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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#481

Sameera's part with her father coming into picture was nice ; also the mysterious boss & Co. aspect was good 😊

Geet & Maan parts specially the V-Day celebration was beautiful 👍🏼

Loved the part ...

Sorry ! For the other day for posting comments in that green colour , actually I read your updates immediately after watching the episode of Geet on 14th March ; was very upset so didn't pay attention to the color code . Really sorry for you difficulty 😛

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preethia

@preethia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#482

nice update....................

best couple they have to get it..........but the explanation maan gives for love and the 4 things without which love can b.................that was awesome writing...............

who is sam's boss? well i think some new character coming up in sam's life............

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#483

Originally posted by: preethia
nice update....................
best couple they have to get it..........but the explanation maan gives for love and the 4 things without which love can b.................that was awesome writing...............

who is sam's boss? well i think some new character coming up in sam's life............

MAY BE THAT MONTY😆

Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#484

awesome part. loved it.
who is coming in sameera's life, her boss or some one else.
update soon.

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#485

part 58
very lovely part.................so Adi and Pinky are in the family way.........only Maan and Geet are left.................good news over the celebration..............the kite scene was cute...............

part 59
whoa Sameera's life has never been in this picture this deep................wonder what happened in her life till date and happening.................who is that new boss of hers and her dad? loved Maan Geet scenes.................

cont soon................

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swaram

@swaram

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#486

I love the smooth flow of your fiction, how you connect the incidents.

Another mystery angle in the strory! Interesting!

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Sujatha.rao

@Sujatha.rao

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#487

Two contrasting updates..that is what I like best about you, Opti..you never cease to surprise..nothing predictable about your writing😊

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#488

Thank You for this great ff....

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neetiporwal

@neetiporwal

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#489

hey great fanfic
plz add me in pm list
n pm me next part whenever u update

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Soapoperasrfun

@Soapoperasrfun

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#490

Opti, Sameera is a close friend of Maan's and Geet's and there was a stage in Maaneet's life's when both of them felt like they had let sameera down. Her happiness will be paramount to them and it will be really nice to see how she gets it. I think you should share her track as well. But if you are a little concerned about acceptance of it, try to see if you can make it parallel. As in, give us a parallel world of what is happening in Sameera's life and Maaneet's life simultaneously in some updates. I hope you understoof what I mean 😳

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