF

aha! shadi time..i am goon read shadi now😳

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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#543

Res...

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Fiza that was just amazing... Sach main shaadi wali feeling a raha thi...

A very emotinal start, jahan sab ko ehsaas ho raha tha ke Nupur ab chali jaye ghi.
It was very well described... It was simply amzing

And the nikkah part it was nice, the nervousness etc... And Diya's teasing everything it was mindblowing... A brides emotions and feelings at that tim eyou wrote it all very well...

Aur phir finally milan... It was really cute they way >Mayank was looking at her and Adi had to get him out of his trance... Very sweet...

Aur bidaii it was nice, I'm happy it wasn't very long nor to emotional it was great.. Aur Mayanks gesture was really sweet... They way he silently was consoling her..

Aur fireworks were funny... But I liked Samrats statemeant... Its true naiy dulhan ghar main aiy hain. toh khub tarha say batana chahiye...

Over all it was a fabulous update... Everything described perfectly...

Okay I'm more excited about the walima rather than the wedding night.. 😆
But yes waiting for that too...😉

& Haan ek request hain jho aap ne har haal main pura karna hain... Nupur ke walime ka dress aapne full detail ke saath explain karna hain... I want to know everything... so a ful deatiled dres... :)

& update sooon... 😳

-Laiba

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556195

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Posted: 14 years ago

#544

part 14

ahwww ..shadi...i love shadi😳..and this one is just wow!!...aww mujhe na rona araha tha jab nupur said kabool hai😭..poor girls😔...and again if husband is like mayank...to chalega 3 baar nahi 6 baar kabool bolna chalega by god🤣

and you described the wedding perfectly..by the way when all pray na tab chupke se some people pray for themselves too.. "ya allah inki mila di ab meri bhi mila do jodi"🤣
anyways amazing by the way uo mirro wala part kyun nahi dekahay jahan dulha dulhan sees each other in the mirror😳
and ending ihan kar di?..ab mera bhi heart beat tez ho raha hai..and its actually beating fast🤣
pls na api continue soon...i jusr cant wait anymore not at all..so pls continue soon😳

and finally tahsu done with the parts
love you
muahh❤️

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#545

Originally posted by: vampire_girl
part 14

ahwww ..shadi...i love shadi😳..and this one is just wow!!...aww mujhe na rona araha tha jab nupur said kabool hai😭..poor girls😔...and again if husband is like mayank...to chalega 3 baar nahi 6 baar kabool bolna chalega by god🤣

and you described the wedding perfectly..by the way when all pray na tab chupke se some people pray for themselves too.. "ya allah inki mila di ab meri bhi mila do jodi"🤣
anyways amazing by the way uo mirro wala part kyun nahi dekahay jahan dulha dulhan sees each other in the mirror😳
and ending ihan kar di?..ab mera bhi heart beat tez ho raha hai..and its actually beating fast🤣
pls na api continue soon...i jusr cant wait anymore not at all..so pls continue soon😳

and finally tahsu done with the parts
love you
muahh❤️

aww tuhy rona ara tha mjhy bhi ..ek aur bechari kuraban...

tumhari tu mama se baat kerni paray gi ...kcuh samrt jasa haal hai tumahra...

aah mirror wali rasm is lyan nhi dali k i want mayank and nupur to see each other in privacy

😉

islyan ending yaaha ki tum sab besharmo k lyan jin k shdi mein sirf ek hi cheez k intezar hai...

thnks jani

i was so missing these full on masti coments from u ...thnks for making my day

lov ya

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crazymayurian

@crazymayurian

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#546

hehehehe... i wrote so much cause u call me os and i am trying to become ff

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#547

Originally posted by: drmaha
res

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wht should i say...
it was breathtaking...i was simply enjoying while reading...👏 👏
👏the way u describe the whole shadi looking like i was also attending this...😆
fiza u r mindblowing...

loved it yar...😍

bas yar aab second part kerdai update jaldi ...
cant w8 more...😆 😉

love ya lot dear...

😉

kuch tu kaho maha

asay na bolo

thkuuu janu bow down to ur coments

soch mein ny shdi define ki hai...kitna muskil hoga meray liyan

han mjh pata hai tum sab besharm logo ko agaly part k wait hai

thnks

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#548

Originally posted by: achoose
didi...what to comment...it was simply mindblowing...
loved it sooo much..

love yaa...

tc...

hey meri jan why nt too coment

yaar sab yahi bool rahy tu mera kiya hoga...thn wht to write yaar😆

thnku soo much dear so gald u liked it

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#549

Fiza, it was awesome update.

OMG!! kya shadi tha yaar
just loved it.

thorugh many rituals wr new for me...i ve enjoyd d most.

this ws d most beautiful shadi update i ever read.

awesome.

i ve read it countless time...n still in influence.

brilliant update dear.

kya baat hai.

ur description ws so gud, u presented evrything beautifully...n also in detail.

aaj tak kitne shadi kar chuki hai tu???

baata na!! dont blush!!

awesome update.

it seems so real.

n urdu ws eary...sirf kuch words ko chor k

waiting for mayur meeting...ahem ahem...aka suhag raat

continue soon.

dont worry, pm k liye thanks nhi kahungi.

@ Fari : awesome sig.

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#550

Originally posted by: -Faria-
Will edit asap.now i m connecting thro cell.fizu congrats.finally tune shaadi karwa diya

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OMG Fizu- Haye kya shaadi tha yaar
tune itni acchi tarah se sab kuch kya hai ki main kya kahu
brilliant , brilliant update janu
u r too good- yed ekh kar mujhe ye lag raha hai ki tne already 4/5 shaadi kar liya hai
kyun ki koi experienced person he itni acchi tarah se sab kuch explain kar sakte hai..
BY GOD it was d best shaadi of mayur i've ever read
hats off to u..
very good part
keep it up
take care

thnku soo much

OYE mein ny tu abhi shadi k S bhi nhi kiya

4 5 Allah maaf keray...

sister k ki hai na waho se aay yeah experince

thnku ssso much

glad u liked it

lov ya