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jenny

@ajenn

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

wow... awesome OS.. indeed a good moral value in
There isnt much story like dis. I must say urs is one of it.
Who wouldnt fall if we r bring complicated wif all d sweetest thing in d world.
But being a sensible person, we shouldnt trust some1 wif closed eyes.
Open ur eyes n look at d world. The world is no longer as beautiful as it is.
We need to bcareful wif our steps so tat we wont land into grave.
dis reminds me of an famous quote " Don't Judge a Book by Its Cover."

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Saba

@Eccentric.Being

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: naddiya26
dear i will tell you the surrounding in its final part

Then continue soon Will wait.....😊

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namita25

@namita25

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#43

nice OS...loved it to the core.

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Nice story.👏 for U. Girls r so emotional hence easily caught by such evils.

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wajiha-1

@wajiha-1

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

awesome naddiya i love this story
awesome
the moral of story is superb
GIRLS DONT TO FOOL AND IF U TURST SOMEONE THINK 100 TIME BEFORE U TRUST HIM OR HER
WARNA YOU WILL NOT BE ABLE TO TRUST AGIN IN SOMEONE THROUGH OUT YOUR ENTIRE LIFE
AWESOME WORK NADDIYA 👏

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537048

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Hey nadia whatever u wrote is totally a reality bt don't mind i don't agree with geet she shld hv punished him for his deeds

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punam

@punamluvshilpa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

not bad..its like a true story..

punam

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Tanu

@butterfly.tanu

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

loved it so much dear...
awsome...

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

lovely os . moral was very good we must learn from such stories

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Sarita

@AnonMSK

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: naddiya26
dear some time when thingsglitter they dont let see the real side as the shine is so strong it hide the darker side of the object.

thats what i m saying.. ..sensible ppl dont get carried away by glitz. Getting enamoured by glamour is d biggest mistake. I would have preferred if d os had 2 or more parts. Ofc there was a gr8 moral bt i guess punishing dev was a must. Another reason 4 saying so is coz u used geet as protagonist, her caricature is that of a strong woman.(i know cvs have assasinated that woman, bt writers like u should do their bit to bring out her strong personality).anyway good work:-)