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Posted: 14 years ago

Hello everyone

how r u all??

I'm Jyoti

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n once again i decided to write stories

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well not FF...sorry itna lamba nahi likh sakti

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mere liye ek hi FF kaafi hai

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so this time i decided to write SS or rather i would say VSS that is very short stories

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hope u will like my boring n stupid stories

currently i'll post two short stories n then u decide which one u like the most

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the choice is yours

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n one more thing i will from time to time post OS no no OSS that is one short scene

hope u will enjoy that also

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love u all

❤️

Jyoti

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Posted: 14 years ago

SS # 1

Chandni Raat

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part 1 -- page 1

part 2 -- page 8 -- https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1645428&PID=41611474�

part 3 -- page 10 -- https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1645428&TPN=10

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SS # 2

Unknown

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part 2 -- page 10 -- https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1645428&TPN=10

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OSS

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OSS # 1 -- page 1

OSS # 2 -- page 7

OSS # 3 -- page 9 (a special one..for celebrating my soul sis bday...it is her love story😳)

OSS # 4 -- page 9 (another special one...for celebrating muskanp wedding😳)

OSS # 5 -- page 10 (another special one...for celebrating my friend Ansah's b'day😳)

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Posted: 14 years ago

The unknown

The moon meets my eyes,
Stealing them; making me watch it, grow brighter.
Taking that moment from me,
As the stars burn through the sky.
I take in a deep breath as my head spins,
Not removing my eyes from the moon,
As if it holds all my answers.

this poem holds my inspiration for writing both the stories....especially the first one...

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CHANDNI RAAT

sab jag soye, hum jaage,

taaron se karen baatein, chandni raatein

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3vpvYCxUEgk

i absolutely love this song...in case u want to hear it...giving u the link

anime sad girl looking at the moon

Ek sard raat me, ek ladki apni khidki se chaand ko dekh rahi thi, usse kayi sawaal puch rahi thi. Puch rahi thi ki aisi kya galti hui usse jo use itni badi sazaa mili. Aisa kya galt kiya usne pyar karke, pyar par vishvas karke, jo sab kuch chodkar chala gaya, usse chodkar chala gaya, ye zindagi hi chodkar chala gaya''..

FLASHBACK

Pura ghar saja hua tha, charon taraf mehmaan, sab taraf shor-sharaba, bacche idar udar khel rahe the.

Woman 1: Bacchon, jaakar bahr khelo.

Woman 2: Sahi hai, aur nahi to kya, pura ghar sab pe chadha rakha hai.

Child 1: Kya maa, aapko to hamari koi bhi chiz pasand nahi aati, ab hamare khelne se bhi aapko pareshani hai.

Child 2: Aur nahi to kya taiji, jab dekho tab hame bahar bhej dete ho.

Man 1: Chalo, chalo sab baahar jaakar khelo.

(Saare bacche daudkar bahar chale jaate hain)

Man 2: Simi puttar, saari tyari ho gayi?

Woman 1 (Simi): Ji darji, sab kuch ho gaya.

Man 2 (Darji): Mujhe koi laaparwahi nahi chahiye. Koi kami nahi rehni chahiye.

Woman 2: Darji, aap chinta naa karo, humne sab kar liya hai.

Darji: Thik hai Rano puttar. Waise Geet aur Rajji kahan hai, kahin dikhyi nahi de rahe?

Woman 2 (Rano): Rajji to upar apne kamre me hain. Aur Geet, wo to humse jyada aapko pata hoga ki wo kahan hai. Kal aapne hi usko daanta tha naa. To aap hi jaane.

Darji: Oh ho, main to bhul hi gaya. Ab to wo mujhse bahut jyada naaraz hogi. Meri jhalli ko manana mujhe aata hai, meri puttar mujhse jyada der naaraz nahi reh sakti. Mujhe pata hai wo kahan hogi.

Man 1: Sach me darji, aapne Geet ko bigaad rakha hai.

Darji: Rajinder puttar tu nahi samjhega.

Man 1 (Rajinder): To phir aap hi samjha dijiye naa. Pata nahi aap dono ke beech kya khichadi patki rehti hai. Hume to kuch pata hi nahi chalta.

Darji: Geet puttar mera garoor hai, aur hum dono kya karte hain, ye hum dono kaa, kya kehte hain, haan secret hai. Ab mujhe jaane to nahi to pata nahi wo mujhe kya kya sazaa de dalegi.

Rajinder: Darji aaram se, aapki tabiyat kharaab ho jaayegi.

Rano: Aap kise rok rahe hain, wo to chale gaye.

Simi: Wo kabhi Geet ke aage kuch sunte hain kya?

Sab hasne lagte haun'..kisi ki baat sune bagair'..darji wahan se chale jaate hain'

FLASHBACK ENDS

Usse kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha, wo sabka saamna kaise karegi. Uske parivaar ko uspar kitna naaz tha. Par uski wajah se uske parivar ko zillat sehni padegi, uske bhai, behen ka kya hoga.

Ab uske paad sirf ek hi raasta bacha tha. Jab uska pyar hi nahi uske saath to uska iss duniya me rehne ka kya matlab. Sirf ek hi raata bacha tha ' apne pyaar ke paas jaane ' apni zindagi ke paas jaane ke liye use apni ye zindagi chodna padegi.

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OSS # 1

was feeling sad so wrote this mini..no.no..micro mini😆 scene...hope u like it...enjoy...

the night wind had something in it...like something special...like someone was near....someone special ...looking for her...

then suddenly the phone rang...

she began to wonder who will it be calling her at this time...

then she saw a pvt number flashing....

she instantly knew who it will be...

she said-- now u remember me...

he said -- sorry jaan...got busy...

she said -- maan....aisa kab tak chalega...u r always busy...no time for me...

maan -- my misti...mera har time to tumhara hai...

misti -- ye to bas bolne ki baat hai...

maan -- smiling -- accha bolo kya baat hai...mujhe yaad kar rahi thi..

misti -- nahi padosi ko..

maan -- geet...

geet -- aur nahi to kya...aap to kabhi door hi nahi hote to kaise yaad karungi...

maan -- knew what she was meaning to say but still he wanted to tease her -- matlab...

geet -- ooff...hoo...babaji ab main inka kya karun....pyar ki baatein bhi nahi samajhte...

maan -- babaji se baad me baat karna...pehle mere Q ka answer do..

geet - maan aap bhi naa...agar aap mere dil se door jaayenge tab hi to main aapko yaad karungi...

maan -- kya baat hai mrs khurana ...aaj bahut romantic ho rahin hai aap...

geet -- dhatt...aap bhi naa...waise aapko pata hai naa kal kya hai...

maan -- kal 4th april hai (this is the date when geet 1st aired)

geet -- wo to mujhe bhi pata hai...

maan -- kyun kuch aur bhi hai kya...

geet -- now getting angry -- nahin kuch nahi hai...n she cut the call...

maan knew exactly what was the next day..

here geet cursing him -- babaji ye maan bhi naa.....kal hamari first anniversary hai....n inko yaad bhi nahin.....

jab inko kuch farak nahi padta....to phir main bhi kyun sochun...chaddo...

suddenly light were gone off of the whole house....

geet got scared...she was always scared of the dark...,

she decided to go n check downstairs...since every1 was fast asleep....it was nearly 12 in the night...

geet -- koi hai.....geet tu bhi kya bol rahi hai...apne hi ghar me puch rahi hai ki koi hai kya.....tu bhi naa jhalli hai...

suddenly a pair of hands gripped her...one her mouth n another her waist...n someone said in her ears...HAAPY ANNIVERSARY MY MISTI...

she couldnt believe it...maan was there....she immediately turned n hugged him...n said -- AAPKO BHI....

suddenly the whole living room was lit...n it was decorated with her fav red roses n all the family members were there saying happy anniversay....

sh ecouldnt believe it...

geet -- aapko yaad tha...

maan -- tumhe kya laga...ki main apni zindagi ka sabse khubsurat pal bhul jaaonga...never....not even death...

she closed his mouth n said nodded in a no...

family -- agar aapka romance ho gaya ho to cake to cut kar lijiye...

every1 was laughing n geet was trying hard not to blush...

they enjoed the rest of the night...😉

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

Congratulation for the SS Collection.
beautiful poem .

beautiful start.
loved it.
os is awesome , loved it.
maaneet scene was too good.
good surprise gace by maan to geet.
update soon.

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Tyro

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SS # 2 -- title UNKNOWN

khudaya ve.....ishq ye kaisa ye ajeeb hai....

pyase tadap rahe hain...saahil kareeb hai...

by the way u guys can kill me if u want after reading it...😆...so b4hand only i'm running....😆

she always thought that her dream man will come n sweep her off her feet.....

she will be like a princess n her prince charming will come....

but life had other plans for her...

gurmeet...her only love...her prince charming came....he did sweep her off her feet....he was madly in love with her...just like she was madly in love with him...

there was no opposition from either of the family...

all of them were happy....

her family was happy as she would remain in HP.....

n his family was happy to have her as their daughter in law....

but 1 moment changed eveything...

1 moment n everything was vanished in thin air...

1 moment was all it took to him away from her.....

n in 1 moment he was gone....

no survivors...no nothing....all because of one false accusation on his family by his sister's in-laws....

n the next thing everyone saw was fire taking down the whole house along with every1 in it...

her dream shattered...

the man she loved was gone....

she had no will to live...

years had gone by...

she was 18 when her engagement with gurmeet was fixed...

she is 25 now...living god knows y....

she wanted to kill herself...

she had survived everytime....

her family was worried about her....

ever since she turned 23...all her attention focussed on her education n career....

nobody questioned her,....

nobody stopped her....

so when she got a job offer from delhi...she accepted right away...

she was feeling suffocating there...

everything reminded her of him....

every lane, every building, reminded her of him...

every night she cried herself to sleep....

but now was her chance,....

her family members were wanting to get her married...

she didnt want to...she couldnt....she wont...at any cost...

n this was her chance of going away from everything...

she got a very plum offer from an overseas firm who wanted to establish there office there...n were looking for suitable candidates...

she grabbed the opportunity...

it was the only was she could remain with her man....her gurmeet....

but destiny had other plans for her...

delhi was looking forward to welcome her with open arms...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#10

emotional part.
me feel sad for geet.
update soon.

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