Heartbeat -An AR Mini FF *Completed* 21/3/11 - Page 39

Originally posted by: -simi

Sorry for late comment. Very sad end 😔, but you did a nice work with the story. I loved it😃

Originally posted by: coolvini4u

This one's is one of the best stories i ever read! I mostly detest sad endings ! They are hard to digest somewhere. But yeah, i know they do happen infact. But for this one, i have like no words to express. I cried gallons. Coz in the mid only, i had this feeling that Ridz ll be the donor and thus , from then every action of hers made me shed this salty water. It was choking. It was unbearable. Just cant imagine how Armaan got the strength to live after knowing everything . Guess, thats wat LOVE is !

Hats off for writing this wonderful and beautiful story. Full of emotions. Just got me glued. Simply amazing!

Love
Vini

Originally posted by: Rihanna4all

That was heart wrenching ending.....but I really loved their love for each other.

Look forward to read more of your works.

Originally posted by: sweety7395

hey this mini was awesome

sorry i didnt comment after each part.....i was a little busy but the whole mini was amazing

really loved the story

the ending was sad but it was really good

cant wait to read more work from you

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: danny0072

really touching story reminds of what one can do for their love also showed that not every is unfaithful

Originally posted by: UreebaluvsKSG

jux luved ittt ❤️

Originally posted by: sonia_92

okay i dont normally comment on mini fics, i just press like n skip to the next one unless it is from one of my favourite fanfic writers! but darling, this is the first ever fic i've read from you and trust me i think this is by far one of the BEST mini fics i've read on this entire forum n trust me i've read ALOT! the reason i'm counting this among the few best mini fics is just one "YOUR ENDING"! you know how writers normally give the fic a cliche happy ending even if it's not logical just to make the readers happy? i'm not saying that's wrong, i can be one of those readers at times too but i actually believe that an ending should be what the STORY requires and what fits the concept the best logically and emotionally both. Your ending to this fic has that factor, you did total justice to your concept and i salute you for that! you have amazing writing skills too but ur instinct and ur decision to give the story the RIGHT ending is what i respect the most! you did a briliant job with this fic and i love it even more for the beautiful ending you've given it!

if ridhima had not been the donor i would have actually been disappointed because this story in particular demanded her sacrifice! and not to forget, your fic actually made me cry and not just cry but the way you have portrayed armaan's illness and riddhima's support, it actually took me down memory lane and i actually remember a death a witnessed a year back of a VERY dear family member! your writing held such emotion that i couldnt help relatin myself to it! thank you

u really made me cry yaar..

sooo awsum...

loved it..........

do write more..........

thnx for the pm................