Maaneet SS & OSS Collection Update Pg 9/10 07/07 - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
SS # 2
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part 1
wow i thought twas Guru himself as Maan alas it isnt..................
nice part..................
hope Maan is awaiting for her...................
cont soon...................

i want pms for ALL......................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
@ deeps -- thank u so much dear....u r the only one who commented on each SS n OS....love u...🤗
u are added in all the 3...👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
chadni raat was awesome start
Luvd the second SS---Awww da suprise was so sweet & the cute fone calls
Last SS--interesting is Gurmeet Maan or a different person?
Exellent work
Cont soon Xx...
Du add me 2 PM list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
cngrats ss beautiful start love it but pls less hindi if dont mind
love maaneet scene
so cute my dear
brilliant update
pls cont soonnnnnnnnn
thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
OHHHHHH JYO
LUVED ALL ESPECIALLY CHANDANI RAAT
IT WAS SUPERBBBBBBB
CONTINUE SOOOOOOONNNNNN N PM MEEEEEE
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
please please send me ur update ur os and ss 2 good
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
wonderful my dear pls cont soonnnnnnnn thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
what is it that attracts us to some1...a look....a desire...a wish...an obsession...but most of all it is always the love at first sight...
the moment u see the person n u know u want to spend the rest of ur life looking at that person only...
what if geet n maan just saw each other first time n fell in love....
what if they didnt fight ...instead they just talked with their eyes....
well was thinking this n wrote the following scene...no no...once again micro mini scene...
hope u all will like it...


somewhere in a mall....
meera -- geet jaldi kar naa...
geet -- kar rahi hun meer...
meera -- kya kar rahi hai....pure 1 gante se dresses try kar rahi hai...
geet -- so what?? i wanna look my best...(she said while looking at the mirror in the trial room)
now tell me how is this one....(she asked meera while she came out)
meera -- haan geet bahut acchi lag rahi hai....ab chalein...
geet -- why r u in a hurry...??
meera -- now getting angry -- engagement meri...shooping mujhe karna hai...dress mujhe leni hai....aur yahan u r busy selecting ur dress (she kept walking towards geet n geet started moving back)
geet -- ok ok....itna gussa hone ki kya baat hai.....ab chalo we have to do ur shopping also....waise bhi u have wasted enough time...
meera -- i...i...i have wasted.....
she started to walk toward geet..
geet ki bacchi....
while geet ran away to her changing room...

on the other side...
yash -- bro aap kya kar rahe hain...
maan -- mai kya kar raha hoon....u said i had to come so i came...
yash -- getting angry -- bro maine aapko mere liye shopping karne ke liye bulaya tha...n aap apne phone me hi busy ho....dijiye...dijiye mujhe...
yash trying to snatch away the phone while maan gave him an angry glare..
yash -- ye looks kisi aur ko dena ...not me...
maan -- what do u want??
yash -- bro since u r a DD of the whole delhi....to kya aap apne is chote, pyare, maasoom bhai ke liye naye kapde...new looks nahi de sakte.....so that i can also become a DD....
.aam gives a slap on his head n says...
maan -- sudhar jaa....now lets go...i have some very important meeting to attend...
yash -- but bro pehle thodi si shopping...plz...plz plz...
maan rolling his eyes,,,,
maan -- fine....but only 1 hour...
yash -- while hugging him -- love u bro...
maan -- smiling a little -- ab chalo...

will finish it soon....




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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
great part.,
do continue plz.
add me to ye pm list.
thx.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
emotional part.
me feel sad for geet.
update soon.

add me in ur pm list so i also get the updates

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