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Posted: 14 years ago
Can't see ridzy hurt yaar........do something...get Aakash back n make Armaan jealous n leave that blonde......
do somethin in next part plz........really can't read such parts.........
sorry if ik hurt u but when i read an AR ff i imadine Shilpa Anandr as Riddhima n a movie plays at the back of my mind......n at one point its like i can't see anymore........
plz do some good for Ridzy...........please Shrutika.........can't read how hurt she is n how miserable her life is turnin day by day.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aww don't worry guys! I can't say there will be no more sad parts, but Riddhima's condition is DEFINITELY gonna improve now! And as for Armaan's PoV....Yeah that'll come soon as well! In another 2-3 parts or so, or maybe even earlier, because from this point onwards, I have this mind gap, I honestly have NO idea what to write next, so in most probability, Armaan's PoV is gonna follow very soon from this point! 😉

I would just say, look ahead for a few funny and hilarious moments from now, not in the next part or anything, but definitely in the end end wala parts, mostly after you'll have Armaan's PoV! 😃

Stay tuned! 😃

And hey, I updated TWICE in a day, THRICE in 2 days! So I should get comments as well okay! 😆

P.S. Next update seedha next week! Haha! 😆
Edited by Dmg8594 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
just read the complete part!
urgh, andrea - seriously include me in ur story so that i can kill her myself😆
anyways, am glad that ridz is determined to let her love known to armaan!
that way we get armaan's pov quicker!
i rely hope armaan got the message! we already had a dumb ridz for 15 parts, we don't another dumb one!
now that ridz has confessed to armaan, would we get his POV in the next part?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Once A KaJen'ian, KSG'ian & Jeni'ian.. Always A KaJen'ian, KSG'ian & Jen'ian <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow

that was sooo awesome! (installment 3)

like really wow!

ridz got drunk? hmm so i'm soooo confused about armaan/andrea!

she was wearing the ring/neckalace?


and armaan is a confused soul
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Posted: 14 years ago
Riddhima is a complete nautanki.. i know what people do when they are drunk.. and this was a little unexpected from Riddhima even when she was drunk.. but i felt bad for her.. quite pathetic her state is.. I am sure she's gonna get some from Armaan for doing what she did.. but i guess, all will be well in the end.. really want to know whether Armaan has given up on her or has seriously moved on with Andrea.. i think the former.. obviously.. since AR are the lead pair.. but i'd love to read about his feelings.. hope that comes soon.. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey
wooooooooooohhhhhhoooooooooooo................
i wanna scream out loud...............
wat all ridz said[sang actually] even though apart frm dose most imp 3 magical wrdz.....i still luvd it;;;;;;;;;;;😍
hope everythin goes as she thought...........
[And then, all of a sudden, as if the world had drowned, I saw his eyes change...Overcome with happiness of some kind, as if I had found that hidden depth in his eyes,]

m getting soooooooooooooooooo desperate 4 d next part
wud b eagerly waitin 4 next week 4 d update
luv ya
tc
shaaz

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Posted: 14 years ago

2 words for you!!!

LOVED ITT!!!!!
The whole thing..WELLL he needed it!!! HUH??!! GIVING THAT HEART PIECE TO ANDREA??!!! GRRRRRRRRRRRRRR I HATE HIM!!! but i love him all the more!! =) =) Especially when you wrote about that happiness in his eyes!!! YEAYY!!! i can see sumthing coming!!! YIPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE next update..SOOOOONN!!!! can't wait this long!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was JUST AWESOME!
Seriously i loved the drunk Riddhima, but dayum it She couldnt say it completely and i absolutely hate this Armaan...now i kinda know for sure that hes not playing some prank, i mean he danced and kissed Andrea..uggh stupid guy! Riddhima should definetely make him jealous..screw Armaan, hes just making her cry! lol
But yahhh it was filmy but i likeddd it ;) I even enjoyed Riddhimas and Anjies conversation, it was different and i never thought or viewed Riddhima in those terms...but it was nice for your to put forward that ;) And that scene where Riddhima had tears and Armaan walked away with Andrea was just so sad! I feel so bad for her...and also, youre a great writer truly because the way you write actually makes me feel the depth of each character, well mostly RIddhima...but im only hating on Armaan and feeling sorry for Riddhima because thats how you have protrayed them...so that means, youve expressed the story plot in great detail that the readers completely are withdrawn to it :) i hope that makes sense..loll
Continue the next partt soon pleaseeee, i dont know if i can even wait for that long after thisss update! lol
Edited by Armaan-KSG - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago


Loved it shrutika 😃😊

just waiting for the next part 😊
You are an awesome writer....your awotb is so damn creative and innovative yaar....i mean the atmosphere you create in ur reader's mind is amazing...
I bet if karan Johar or yash chopra reads ur ff they can actually think of making a movie on it😃
Keep it up girl😛
Waiting eagerly for next week and your next update...!!😊



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