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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Maan is such sweetheart i m falling 4r him all over again....

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maansee

@maansee

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

A readers message on COP please read and comment-

It's the first fanfic i've read from you and I'd like tell you a few things about it. I've noticed your story deals with many social issues never mentioned in other fanfics, making it rich with information. It's interesting to read, to learn more about rural india. I was borned and raised in Canada and I'm absolutely shocked such things could happen.

yes its happen

When Maan married Geet, a returned university student, he was lusting her, according to the words he exchanged with her. He wanted her so bad that he went to the extreme point of forcing her to marry him, despite her already having a boyfirend, and raping her on their suhaag raat.

yes she was having a boy friend................ but he also ditched her............ and in india husband is like god for married women..................... fine he raped her on their sr but he was ashamed for that later ............................. forgivness is in indian blood ............... but after what ever is happen if he was to trying to keep his marriage i dont think that he is wrong ............................... paayar kabhi bhi kahi bhi kise se bhi ho sakta hai .........................and for geet

she saw him very closely and found that he was not that bad that she was thinking and later slowly slowly she falls in love with him..................... he is not that bad as u think

I seriously need to know if my story is being deciphered in a similar way by all of you please give honest opinions

your story line is going smooth so do continue soon we all r waiting .......

Edited by maansee - 14 years ago

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

congratulation for new thread.
brilliant part. loved it.
maaneet just made for each other.
both care for each other.
precap is interesting.
update soon

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Geet is so naughty

bechara Maan

aur Durga will go to parliament wow

use president banoge ya Prime minister😆

and precap: Bahubali waala promise let me think

t h i n k

bharatput vapas jaana hain kya😆

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Congratulations on new thread..........

loved the update.............thankfully geet was able to distract him a little bit..............

hey 1st time maan is buying jewels for his princess.................loved their shopping.............

loved when the elderly woman was teasing maan................

coming to the point of that reader i am actually shocked that the person has been thinking abt it too much....................

well 1st thing him lusting on her and the way he expressed his desire to her-well according to me he was rustic rather than beating around the bush he was blunt in expressing it........wats wrong in it......well he is a rustic man thats his characterisation where he doesnt hide behind diplomatic and lovable words..............abt him raping her............being a man and that too from the background he is from if his wife says she physically belongs to some one the way they react is quite similar.........well he is wrong in expressing himself like that but he felt bad and showed concern after that one time....and still he feels bad for treating her like that wat else u want.........still dwell on it and kill himself for wat............

secondly in one update u definitely did show that he had her picture framed and kept it secretly from raji's engagement..........and he himself said that the 1st time he saw her he fell in love but knew that he is no match and didnt want to lose her so the steps he took to attain her were too blunt and rustic like him but his intention was true from love...........after that he realized himself that he has forced and changed her life but he did change himself for her too.........trust me when a man change himself and that too the extent bahubali does can b only done when he is in love........rather than dwelling on the thing u hv done wrong y not move on and keep urself happy....wats wrong in it.............

then coming to geet forgiving him.........she herself told in one update that actually she did fancy him the same day he did (@raji's engagement) and she was physically attracted towards him.....

she was not mentally tortured too much bcoz she lost her interest in life when her own parents and the person she thought she was in love broke her trust..........and she wanted to move on in her life and she did with the man who loved her more and she fallen in love with his simplicity, truthfulness, bluntness, rustiness, generous, robin hood types..... .........wat else u look for in a man who bluntly accepts that he is jhoru ka gulam..........

in my pov i just love the way bahubali maan's love has grown for his princess geet and the same with her...........

u hv updated now will u still update COP by 10pm

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: preethia

u hv updated now will u still update COP by 10pm

karegi zaroor karegi

nahin to TRP gir jaayegi😉

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abina03

@abina03

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

I have read some ones comment on COP

i really didn't feel you need to change your view

in your story Geet simply didn't forgive his act.

she was angry&frustrated.more over she was so angry with her own family.when she come to know who is original Maan ,she certainly fall for him.its normal human nature.then who wants to read only real facts? if i want only real i will go for an autobiography not for a fiction. in a fiction i expect to read what we wish.because our life is fulfil only 50 to60% of wish

you are doing a good job.

almost close to reality

go ahead.

deliver your own ideas

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ninavi

@ninavi

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

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congrats for new thread 👏

Maaan ke sare problems ka ek solution hai

one and only Geet 😊

lovelyy update as usual ..

cont soooon 🤗

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optimism

@optimism

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

congratulations for new thread !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

and answer for question or rather the readers question :

TO ERROR IS HUMAN !!!!!! BUT NOT BEING GUILTY ABOUT IT N ROAMING SHAMELESSLY IS
INHUMAN ..........................

THOUGH RAPE IS NOT JUSTIFIED , BEING GUILTY ABOUT IT N TRYING TO COMPENSATE FOR IT DOES MATTER .................N I READ IT IN ONE THE POST THAT FORGIVING THE RAPIST (WHOSE ACTUALLY GUILTY ) IS ONE OF THE HEALING PROCESS IN LIFE 😃

N ABOUT LOVE : Y DID U POINT OUT ONLY SEX..................DIDNT U C GEET FEEDING MAAN LOVINGLY ,BEING A PART OF HIS LIFE N CHANGING HIM FOR BETTER .........................

LONG STORY SHORT : I LOVE UR FFs ............ONLY REASON I CUM OL THESE DAYS :-)