Created

Last reply

Replies

219

Views

14.8k

Users

11

Frequent Posters

blah_blah thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
awwww 😳 😳

such a cute part 😳
Tomiko thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 19 years ago
thanks for your comments guys 😛

part 39 (yup..i actually checked)

Natasha and Adi came down hand-in-hand and go over to where everyone's sitting...they're all happy that Natasha isn't angry anymore...Natasha and adi exchange rings and everyone claps...Sukanya gives everyone sweets and food, everyone laughs at adi and vedants jokes...

Dk notices that Disha looks a tired so they both go home while Rano, Vedant and Adi stay back to help clear up....

****

in the car...

Disha: mein kush hu ke Natasha zaada gusse mein nahin thi...

DK: haan...mujhe tho lagtha tha ke woh adi ko mar hi dalleghi...*he laughs* lau...hum ghar ponch gaye...

he turns round to look at Disha and smiles when he sees that shes already asleep...he smiles, gets out the car, goes to the other side and picks her up...while hes taking her inside the house he stares at how beautiful she looks...finally they reach the bedroom...carefully DK places her on the bed and strokes her hair...he bends down and kisses her forehead, while disha hugs his arm in her sleep...DK cuddles up with her and goes to sleep...

****

in the morning...

ved is sleeping when Rano comes upto and smiles sweetly...she bends down and whicpers in his ear..

R: jaanu...utho, subha hogaye...

vedant just smiles and turns in his sleep...Rano stands up and puts her hands on her hips...she then shakes his shoulder...

R: vedant!...utho...

Vedant just covered himself with blanket...Rano grabbed the blanket and took it off him...then she turned him round, got ontop of him...took both of his shoulders and started shaking him like crazy....

R: VEDANT UTHO!!!

ved: arre...

he took her arms and pulled her closer so she was lying on top of him...

ved: thum mujhe sune kyun nahi dethi...

R: kyuki mujhe thumse both zaroori bath karni hai...

ved: kya?

she bends down and whispers something in his hear....

ved: Kya?!!!!!!!!

he smiles and gives her a loooooooooonnnnnnnnngggggg hug...

****

DK comes out of his room wearing a black suit and looking absaloutely yum! 😉 he goes upto Disha whos taking a plate into the kitchen...

DK: Disha!...thumhe kithni bhaar kaha hai ke kaam math kiya karo...

he takes the plate and makes her sit down...

Disha: kya DK...mein plate hi lekar ja rahi thi...

DK: meh kuch nahi suna chatha...thum bas aram karro...

Disha is smiling at DK when Vedant and Rano come out...

Ved: brother, bhabhi...mujhe aapse kich kehna hai...

DK: haan, kaho...

ved: woh...

hes cut off by another voice...

"DK"

everyone turns round and they're shocked to see Mehika!!!!
Kajal741 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
😲

very very shocking!!!!!!! loved the dk n disha part! 😳
*Guli* thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 19 years ago
arre yeh Mehika kahan se aa gayi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



please cont soon!!!!
Tomiko thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 19 years ago
Part 40

Everyone was shocked to see Mehika, and at first they just stood there staring at her…finally DK reacted…he walked upto her and in an angry tone…

DK: thum yaha kya kar rahi ho?!! Nikal jao!!

Disha walked upto DK and held his arm so that he wouldn't do anything drastic…

M: DK…Disha…meh thum dono se maafi mangna chathi hu….mere waja se thum dono ko kithni thakleefe jelni parree…

She was crying but DK wasn't even looking at her…

M: please DK mujhe maaf kardo..

DK (still angry): teek hai…mene thumhe maaf kiya…ab jao yaha se…

Disha: DK!…usse apni galthi ka ehsaas hogaya hai…

Disha felt sorry for Mehika and held her hands… (oh yeah…BTW, Mehika doesn't have a son in this FF)

Disha: koi baat nahi Mehika, galthi har insaan se hothi hai…

Mehika smiles gratefully at her…

M: thanks…waise mujhe ab jana chaye…

Disha: teek hai…DK thumhe chod dehga…hana DK…

DK just looks at her…he really doesn't wanna go but Disha's giving him warning glances…

DK: *sighs* teek hai…chalo…

DK and Mehika leave in his car, while Ved eats breakfast with Rano and Disha looks through a magazine…


DK and Mehika reach her house…

M: thanks DK…

She smiles at him but he's not really bothered…

She gets out the car and opens her gate…she stops when she sees a man coming out of her house with two big bags which he chucks down on the floor…DK realizes that theres something wrong so he gets out and goes upto them…(the man's owns the house and Mehika pays him rent)…

M: yeh…yeh sab kya hai?

Man: yeh thumhara saman hai..nikal jao yaha se…

M: par…

Man: par war kuch nahin…pichle theen mahino se thumne rent nahin deya…

M: meh dedoghee…bas thodi dher…

Man: nahin…both waqt dehchuka…is ghar ke liye both lok thayar hai…jao thum yaha se…

The man pushes her out with her bags and locks the gate…Mehika stands there crying on the road with her baggage…DK sees her, goes upto her and takes her bags…

DK: chalo…

M: kaha…

He takes her arm and leads her to the car and makes her sit down while he puts her bags in the boot…


Saighal house….

The doorbell rings and Disha's gets upto open it…

Rano: arre di!…bethiye…meh dekh thi hu…

Rano goes to the door and is surprised to see DK…

DK: jiju…

DK comes in followed by Mehika!!!

He calls the servant and gets him to take Mehika and her luggage to the guest room…

Disha: DK…

DK: I'm sorry Disha…par Mehika ke karaye daar ne usko ghar se nikhal diya…isliye mein usse yahan lekar agaya…

Disha smiles…

Disha: koi bath nahin…

DK: acha…mujhe office keliye dher ho rahi hai…bye…

DK leaves and Disha goes to talk to Mehika…Rano's left at the entrance and shes not too happy about Mehika staying at the house…
Late evening…everyones coming for dinner so Ranos setting the table while Ved and Dk are changing…the doorbell rings and Ranos about to go when Mehika gets up….

M: thum kyu thakleef lethi ho Rano…meh jaathi hu…

She opens the door to the Bhosles who are all shocked to see her…

What will the Bhosles say? …will they accept her in the house or not?

Kajal741 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
hopefully they do! she seems a bit nice in ur ff!

btw, awesome part! 👏
*Guli* thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 19 years ago
Please dont make her neg!!

let our 2ds be together!


please cont soon!
blah_blah thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
👏 👏 👏 great part...!!!! 👏 👏 👏
Tomiko thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 19 years ago
sorry guys its late...

part 41

They're all shocked to see her (it's Suhas, Gautham, Azuba an Sukanya)

Suhas: thum?!!!

They're all angry…Disha and DK explain the situation to them and tell them that Mehika's sorry…they don't believe it but don't want Disha and DK to feel sorry so they don't say anything…they all sit down and Rano gives everyone their food…

Disha: arre aiy…tashu nahi ayee…

Suhas: arre beta…thum tho usse janthi hu…usko tho sirf kaam ki parwa hai…

DK: shaadi ki thayaria hogayee?

Sukanya: haan…bas kuch aur cheese mangwani hai…

They all talk about the wedding and the ladies discuss what they're gonna wear…

After dinner they sit down and have dessert…its choclate cake (aww man…first Guli's strawberry cheesecake and now this…i'm soooo hungry)…only Disha's got ice-cream cause she can't stomach choolate…

Rano and ved are sitting on one side and they're having a whispered conversation…

Rano: you tell them…

Ved: why me?

Rano: cause you're the guy…

Ved: that's a lame excuse…
Rano: I don't care…

Disha hears them…

Disha: Rano, vedant…is there something you want to tell us?

Rano: umm…yeah…go on vedant…

Ved: umm…well the thing is that…Ranos…umm….

He closes his eyes and says everything in a rush…

Ved: I'm gonna be a mum and Ranos gonna be a dad…

Everyones like huh?!

Then they get it…and they congratulate the couple…ved's relieved that he finally told everyone and Ranos feeling all shy…

whoops...changed the language of my dialogue half way through 😆 ...sorry guys
Kajal741 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: nibbles


Ved: I'm gonna be a mum and Ranos gonna be a dad…

Everyones like huh?!

😆😆😆 i think he was too nervous!

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: goodkashish

6 years ago

Kassir ...Sujal&Kashish...Part 28 - Pg 33

Kassir Extremes Intro 9pm - London Airport - Christmas Day It was a cold chilly night in the beautiful city of London. We arrive at Heathrow...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".