MG FF - Sneaking into Her Bedroom (Finished) - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
omg dat was simply amazing
do continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
loving this ff...........
actually enjoying the updates............
pl cont soon.........
can u pl send me pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
😍 i think i've died and gone to heaven...maaneet heaven that is !!! seriously, especially the post dinner scene on the roof and when he carries her to her room.....hayee !! here i am reading and its being played out in my head.....5***** girlie...u hav seriously got a flare for this....LOVED IT !!
Ur seriously in the head of geet/maan's characters...these updates cud so be real episodes on the show......actually i think this is what they shud be showing......u shud defo continue with this...... i dont come on IF so much but i'll surely come on to read ur updates if u continue.....really wanna know what happens next....and if a person's writing makes u feel that way, then obviously it's good.....next update quicktime plz......
oh and one teeny tiny thing.....no rhyme or reason for maan aka balwant singh coming to dinner and how come geet's working in the house.....aint teji veerji and maasi got issues with that ????? however its no biggie, if we can accept when the show itself has such big gaping holes in the story (sudden arrival of geet's relatives who are suddenly full of so much concern...hello !! where were they when she was nearly murdered by brij, left home and was struggling in the big city !!! etc etc ) we can so overlook these chothi moti faux pas...haha
keep writing, looking forward to the next instalment....oh and going by today's sbs, we r about to hav a scene on the chath....dont think its gonna be as great as urs but its something i guess......
👏👏👏once again, great work....don't expect anything less really..... thanx for letting me know about this and i think i've called her ur partner in crime b4, jaz that is.....and its so true !! great partnership u've got going there......keep it up........⭐️⭐️
:) :) xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
^^ aww!! thanks Sam! *hug*

JAZ

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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
Ok, just to want to clear a couple things first. The "Balwant Singh" from the last post was just someone Maan brought to act as the driver while he was setting up the surprise for Geet. He won't be shown again. And Maan is the driver but since he's around the house so much he's become good friends with Lucky. That's all. Now ENJOY!
Geet walked into the dining room and sat beside Pammi.
"Arre Geet, before you start eating, can you go get Balwant Singh?" Lucky asked with his mouth full. "I don't think he's had lunch yet."

"Uhhh....sure Lucky. I'll be right back."

Geet left the dining room and went to fetch Maan from the east wing of the house. She came up to the door and it was closed. She knocked lightly.

"Who is it?" Maan called out.

"Dinner's ready." Geet responded.

At once, the door flew open and Maan stood there in his black tanktop and jeans. He leaned his arm against the door.

"You came to call me?" Maan teased.

"No, Lucky's calling you."

"Oh that's too bad."

"Can we just go before I get in trouble?" Geet asked, checking behind her.

Maan quickly grabbed her by the wrists and pulled her inside. He closed the door and trapped her against it. They were nose to nose.

"Maan..let me go." Geet said softly, looking at her feet. She looked up to see him looking directly into her eyes. She looked away on impulse then pushed against his shoulders with her hands. He was too strong.

"Maan, they're going to get suspicious!" Geet said still pushing.

Maan pulled away from the door and tied her hands around her back.

"GEET!" Lucky shouted. Geet gasped. "Whats taking you so long?!"

"MAAN!! Oh Babaji...what must they be thinking, what if they find out?! OH NO! No no no no. This is NOT GOOD-"

"Chup Geet. Bilkul chup." Maan whispered.

"I WILL NOT be quiet...what if Tej Veerji finds out? He's going to beat you up...we can not let that happen. Maan, let go of me THIS INSTANT."

Maan let go.

"MAAN! I mean-" Geet looks around to see that Maan is no longer holding her hands behind her back. Chor bhi diya?

"Go then." Maan sat on his bed. "I don't care."

Geet looked at the door and then over to Maan. She sighed.

"Maan?"

Maan looked away.

Geet walked over to him. "Maan?"

Maan got up and walked to the window. He looked outside and put his hand on the frame.

Geet came up behind and wrapped her arms around him. She rested her head on his back. Maan didn't move.

"Maan, you know its only because I'm worried for you. If Tej Veerji or Mamaji find out, it won't end well." Geet said.

Maan held up one of her hands and kissed it. Geet smiled.

He turned around to put her hands around his neck and slid his own around her waist. He pulled her closer and buried his face in her neck.

"Geet?!" Geet jumped a foot backwards. She looked towards the door and saw Pammi standing there with her arms crossed.

"Pammi Bhabhi...main woh...I can explain. Ok...no I can't but Pammi Bhabhi please don't tell Tej Veerji or Mamaji." Geet pleaded.

Pammi walked up to both of them. She looked at Maan and then looked at Geet.

"Pammi Bhabi, PLEASE!" Geet said again.

"So you're the Maan, that broke our Geet's heart?" She asked with venom in her eyes.

Maan looked up at her. "Yes, I'm that cruel man. But I've come to make it up to her, to put back those pieces and ask for forgiveness. Not just to her but to all of you. I know how much grief my burst of anger has caused all of you."

"Even if she does forgive you, what makes you think that we will?" Pammi asked.

"I don't think that any of you will forgive me and I don't expect you to. I've just come to apologize to my Geet in hopes that she'll acknowledge the fact that I want to pay for my mistakes." Maan responded. "I'm sorry, to all of you Pammi Bhabhi and especially to Geet."

Pammi Bhabhi nodded seriously and considered this. "Hmmm." Then she looked at Geet's terrifed expression and couldn't help but laugh.

"Acha natak tha hai na?" Pammi said.

"Pammi Bhabhi?" Geet asked in shock.

Maan caught on. "How long have you known?"

"Let's just say that a certain Dadi called me and asked for some help. I knew I would get in a lot of trouble but I knew I couldn't say no to her. She was so concerned, I just wanted to help her." Pammi smiled. "And of course, you two."

Maaneet looked at each other, embarassed.

She patted both of them on the cheek. "You're married remember? You two don't have to shy away anymore."

"Pammi! Where's my white kurta? I told you to iron it an HOUR AGO!" Tej yelled.

"AAYI!"

Pammi looked back and Maaneet and couldn't help but smile again. "Carry on, carry on. I've got everything covered."

She gave them a quick hug and rushed out the door. Before the door completely shut, Geet swore she saw a wink.

Jasman
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
me first

finally im here 😆😆..but omg..i loved Geet's reaction to when maan let go of her hand...shes like "chod bhi diya"......im like uff..isnt that what you asked for? 😆😆😆...ladki naa...full on pagal hai 😛😛😛....and omg...Pammi knew about them...Dadi is one sneaky cookie!! even miles away she's playing match maker...old habits die hard huh? 😛😛..
JAZ

Edited by jnawaz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!
Chup Bilkul Chup 😍
Nose To Nose 😍
Back Hug 😍
OMG it's so typical of him to get her in such situations and not letting go when she's always in fear 😆
OMG do you know I've wanted the same thing to happen in the show: That Pammi be the first one to find out about Maaneet! I really want that to happen .. although your way seemed interesting with Daadima calling her .. but in the show I want Pammi to be the first to know so that this kind of stuff can happen .. Pammi covers for Maaneet and Maaneet Chup Chup ke milna 😍😍😍
AWESOME UPDATE Jas!! 😍
Z
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
Hey just read all the parts
This FF is amazing
Wow love the fact that pammi already knew :P
Can't wait for the next part
Plz add me to your pm list :):) xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
Loved it Jas ...😃 ....pammi knows , so gets even more exciting now ....pls carry on and update soon ....waiting eagerly ....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
Very interesting! Pm me please.

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