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Posted: 13 years ago
I've never read this ff... :-C
but thanx for the link, i've bookmark'd it and i'l defo read and then comment!!!...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Just read the whole ff... Loved it!!...
Poor maan he's been suffering so much
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part 27
nice part...
poor Maan...
cont soon...
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part 28

there was knock on the door...early in the morning

maan opened the door to see sam...

she had all the signs of being married...he had a awkward smile seeing that

he just gave gave her space to enter the house...they both sat in adjacent sofas with savitri's picture in the middle...

sam : i came to hyderabad just yesterday
came to know about aunty

hmmm
how are you?

i am fine
you?

he showed his thumps up indicating he too is good with a small smile on his face...which indeed showed all the grief he was going through

there was an uneasy silence for a long time between them

shall i take a leave?

they both stood up to leave...after taking afew steps sam turned to say something

maan...i wanted to talk to u for sometime now...
i had to go to chennai after my marriage
i thought of calling u
but i dont know...somehow

forget about all that

my parents never approved you
but still...i tried
they got a reason that day to reject you

maan immediately cut that

but u r happy right?

thats not...

again he interruped

u r happy na?

she nodded her head

thats what matters

hmmm
we met as friends...i want our friendship to last forever

it will

friends?

sam wanted a handshake...maan was happy to do that...they shook hands

coffee?

sam immediately took away her hand...

u will make coffee?
no thanks...

maan smiled

if u allow me to prepare...i'll have it

hmmm..okay
theres kitchen..everything is..

i will manage..dont bother..freshen up n come..
i'll make superb coffee for u

she started preparing coffee when the door bell rang..
she opened it to see a unfamiliar face

it was geet

she saw sam

yes

it was a big blow to her..seeing sam with all the signs of marriage...she went in a state of shock for a while

sorry..wrong address

its ok

she very hurriedly left the house...in the process she left her bracelet stuck to a plant..she was not in a state to think about it...

she felt like a fool coming there
on the whole way back to her hotel she cried...a lott...

she immediately took a bus back to bangalore
on the way back she saw a missed call from pinky...she e-mailed her...
as soon as she entered her house...

geet's mom : dekhiye geet is back

she got up to bring geet to sit with them

a husband and a wife who came to meet...were talking about her

wife : the girl looks better in person than in photo..isnt it?

geet's mom : ravi uncle n anu aunty..sit beta

namaste

husband : this is son's photo beta...if u say yes..we'll take u right away...

wife : ur parents will come to ur marriage as guests..see the photo once

no need auntyji..if my parents like him..its ok with me
i'll take a leave now..

mohinder sensed something wrong has happened
he observed that geet wasnt as excited as she used to be...

he immediately went to see geet

she was unpacking her luggage...her back was facing him

mohinder : geet..u seem to be very happy...whats the matter dear?

tears started rolling
she turned to face her dad

did u meet maan?

hmmm

what happened?

maan's married

mohinder was shocked a bit n felt sorry for his daughter
all he could do was hug her tight



scene changes

chocolate stated barking all of a sudden

chocolate...

maan came to see what was the matter

what are u doing here?

he saw chocolate had something in his mouth

chocolate...u r eating all stupid stuff this days...
what is it??

he tried to snatch it from it but it wasnt leaving it
after much trying he took that thing out of its mouth

it was geet's bracelet...he indeed recognised it in a sec...

how come this bracelet is here?

he immediately went to call pinky

pinky...geet kaha hai??

i m going to kick both of u like hell...idiots..
she came to hyd n went away without meeting me
n she did come to ur home 2 days back...
she mailed me
kaha tha tu?

where is she now?

where else?
she wud have gone back to bangalore

what??

now he remembered asking sam who was on the door while he came to have his coffee

who was on the door?

sam : dont know...some wrong address

instantly he cursed himself

pinky...where r u now?

ghar pe

he rushed to meet her
on the way he tried calling geet's landline
but none picked up

he was getting frustrated to the core
he drove at a very high speed...
on the way some people wanted a lift

these were the same people who were kicked nicely by geet

he took a reverse gear n stopped the car...

they all came n surrounded the car pleading him to give a lift
one of them admired the car's inner look n took the driver's seat to look at it

maan was in a very very bad mood

guy 1 : brother we had a flat tyre...we r trying to change it but its not happening

give me that rod

guy 2: we tried already

guy1: do u have the experience of changing tyres bro??

maan took the rod n hit both of them terribly

why r u showing ur back n running away?
where is the other one?

one of them opened the car's door in pain

why did u sit in the car??
huh??

he started hitting all of them without giving any gap
as soon as they got a slight chance...they tried tried running away
n maan was chasing them
guy 4 : take left

they all took a left turn to see a dead end

guy 2 : tere left turn ki toh...he was angry on him

meanwhile maan reached them
they all were terrified
he was moving forward to beat them up like hell

guy 3 : why are u hitting us?

what did u comment about geet?

guy 1 : kaun?

how many girls did u tease?

guy 4 : ye uss pagal ladki ka dost hai shayad

guy 2 : sach mein? she already gave us a good trashing that day...
then y r u again beating us?

that was her account
this is my settlement

he gain went up to beat them but couldnt
he threw away that rod

everyone was confused

sorry guys...i did it in frustration

as he proceeded to go...they all stopped him
they sat at a place to talk to him

guy 2 : why are you frustrated?

there was a small misunderstanding...
n she went off to bangalore

guy 4 : cant u call n explain??

i did try

guy 3 : then?

she dint pick up

guy 3 : ohh

guy 1 : pata nahi pagalpan ke daure mein abhi kis ko maar rahi hogi??

oye...she is not like that

guy 1 : thik hai thik hai...u got a friend in bangalore?? cant u call him up??

call him??

guy 2 : tell him to go to her home...simple

maan suddenly remembered that yash was in bangalore

thanks boss

he immediately called yash

yash was opening his car's door when his phone rang...

hey maan...u missing me??

where r u now?

if i tell...u might get depressed
i m going to bangtok in a month from here
office ka kaam hai

just shup up n go to geet's house immediately

thik hai
thik hai
wait a while



after half n hour or so...yash was infront of geet's house

maan always puts me in trouble
i dont even know if this is her house

he checked he house no. n went inside but it was locked
he heard someone working in the garden

hello..come here plz

as soon as he came

nobody home??

gardener: no sir

where have they gone?

gardener: to attend a marriage

kiski?

gardener: geet baby ki

geet ki??
really??

gardener: yes sir

oh no..
geet is getting married

he immediately called maan
maan was eagerly waiting fr his call

shaadi??

he was shocked

meanwhile waiting for maan...pinky logged in to see if there were any mails...she noticed that geet sent her 2 mails...she forgot to check one...
as she read it she was stunned...
she took a print out of it to show it to maan n she called him to come to a common point so that they could meet him as soon as possible...
he sounded very depressed but she had to do it...
on the way she even picked up romeo



after a while

pinky i reached
where r u?

hey maan
we r here

they met n pinky showed the paper

geet ka letter

maan was still for a moment n started reading it

hi pinky

after aunty's death..maan was alone...i came here to be with him
but after seeing sam there...i realised i am alone..not him
meeting him and then parting
and then meeting again and parting again
ab aur nahi hota...
dont know where this journey will lead to

i'll never come to hyderabad again
though i missed maan in my life...i dont know..still i want only him...
but i hope...he'll be happy with sam

geet


he was totally shattered


Edited by millie_maaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
MAAN AND GAY
WHAT A JOKE
BUT AT LAST SAM IS OUT OF HIS LIFE
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for late comments dear...

Maan lost his mom...that is sad

Geet is going to meet him...hmmm
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Posted: 13 years ago
sam s out of his life..
but again due to sam pblms started..
nice one..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh no !!!! again ... 😭... indirectly because of sam 😲...
please continue dear...

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