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Saba Siddique

@Sabaah..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

love it...u r great at it yar...amazngg n thx 4 d pm:):)

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Sarita

@AnonMSK

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

I really dont think any sensible person can fall in such a trap. Quite difficult to believe.moreover i would have preferred it if she had retorted back n make him realise that women arent tissues.
Btw suddenly this kind of os, i hope all is right there.

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Vijaylakshmi Singh

@Lakshmi86

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Hi,

Hmmm nice update!!!!!!!!!

Ofocurse the Ff had a moral............i really liked it!!!!!

coz this is the fact that everyone has to keep in thier mind...........

My mom says one can understand a person completely when you give him responsibilites.............

coz baatein toh har koi karta hai, par kartavya koi nahi nibhaata...........

Hmmm i felt really sad for Geet in the update

First of all she was sad and lonely and Dev gave her another reason.............

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Nadia

@naddiya26

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: sarita21992
I really dont think any sensible person can fall in such a trap. Quite difficult to believe.moreover i would have preferred it if she had retorted back n make him realise that women arent tissues.
Btw suddenly this kind of os, i hope all is right there.

dear some time when things glitter they dont let see the real side as the shine is so strong it hide the darker side of the object.

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Adeena

@..Adeena..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

i likeed itt aloot...
loved the moral behind it...
u should write some more OS like this one...
its gr8....

Adeena..

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Nadia

@naddiya26

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Lakshmi86
Hi,

Hmmm nice update!!!!!!!!!

Ofocurse the Ff had a moral............i really liked it!!!!!

coz this is the fact that everyone has to keep in thier mind...........

My mom says one can understand a person completely when you give him responsibilites.............

coz baatein toh har koi karta hai, par kartavya koi nahi nibhaata...........

Hmmm i felt really sad for Geet in the update

First of all she was sad and lonely and Dev gave her another reason.............

yup your mom is right it is the best thing to judge person when you dont have anyting .as in happiness everyone is there for you.

one finger is better that wipe your tears in pain then ten that clap at your success .

i am feeling to write the other part to to complete the os should i ?

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Adeena

@..Adeena..

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: naddiya26

yup your mom is right it is the best thing to judge person when you dont have anyting .as in happiness everyone is there for you.
one finger is better that wipe your tears in pain then ten that clap at your success .

i am feeling to write the other part to to complete the os should i ?

yeah you should..!!

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Nadia

@naddiya26

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: sharmake11
honestly we cant blame men only because even the girl is to blame she have to know the person she is going out with no offense to anyone its my POV thank yu for bringing this topic to be OS love it its lovely i hope yu add another one too thanks pm

yup you are right where was girl mind why she trusted .

may be some time girls are more silly and they suffer for rest of their life

i am too thinking to write the other part

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Nadia

@naddiya26

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: serenelove
Hey naddiya,
different idea but its good. You could have given a little more surrounding and background info. to create more impact. But it is good attempt dear

dear i will tell you the surrounding in its final part