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Posted: 13 years ago
um so so so sorry
um commenting after a long time
i missed three parts
god had to read them
sorry yar
now will start...i loved geet realised her feelings for maan finally
but then maan lost her mom sad part...
o god when he needed geet she wasnt there

then sam's entry and geet's arrival
god how could she think maan can marry someone else...
kya hua ye yar...

and geet agrees to marry someone else
i hope maan reaches on time and the best part he finally know that geet has feelings for him
continue soon

and dis time i wont be late in commenting
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update!
OMG why did this sam had to come back?
again geet misunderstood him!
loved pinky giving a piece of her mind to maan!
omg geet was so hurt n now going to marry!
poor maan all depressed hearing about the shaadi and the letter was so emotional!!
omg he went on beating the guys ha ha lol! n then asked sorry ROFL! and then what an idea he got!
omg what he is gonna do now?
superb!
cont soon!
thnx 4 d pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 29

That letter fell off his hand n maan was shattered...he felt soo helpless at that moment

Pinky couldn't see him like that

Maan come fast..romeo chal gaadi nikaal...we r going to bangalore..

Scene changes

Car was parked on the side of the road and maan and kidnapper were seated opposite to eachother on the rock at some city outskirts with minimum vegetation..

Kidnapper : there are no usual twists in your life yaar..

Try to understand me...i have to stop that marriage...If u want I will come back'..do what so ever u want with me

Kidnapper laughed at him..he got up and took a few steps towards maan

This is life and death problem for me

Hey...why are you so tensed?

She was roaming with u recently...

Yesterday she got engaged with dev

Now she is marrying someone else

In her life..i feel husband is new but not men..

maan bursted with anger...he furiously got up and charged the kidnapper...the single blow he gave on the jaw was enough to make the kidnapper blackout...he almost fell on the ground

one more word against geet and

kidnapper cut him off

is she that close to u??

the kicks and punches continued...blood was dripping from both their faces...kidnapper took the gun out...but during the fight maan managed to keep it away from his face and body...n finally in that struggle it fell off at a distance...

kidnapper tried to take it first but maan engaged him in the fight...but when a sudden blow hit kidnapper's stomach he was thrown near that weapon...he was about to pick it up when maan tapped his back n snatched it...

i made a mistake...i should have killed u then n there..

your bad luck...shall i kill u now?

he told me that u r very cunning...that khanna told me

khanna?...who is this khanna?

your lover geet's father...he ordered me to kidnap you

maan was confused

geet ke papa ka naam mohinder handa hai

mohinder HANDA??

haan

is it not khanna?

NOO

isnt ur lover geet khanna's daughter?

NOO...kab se toh bol raha hoon

isnt it u who planned to elope with khanna's daughter?

dont irritate me now asking that same bloody question...i will fire...i dont even know how to shott...kahi pe bhi maar dunga tumhe...

kidnapper's condition worsened...

in my 15yrs career never once it happened like this...

he was n the verge of breaking down..he wanted his answers

if u r not him then who is that man?

n by the way who the hell are you?

I AM MAAN

maan...

he turned away from him and walked a while came back to him to tap maan's shoulder...

he forwarded his hand asking for a handshake

by the way i am john...with a big smile on his face

they both shook hands n turned away from eachother

maan was unable to understand what was happening

oye...isnt it u who dragged me into this confusion??

how am i connected to all this??

n why the hell did u drag me in this mess??

relax relax

now u tel me why the hell were u there in that car? AP03K 999? huh?

geet ki shaadi rokna tha...dobara math puchna..

both their minds were over-working...

hey maan...tell me one thing finally..where did i go wrong??

kidnapper had tears in his eyes while asking this


scene changes[FLASHBACK]

on the way to bangalore the car broke down...

pinky n romeo were examining the car whereas maan was bit lost in his thoughts...

i think we cant do it romeo

how long will it take?

i am trying to fix it yaar

just then a car was about to pass them

maan went ahead to stop the car...

stop...please stop

that vehicle stopped

i need to go to bangalore

person in the car... ok..get in...we r also going to bangalore

maan turned to talk to his friends

yaar i am leaving...you come with the car

ya ya go soon

as the car zoomed away the number plate of the car was shown to be AP03K 999

that person in the car took a small break in the dabha nearby the highway when kidnapper saw maan beside the car...the kidnapper mistook the person n kidnapped maan...[this is the starting scene...check prologue]


scene changes

maan was sitting on the bonnet of the sumo with gun tapping his head n kidnapper was roaming aimlessly

damn it

khanna will kill me if he comes to know this

if geet marries...then i myself will kill u

suddenly the kidnapper's mobile started ringing...as soon as he saw who was calling his face lost all its color...he kept the mobile beside maan on the bonnet n took a few steps aback

khanna is calling

maan picked it up

kidnapper was shocked...he went numb

oye

khanna...on the line...

shut up man..just shut ur mouth

khanna...on the line...

mein kaun hoon?? who r hell r u?

khanna...on the line...

i dont care who ever u may be

khanna...on the line...

we dont have any connection...but if matter gets worse in my case then i will surely come to slit ur neck

khanna...on the line...

by the way i killed john...with this he ended the call

kidnapper coughed hard at the last lines of maan

why did u tell him like that?

nobody can kill a dead man right? thats why i told him like that

kidnapper was elated...he kissed maan's hand n took his mobile

arey haan...thank you...thank you soo much saale saab

saale?? who is saale to u?

maan jumped from the car to hold kidnapper's neck

arey...arey...u saved ur sister's husband's life saale saab...

maan was irritated to the core now

where are we now?

whats going on?

i m terribly confused jijaji...

hey...wheres the marrigae?

bangalore


Edited by millie_maaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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god what hell was the confusion
i tell u i felt bad for maan but that kidnapper too...
kya confusion create kar dia ye khanna ji ne...

i really hope maan reaches on time
waise i know ki shaadi na hone wali...

jaldi se continue karna part

loved it
awesome update

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg poor kidnapper and poor Maan
hehe ye Khanna k wajah se confusion ho gaya
I hope he reaches maan manages to reach on time kaise wo pata nahi 😕 par geet ki shadi kisi aur se nahi hone dena pls
love-Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
Excellent part...loved it...
poor maan and kidnapper... 🤣🤣🤣
please continue soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lolz such a big confusion... Poor maan and poor kidnapper too
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 29
that was funny...
cont soon...

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