Sr Os-When A Heart Breaks(Part 4:Pg.12)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dedicated to all Srians🤗


Love should bring joy, it should grant a person peace, but here and not, it was bringing only pain

"Where are you?"

"That's a fine way of greeting a person no Hi just where are you "

He sighed .She was the only one in this world who expected common courtesies however full of problems life was "Hi where are you ?"

The person on the other line of the phone smiled . She knew what he was thinking. Problems or not she needed common courtesies " Much better. I am...

"Anyways wherever you are reach the airport in about half-an hour ."

"You aren't going anywhere . Airport. One hour.Be there.Bye"

Sid opened the door . He looked around . A strong feeling of nostalgia over-whelming him . The Modi Penthouse . The house which was a witness of Riddhima's love,his love , their love . His smile vanished as he realized some thing . The house was a witness of his love and Riddhima's farz.

As he walked towards his room . Thousands of memories engulfed him . The memory of Riddhima's birthday was the one which hurt the most . She had loved him . That's why she had taken such a big step . But once again that was her duty,wasn't it ? He let out a snort of disgust .

His eye's filled with pure outrage, pain and angst.

"Tumne mereko pyaar ka matlab sikhaya"

"Ab yeh rishta hi meri sacchai hai Tumhi mere sachchai ho,mujhe farak padta hai "

"Iss baar hum apni maarzi se shaadi kar rahein hai "

"Mein sirf tumhare saath rehna chahti hoon "

"Lies" He screamed in frustration and pain "Only lies . I was stupid enough to believe her again and again "

He slammed his hand on the table near by. Their photo which was encased in a photo frame fell and broke . Never to be joined again .

He walked bare foot on the pieces of glass . Unknown to the pain due to the numbing sensation he felt all over his body .

On reaching his room , he threw his clothes on the bed . Tears of frustratation running down his face . He punched the cupboard . His tears as all tears do turned into sobs . He slumped his back against the wall . He was fine with the fact that she didn't love him . But why did she make him believe that she loved him. Why did she make him believe they could be together ? If she never made him believe that she loved him it would have hurt less .Her smile,her blush and her love filled eyes . Everything had been fake . He was only a burden and a duty for her . While he stupidly gave her the world . He put his head in his hands . He felt better after breaking down . He had been quietly suffering so that Riddhima doesn't feel his pain . He didn't want her to feel guilty for loving some one else . He laughed at himself . Even after she put him through so much . She gave him her all the pain in the world and yet he still wanted her to give her all the happiness in life .

A hysterical scream made him look up in start . He finally deciphered the hysterical screams . Riddhima was shouting his name hysterically . He wondered why she was here and then wondered why she was shouting hysterically. He figured out that she was here that she was here for the same reason as he was .As for the hysterical shouting he guessed that she had seen the broken photo frame and his blood . He wiped his tears and stood up .

At that very moment Riddhima entered the room. Her eyes giving away the fact that she was expecting the worst . Her relief could be felt on seeing Sid safe . In her arms she carried the broken photo frame which at the moment seemed to represent their broken relationship

His heart broke at the fact that she was holding the photo frame like that was the only thing that mattered . He felt like laughing .Maybe some-things never change.Some people get used to being fake . He felt shocked at his bitterness . He was many things but he was not bitter .

Riddhima searched his eyes for emotion but she could only find emptiness which hurt her even more . Silence hurts more than words .But she knew that she deserved it . She saw his clothes on the bed and a suit case . Is he going some-where? She had gotten too used to him. Life without Sid ? Life without her savior ?Seemed almos impossible to her . She knew the answer but she asked him anyway

"Are you going some-where?"

"Yes"

Her heart clutched with panic . "Why?"

"To get away from you and my brother "



"I've been burdened by questions I've asked myself a thousand times since the last time we were together.
Why did I do it? And would I do it again?
It was I, you see, who ended it."

(Quote credit:Nicholas Sparks)

To be continued...


Part 2-Pg.5

Part 3-Pg.9

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NusiSg thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yayyyyyyy im d frst 1 here.....
wil comment aftr reading it.....😆😆
*edited*
omg.....praguuuu....sids unbearable pain....😭
n dats farzy maiyyas farzy crapppp.......grrrrrrrrrrr😡

"Tumne mereko pyaar ka matlab sikhaya"

"Ab yeh rishta hi meri sacchai hai Tumhi mere sachchai ho,mujhe farak padta hai "

"Iss baar hum apni maarzi se shaadi kar rahein hai "

"Mein sirf tumhare saath rehna chahti hoon "


i doubt shes here in modi house fr real??????😲

wel i ll wait fr ur update n fr d VM.....😆😆


Edited by docnuss - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Pragzieee... 🤗 i din knw u write One shots.. 😲
Nice start..👍🏼 i liked d way u portrayed Siddy.. n conveyed his feelings.. especially dis part..😭

He was fine with the fact that she didn't love him . But why did she make him believe that she loved him. Why did she make him believe they could be together ? If she never made him believe that she loved him it would have hurt less .

i guess all of us hav/had d same things goin on in our minds..😡 n i hate R for dis.. 😡
Looking forward to d next part..😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: docnuss

yayyyyyyy im d frst 1 here.....

wil comment aftr reading it.....😆😆
*edited*
omg.....praguuuu....sids unbearable pain....😭
n dats farzy maiyyas farzy crapppp.......grrrrrrrrrrr😡

"Tumne mereko pyaar ka matlab sikhaya"

"Ab yeh rishta hi meri sacchai hai Tumhi mere sachchai ho,mujhe farak padta hai "

"Iss baar hum apni maarzi se shaadi kar rahein hai "

"Mein sirf tumhare saath rehna chahti hoon "


i doubt shes here in modi house fr real??????😲

wel i ll wait fr ur update n fr d VM.....😆😆


Thanks😳
and yep no W*Hat my eekjams are kind of over i have all the time in the world 😆

Originally posted by: nami2811

Pragzieee... 🤗 i din knw u write One shots.. 😲
Nice start..👍🏼 i liked d way u portrayed Siddy.. n conveyed his feelings.. especially dis part..😭

He was fine with the fact that she didn't love him . But why did she make him believe that she loved him. Why did she make him believe they could be together ? If she never made him believe that she loved him it would have hurt less .

i guess all of us hav/had d same things goin on in our minds..😡 n i hate R for dis.. 😡
Looking forward to d next part..😳

i think the last time i wrote an Os was during SR's second marriage after that it hurt too much to write an SR os 😆
Thanks😳
i know i hate her too
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Posted: 14 years ago
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'sigh'
Ok before I comment Pragzie Im expecting a sad ending in your OS cos I know you love them!😆
Now coming to the update everytime I think about that disgusting 'farz' word and how it must have stabbed Sids heart to hear it, I feel like killing Ridhimma. All he gave her was love, protection, and security. And all he got in return was pain and heartache!
But....but....but, I think I always hope that Ridhimma eventually realises that sitaraman was nothing and it was Sid who was always her soulmate.
I can hope right!😳
Cant wait for the next part Pragzie!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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**Unreserved**

Wonderful............. was the first thought that came to my mind when I saw Zeenia PM announcing your OS and then I was like 😡 Pragzie did not tell me about it 😭😭😭😭

But koi nahi ........ I know .......... you thought of it and then immediately wrote it and posted it.

You with your words add to the magic of SR even more. Sid's pains and agony Well described. Riddhima's condition well what she had done was pathetic It still hurts but you have still managed to write about her Commendable 👏


Riddhima's entry into the penthouse and Sid's thoughts are so well described It is but natural to react and think so

I am so waiting for the next update.........

Update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😛


Edited by DJ.. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Pragzie🤗....... Awesome.... This is the best!! Wow, you portrayed Sid's pain so well yaar!!

Feel sad for him..... N riddhima too... 😉

Continue soon n do pm me dear!!!

Thanks a bunch
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Posted: 14 years ago
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pragziiieeee 🤗

😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

sid's pain ahhhh!!!!!😭

how much i hate dat farzyy maiyaaa

n y she here again 4 what 😡 😡 😡

u love sad ending i hope its nt one f dose 😆 but after what she dont deseve sid😡

amazing part👏

waiting 4 next....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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u kno wat pragzie i want to love riddhima n i used to b one ov d biggest SR pankha......bt wenever i remembr d post 2nd marriage ridzy......🤢....i gt a real bad taste....n i js got depressed n feel so sick ov dat womwn k i wont express ma bitter feelings in words.....🤬
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Pragz - you know i love quotes same as you and i loved the Dear John quotes, they are so for SR
Great start, and you are right Silence hurts more then words
I cant believe Sid still called him - brother.......
Farz is the one word that is going to haunt him forever, it hurts more then anything - very hard to love again not only that but to trust and have faith in someone else again

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