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Posted: 19 years ago
u didnt write too much! u need to write more!!!! 😆


luv all the part! i bet adi spent those 2 lakhs on a house for them or a wedding ring! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
thats exactly what i was thinking Kaju!!

great part nibbles! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
awwwwwww...thanks guys 😛

Part 34

adi was shocked to see Natasha at the entrance!!!!!!!!!

he pulled away the girl he was hugging....

adi: alisha!!!!

alisha stood there smiling athim....

A: meh jaanthi thi...meh jaanthi thi ke thum mujhe yuhi pehchan loghe ghe....abhi bhi mujhe ithna pyar karthe ho thum....

Natasha walked upto them, grabbed alishas arm and swung her round....

N: WHO THE HELL ARE YOU?!

alisha gave her a dirty look....

A: excuse me!!!!...meh adi gi mangetaar hu....aur saath meh uske hone wale bache ki maa...

Natasha looked from adi to alisha...

adi: Natasha...i swear...

BAAM!!!!

she slapped him round the face and ran out of the hotel....

adi: Natasha!!!...Natasha meri baath sunno...

****

Bhosle house....

Disha and suhas were sitting there talking when Natasha came in and ran upto her room without giving them a second look.....

suhas: Natasha ko kya hua?

Disha: patha nahi...meh jakar dekhthi hu....

Disha went into Natashas room and saw her breaking everything in her sight....

Dish: Tashu....

Natasha looked up, Disha went over to her and hugged her....

Dish: tashu....kya hua...batha tho sahi....

between tears 😭 , natasha told disha everything...disha was shocked....

N: di please...mujhe kuch dher keliye akela chor dijeye....

Dish: par....

N: di, please!!!

Dish: teek hai....

she left the room and went downstairs....she was still thinking about what Natasha had said when the phone rang.....

Dish: hello....

adi: hello, disha...meh adi....

Dish: thumne yaha phone yu kiya?

adi: disha please....Natasha ke thara thum bhi mujhe galath math samjho....

dish: tho aur kya samjhu? kya yeh sach nahi hai ke alisha thumhari mangetaar hai?

adi sighed...

adi: hah...alisha meri mangethaar thi...ek saal pehle, par woh mujhe chor kar chalegaye....aur, aur yeh bacha....meh iske bhaare meh kuch nahi jaantha....please, Natasha ko samjao...

disha sighed....

Dish:i'm sorry adi...meh kuch nahi kar sakthi....Natasha ka gusa tho thum jaanthe ho...thum he usse manao....

and she hung up....

****

later at night....

Natasha went out to the balcony and saw adi standing outside!!!!!!!

he noticed her and smiled

adi: Natasha!!!!

N: she gave him an angry look...

N: challe jao!!! 😡

adi: Natasha...jab thak thum meri baath nahi sunoghi...than thak meh yaha se nahi jaooga...

Natasha just glared at him and went inside, leaving adi on his own outside....

sorry guys....really short, but i gotta go now....so cya 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
finally caught up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

that was awesome!!

Please cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
omg!!!!!! u cant split them up!!!!!! 😭

great parts! and what happened to natasha's husband? 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
awwwwwww

great part..bechara adi!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
guys...i'm gonna change something...Natasha never got married....she found out about how sukanya only cared about money so she left for America....was gonna use that husband bit, but it ain't gonna fit in with the story 'cause i've got different ideas now....

part 35

Disha walked into Natashas room....

Disha: Tashu....meh thodi dher meh jaa rahi hu....thum kana ka lena...

Natasha didn't respond....Disha went upto her and put her arm round her shoulder...

Disha: thum adi ko ek moka tho doh...woh sab galath fehmia dhoor kardhega....shaid alisha uska past ho

N: agar woh adi ki past thi, tho phir adi neh mujhe bathaya kyu nahin?....mujhse chupaya kyu?

Disha sighed...she could see that there was no way that Natasha would listen to her.....

Disha: teek hai...DK mera inthezaar kar raha hoga...bye....

she left Natasha on the bed....some time later it started raining!!!...thunder and lightning....Natasha changed and went out onto the balcony and was shocked to see that adi was still there!!!!....he was sitting at the gate and just when he was about too look up Natasha hid behind the balcony door.....she kept stealing looks at him and wondering wether he was innocent....

****

at the jail....

vas is in jail and pacing backwards and forwards when she hears the 'tick-tick' of someones heels and she looks up...she smiles and calls out....

vas: alisha....

its revealed that alisha and vas know each other!!!!

A: hi vasudhaji...aap ko yeh kene aye thi, ke aap ka kaam hogaya....

vas gave an evil smile....

vas: woh bewakoof larki yeh samajthi thi keh woh vasudha ko dabah kar rak sakthi hai hmph...good job alisha....

both the women smiled at each other, but they didn't know that a constable was eaves-dropping....

she was lost in her thoughts about alisha and adi when her mobile rang....

N: hello....what?!!! are you sure?....ok...

she hung up the phone and looked worried....

N: alisha vasudha se milne gaye?

she ran to the balcony and looked outside....the rain had stopped and adi had fallen asleep against the gate....even from where she was standing, Natasha could tell that he was soaked!!!

she took a blanket and went outside...she gave a guilty look and ran her fingers through his hair as she covered him with the blanket...

soz guys...very boring...next part will be better, i promise!!!!
Kajal741 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
so sweet!!!!!! loved da last part about natasha covering him with the blanket. 😳

pls continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
awww...man seriously don't know how you guys read this...got pretty boring in the last couple of days....

part 34....

Natasha was still looking at him when adi slowly opened his eyes....

adi: Natasha....

he quickly stood up but before he could say anything Natasha gave such an unexpected hug that he nearly fell...

N: i'm sorry adi ke mene thum par shaak kia...alisha vasudha ke saath mile hue hai...

adi: kya?

N: haan...mujhe jail se information milee....i really sorry...

adi unhugged (is that even a word? 😕) her and looked into her eyes....

adi: please Natasha, sorry tho mujhe kehna chaye, mene thumhe kabhi bathaya nahi alisha ke baare meh....woh meri mngethar thi...par ab tho ek saal hogaya humari mangani ko toote huwe....

N: i'm really, really sorry adi...mene kabhi socha nahi tha ke....

adi: ke kya?...yahi nah ke iss duniya meh sirf ek hi duffer hai jo mujhse pyar kar sakthi...come on Natasha...adi par har larki marthi hai...

N: adi!!!!!

she playfully punched him while he laughed and hugged her....

****

a few weeks later....

all the women are in bhosle house discussing Natasha and adis wedding (its in two weeks time)

Disha is eating chocolate ice-cream....Rano is making a list of all the guests....sukanya and suhas are talking about what saris to wear, and Natasha is being measured for her wedding dress...

N: Rano...shaadi ke cards agaye kya?

R: haan...kal aye the...ab baas sare mehmaan ke naam likne hai...

N: aye...hum bakhi shopping kab kar rahe hai?

sukanya: hum kal chale ghe beta....

N: kaki...dcorations ka....

Disha: arre tashu, zaara break lagao....shaadi ke baare meh thum zaada math socho...hum par chod dho....

N: aap par?!

she started laughing...

N: di, aap ka baas challe tho shaadi par mehmaan ko sirf ice-cream kaliye....

everyone laughs while disha sticks out her tongue and carries on with her ice-cream....

****

outside a court....

it's vas's final trial today, an after this it'll be decided whats gonna happen to her....she gets out the van wearing a white sari and stops when she sees.....

lol....sorry guys....too busy with coursework....
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏


u may think its boring but we dont!

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