Sr Os-When A Heart Breaks(Part 4:Pg.12)

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innocenteyez92

@innocenteyez92

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

wow
its awesome.....👏
very nice.
plz add me to ur pm list.

Edited by innocenteyez92 - 14 years ago

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-Harshu-

@-Harshu-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

My li'll Pragzuuuu 🤗🤗

This is freaking Awesome 😳

Ahhhhh Sid
I can so feel his pain 😭
He gave his world to Ridz but what she gave him in return only PAIN😡😡

FARZ grrrr 😡😡😡
I hate dis word 😡😡😡

And whenever I think abt dis I HATE dat Maiya even more 😡😡😡

But just like Zeenzie I also feel dat eventually she'll realise dat Haraam is a selfish , obsessive PAGAL 😡😡😡 & Sid is her soulmate 😳

Seeing at d past records I am expecting a sad ending in dis OS also 😆

Anyways can't wait 4 d next part
Continue soon....

Edited by sidma_love - 14 years ago

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jas

@HipHop-Remix

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

wonderful start🤗

continue soon..

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Aishwarya

@malluangel

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

😔
rote kaiko hummm rote kaiko hum...rulate kaiko humko?!?! [:S]

lmao jk continue soon!
it is simply amazing to seet he many ways this story cudda gone...

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Veena

@-veena.shona-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

heyyyyyy pragzie

nyc start yar

pls add me 2 ur pm list

Veena

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Moumi

@_Moumi_

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Pragzuu🤗🤗

So good to see that u started a new OS

its Awesome😳

Sidd😭 i can so feels his pain😭

FARZ!!!😡

thanks to that Maiya i hate this word even moree😡😡😡😡

well i know that u like sad stories so i guess there will be sad ending here also😆

anyways little pragzuu continue soon and do pm me😳

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sonia1000

@sonia1000

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

OMG Sid's pain made me cry yaar. That Riddhima she is a fool. According to me if a girl can't love a guy like Sid then she don't even know the actual meaning of love. Sid and Armaan no comparison yaar. Sid loves Riddhima bt Armaan's love is not love it is LUST. CVs r crazy they have made a fun of pure relation like marrige. Coming to ur OS the start is very I hope Riddhima realise her mistake. Continue soon. Do PM me next time

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StarshineHues

@StarshineHues

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

PRAGZIE !! How come you didn't tell me about this one ?

Seriously, this is so amazing !! Its amazingly sad, but you've captured Sid's pain so, so, well, like you always do. I always say that you write so sensitively, its amazing. I love you, your story, and your Sid. And Riddhima. I cannot believe she STILL has the guts to walk in that house and hold that photograph. I feel like punching her, but then I always do. My favorite line, "To get away from you and my brother". That just said EVERYTHING. All the pain, all the hurt, all the anger. Honestly, this is AWESOME !! Update real soon !! 🤗 🤗

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pragati

@Pragzie

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: nikita_88
Reserved!

*unreserved*

Pragzie I love your writing, hate your cliffhanger! 😆

Hmm...interesting start I can't wait to see how you take it forward, at least in this one I am yet to hate Riddhima 😆 (so it is your job that I don't! 😛)

Can't wait to see you have planned!

Do PM me!

Cont soon! 😃

BTW *Happy dance* exams are over for you! 😆

Thanks😳

*Joins in the happy dance *🥳😆

and about Riddhima we shall see 😆

Originally posted by: prejudiced
Love the way youve potrayed Sid''s emotions - hurt, agony, pain
and the way the "Farz" word almost killed him!

It did falsify everything SR shared .......

Also quite like the way youve started the OS.
Awaiting the next update!

Thanks 😳

it really did faslify everything

Originally posted by: sr-medha
Awesome start, pragzie,

I HATE that RIDDHIMa. SHe sucks!!

And sid's pain,....

Continue soon.
and PLz PM me

Thanks😳

she does suck ,doesnt she ?😆

will definitely PM you 😃

Originally posted by: ssdtvgojan
Awesome and wonnderful start pragz...........Do PM me and update soon...........Cos i know yr exams r over........LOL

Thanks😳

yes will update soon😆

Originally posted by: innocenteyez92
wow
its awesome.....👏
very nice.
plz add me to ur pm list.

Thanks😳

Originally posted by: sidma_love
My li'll Pragzuuuu 🤗🤗

This is freaking Awesome 😳

Ahhhhh Sid
I can so feel his pain 😭
He gave his world to Ridz but what she gave him in return only PAIN😡😡

FARZ grrrr 😡😡😡
I hate dis word 😡😡😡

And whenever I think abt dis I HATE dat Maiya even more 😡😡😡

But just like Zeenzie I also feel dat eventually she'll realise dat Haraam is a selfish , obsessive PAGAL 😡😡😡 & Sid is her soulmate 😳

Seeing at d past records I am expecting a sad ending in dis OS also 😆

Anyways can't wait 4 d next part
Continue soon....

Thank You so much 😳😳😳

i hate that word too . 😡 i hate R maiyya and P maiyya forever😆

Sitaraman is selfish,obsessive and pagal and riddhima will eventually realize that .

Originally posted by: jasangel
wonderful start🤗
continue soon..

Thanks😳

Originally posted by: malluangel
😔
rote kaiko hummm rote kaiko hum...rulate kaiko humko?!?! [:S]

lmao jk continue soon!
it is simply amazing to seet he many ways this story cudda gone...

😆

Thanks😳

Originally posted by: veena_rocks
heyyyyyy pragzie

nyc start yar

pls add me 2 ur pm list

Veena

Thanks😳

Originally posted by: Moumi363
Pragzuu🤗🤗
So good to see that u started a new OS
its Awesome😳

Sidd😭 i can so feels his pain😭

FARZ!!!😡
thanks to that Maiya i hate this word even moree😡

well i know that u like sad stories so i guess there will be sad ending here also😆

anyways little pragzuu continue soon and do pm me😳

Thanks 😃😳 i know i just cant stand the word Farz now

will pm you soon 😳

Originally posted by: sonia1000
OMG Sid's pain made me cry yaar. That Riddhima she is a fool. According to me if a girl can't love a guy like Sid then she don't even know the actual meaning of love. Sid and Armaan no comparison yaar. Sid loves Riddhima bt Armaan's love is not love it is LUST. CVs r crazy they have made a fun of pure relation like marrige. Coming to ur OS the start is very I hope Riddhima realise her mistake. Continue soon. Do PM me next time

Aww sorry for making you cry Exactly she is a fool . Armaan's love is lust . And cvs they are just well insensitive, immoral people.

Thanks😳

Originally posted by: StarshineHues
PRAGZIE !! How come you didn't tell me about this one ?

Seriously, this is so amazing !! Its amazingly sad, but you've captured Sid's pain so, so, well, like you always do. I always say that you write so sensitively, its amazing. I love you, your story, and your Sid. And Riddhima. I cannot believe she STILL has the guts to walk in that house and hold that photograph. I feel like punching her, but then I always do. My favorite line, "To get away from you and my brother". That just said EVERYTHING. All the pain, all the hurt, all the anger. Honestly, this is AWESOME !! Update real soon !! 🤗 🤗

I am so sorry its just that one moment i had an idea and in another i posted it

Thanks😳 i love you too but you already know that 😆 Same here i wish i could give her a black eye but then it wouldnt be fair to JW😆 thanks for always encouraging me

Thank You all so much 🤗🤗

Edited by Pragzie - 14 years ago

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malvika

@monty22

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#30

first of all i m so so sorry for doing late comment................

i hope you will forgive ur nikkami naughty Monty di...........😕

now back to ur OS....bachha u r awesome in writing.....i m really amazed .....u had described sid 's pain wonderful. that maiyya's line hurt me so much.....😡

i know sweetie u like sad ending......😆 but plzzzzzzzzzz make sad ending for maiyaa.......not my siddy. he deserve to be happy........😆

love you dear.