Sr Os-When A Heart Breaks(Part 4:Pg.12) - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
PragziešŸ¤—
that's a nice surprise!
ahh...i love your writing..... keep up the good work!
waiting for the next part eagerly😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
Reserved!

*unreserved*

Pragzie I love your writing, hate your cliffhanger! šŸ˜†

Hmm...interesting start I can't wait to see how you take it forward, at least in this one I am yet to hate Riddhima šŸ˜† (so it is your job that I don't! šŸ˜›)

Can't wait to see you have planned!

Do PM me!

Cont soon! 😃

BTW *Happy dance* exams are over for you! šŸ˜†
Edited by nikita_88 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
Pragzzz
awesome start.....u described sid's pain very well......& abt tat farzy maya.....though i hv same questions in my mind bt again thank god i did not watch after second marriage....so for me ridz is always sid's & they r soulmates.....anyways continue soon & do pm me.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
Pragzuuuuuu šŸ¤—

😭CryCryCry

My Siddy Widdy and his pain CryCry
tht farzy maiya😔😔
why is she here again...I hate tht woman😔😔

the part where Sid broke down CryCryCry
and I love this part....it really shows Sid's feelings Cry

He was fine with the fact that she didn't love him . But why did she make him believe that she loved him. Why did she make him believe they could be together ? If she never made him believe that she loved him it would have hurt less


and I know ur a nikammis who loves sad endings but I'm not expecting a sad ending herešŸ˜›

anyways continue soon n don' forget to PM me warnašŸ˜”šŸ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
nice start
update soon.......😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
WOW
Awesome os
Please add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Lennie

Pragz - you know i love quotes same as you and i loved the Dear John quotes, they are so for SR

Great start, and you are right Silence hurts more then words
I cant believe Sid still called him - brother.......
Farz is the one word that is going to haunt him forever, it hurts more then anything - very hard to love again not only that but to trust and have faith in someone else again

yup i do know that. I agree Dear John quotes are so SR😳
Thanks😳 i dont feel bad she left him i feel bad she called her feelings towards him "farz"

Originally posted by: bells_10

PragziešŸ¤—

that's a nice surprise!
ahh...i love your writing..... keep up the good work!
waiting for the next part eagerly😳

Thank you so much😳

Thanks😳

Originally posted by: Ovi_Tanni

Pragzzz
awesome start.....u described sid's pain very well......& abt tat farzy maya.....though i hv same questions in my mind bt again thank god i did not watch after second marriage....so for me ridz is always sid's & they r soulmates.....anyways continue soon & do pm me.....

Thank You 😳 you are lucky yo did not watch after Second remarriage

Originally posted by: indian_beauty

Pragzuuuuuu šŸ¤—


😭

My Siddy Widdy and his pain 😭😭
tht farzy maiya😔😔
why is she here again...I hate tht woman😔😔

the part where Sid broke down 😭😭😭
and I love this part....it really shows Sid's feelings 😭

He was fine with the fact that she didn't love him . But why did she make him believe that she loved him. Why did she make him believe they could be together ? If she never made him believe that she loved him it would have hurt less


and I know ur a nikammis who loves sad endings but I'm not expecting a sad ending herešŸ˜›

anyways continue soon n don' forget to PM me warnašŸ˜”šŸ˜†

Thank You😳 i hate her too😔 won't forget to pm youšŸ˜†

Originally posted by: zeenia

'sigh'

Ok before I comment Pragzie Im expecting a sad ending in your OS cos I know you love them!šŸ˜†
Now coming to the update everytime I think about that disgusting 'farz' word and how it must have stabbed Sids heart to hear it, I feel like killing Ridhimma. All he gave her was love, protection, and security. And all he got in return was pain and heartache!
But....but....but, I think I always hope that Ridhimma eventually realises that sitaraman was nothing and it was Sid who was always her soulmate.
I can hope right!😳
Cant wait for the next part Pragzie!

Thanks😳
true he gave her the world but only got pain in exchangei know she will realize who is right for her and who is wrong. We can always hope. Hope is what SRians do šŸ˜Ž

Originally posted by: Liashna

PragziešŸ¤—....... Awesome.... This is the best!! Wow, you portrayed Sid's pain so well yaar!!

Feel sad for him..... N riddhima too... šŸ˜‰

Continue soon n do pm me dear!!!

Thanks a bunch

Thanks😳 will definitely pm you =)

Originally posted by: subia-17

pragziiieeee šŸ¤—


😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

sid's pain ahhhh!!!!!😭

how much i hate dat farzyy maiyaaa

n y she here again 4 what 😔 😔 😔

u love sad ending i hope its nt one f dose šŸ˜† but after what she dont deseve sid😔

amazing partšŸ‘

waiting 4 next....

Thanks😳 i hate her too 😔

Originally posted by: jacobharry10011

WOW
Awesome os
Please add me to ur pm list

Thanks 😳

Originally posted by: loveSR

nice start

update soon.......😊

Thanks😳


Thank You all for commenting means a lotšŸ¤—
and as for the ending . It depends on your perception . For some it may be sad, for some it may be bitter sweet and for some it will be a happy ending😳


Edited by Pragzie - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
Love the way youve potrayed Sid''s emotions - hurt, agony, pain
and the way the "Farz" word almost killed him!
It did falsify everything SR shared .......
Also quite like the way youve started the OS.
Awaiting the next update!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
Awesome start, pragzie,
I HATE that RIDDHIMa. SHe sucks!!
And sid's pain,....
Continue soon.
and PLz PM me
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
Awesome and wonnderful start pragz...........Do PM me and update soon...........Cos i know yr exams r over........LOL

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