Love in silence Climax Maneet ff - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
oh god...........the 1st part gave me a jhatka that dev and geet happily married couple..........then maan loving neha which was another shock..............2nd part u didnt stop giving jhatka that dev and geet r just friends.............oh god not sure wats in store for them..........maan calling geet bhabhi kuch hazam nahi hotha.................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
part 1
liked the part.....................
Geet is married to Dev?
and Maan loves someone else?
nahi..................
Maan is talking about whom?
cont soon and pm me................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
nice story.................add me to ur pm list plzzz.................👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
Awesome update !
Loved it !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25

Love in silence Part 3

Dev and Geet are standing along with the family members.All are shocked.
Nikhila is restless:We all rated you both as an ideal couple.But it was all a drama?I can't believe this.What is this Dev?
D:I'm sorry Mom.
N:Give me a clear answer.
D:You all know that i was in a relationship before my marriage.
N:Yes.But you had a break up with her.You were depressed.That's why we got you married soon.As we all expected you became normal again.You were so happy.
D:But she came back to me again after marriage.We continued our relationship.Geet knows it.
N:Geet....what kind of a wife you are?You are supporting ur husband's misdeeds?
Her eyes are full of tears.
D:But again we broke up.Geet stood by me when i lost all hopes.We became good friends.Now i'm trying my level best to be a good husband.Believe me mom.

After some months.....

Maan as a narrator:Dev bhaiyya started loving Geet bhabhi....We thought our family's happiness is back...but.....


Dev tells Geet before going to office:Get ready before i return home.We will go to beach.
Geet smiles.Nikhila and Maan have a naughty smile on their face.
N:Dev....you will take only Geet to the beach?
Dev is shy.They all laugh.

Dev and Geet walk along the beach.
D:Geet...i never thought that i will fall in love with you so easily...
She blushes.They hold hands together and walk enjoying the beauty of the beach.They seem to be very romantic.

Maan and Neha are on a beautiful date.They are on a bike.He rides the bike in high speed and scares Neha.
N:Maan...stop it.
He stops the bike and laughs.Neha pulls his ears.
They have icecream from the same cup.

Nikhila tells Geet:There is a surprise for both of you..go to your bedroom.
Geet is wondering about what the surprise would be.Geet goes to the bedroom and is surprised to see the room decorated with flowers.
N:Tonight is your first night.Right?That's why...
Geet blusheD:THank you mom.

She waits inside the room waiting for Dev.The phone bell rings.She picks up the phone.She is shocked to hear something from the caller.The receiever falls from her hand.She faints down.Maan and Nikhila enter the room since he wants to see the decoration.They are shocked to see Geet lying down unconsious.Maan takes Geet in his arms and keeps her on the bed.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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great update.
did something happen to dev..
omg.
do continue plz.
thx.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oops wat happened............did dev die?
uff u left at cliff hanger situation.........
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ok , I read the 1st 3 parts together ; it looks interesting . Do continue dear ... 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
nice one.. but y did u stop... is smething wrong with dev?? continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
wow interesting story love it so geet married dev & there not consumate there marriage lovely now they want to oh geet got shocking calling i think dev is dead or heard unaccident
cant wait to read more
super brilliant update
pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnn
pls do pm me

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