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Posted: 14 years ago
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keyama dear, story is going nice :) looking forward for the update.
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i just cudnt stop laughing.............itz awsum...................update soonnnnnnn................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
hehe...
me loving this one...
geets tirade is hilarious!!
but how are u gonna manage 5 FFs!!!
oops i forgot u dont remember animosity exists!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

hehe...

me loving this one...
geets tirade is hilarious!!
but how are u gonna manage 5 FFs!!!
oops i forgot u dont remember animosity exists!!!



i am not updating all every day… only paradox & remorses…. other 3 r extra.. when i finish this 2 permently…. :D
so & will update this time to time
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
hey i read all 5 parts
nice concept
will u update regularly
plse send me pm
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nice FF

loved it completely..

different storyline

add me to ur PM list

cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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tat was great!
hahahaha maan is seriously getting the hell out of geet
n maan gonna faint again....seeing her in a modern dress??!
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really nice n funny as well
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wow that was lovely...maans mini heart attack must b seeing her in sm mod dress😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
***Enigma***
part 6
pls do comment & press the like button' ty for all the love and suport
xxx

Pls don't expect me to update this every day..😳

CHANGE OF AGE OF SIBLING'
RJI-8
2 TWIN BRO- 6



Shila- ok... Lets go shopping..

Geet- no! No!.... That moron will shout at me again. Seriously... Ugh.... I hate him so much. Haven't left a single chance to penalize me about my marriage.... & kids....

Shila- not exactly his fault. He is very clever.

Geet- cleaver my foot. Wish I could punch him.... Shila burst out in laugh.... Does she realize this in THE Maan sing khurana!...


Both calls back after 30 minute shopping.... Geet gets change in to sexy formal cloths. Skirt and a light green shirt... & light makeup. The skirt came jut above her knee. High hill...

Shila- why don't you act!

Geet-hmm

Shila- show your boss you are not comfortable in this dress... Like pull your dress down now & then... She smiles....

Geet- haaa.... Good idea .... You are so cleaver...

Shila- of course....


Geet & shila walks out....... Everyone started to eye geet... She simply look a sexy professional teen....

Shila- pull your dress down... To show you are uncomfortable.

Geet- oh yes...


Whole conference room was crowded.

Mr bren- where is the designer of yours?

Maan- she should be here any moment. He smiles. Mr Bren is a business maan. No one knows exactly how he became this rich in matter of past 15 years. Even khurana are very old business family... & thats why they have this big name… But bren... Maan always thought there are something fisy... But what the heck... He is offering clear business.

Geet walks in. She froze instantly. Her eyes widen seeing her biological father...

Shila- he is the one....

Geet looked way... Trying her best not to make any big deal... Her face have changed... A good sig she is unrecognizable.

Maans eyes widens... He surly about to faint again... Who will say this girl... Umm... Lady is married with 3 kids. He couldn't remove his gaze... But then he closed his eyes... Thinking she is someones els.... But his heart refuged to believe it.... While one of his employe was drooling over her innocent beauty...

Maan- she is married with 3 kids... Try somewhere els!... The mans mouth closed instantly realizing his boss noticed.

Man- sorry sir...

Maan- umm.. Geet.... (in hindi) shasha will present everything... Just explain all the designs to her....

Geet nodes...


Geet was dreading the meeting... Specially knowing her dad is also present... Geet walks out with out mitting Mr Brain. Shila & vicky was a bit confused....


Shila- is everything alright?

Geet- I can't work for him... Not at all..

Shila- why?

Geet- he... Is my dad! I have to leave from here soon as possible. I can't stay here at all...

Shila- 3 more months... I think you will be able to save enough money. Then we will go back home.

Get- I ... Geet was in shock... Seeing him after 10 odd years. She hated him to the core. She quickly walks in to the loo & puts her make up back on.

Geet- shall we go... I need to pick the children up.

Shila- yea... You go I will met you at home. Otherwise they will suspect.

Geet nodes & walks out before maan could stop her.... He noticed she was was talking to shila... But she dons't know any english? Hmm... He thought... There id defiantly something fissy about this girl! But what...

Maan- you have spoken to geet? He asked suspiciously...

Shila- oh yes.. But she couldn't speak english very much... So it was hard to understand!

Maan- right.... Shila gives him a faint smile & disappears.....


At home... Geet sat there silent... Seeing her real dad was a shock.... She had to move way from here soon as possible... But she can't run way like this... She have to face this situation... She is a strong geet now.... A very strong geet...


Shila walks in...

All three sibling jumps up and hugs her... & geet smiles....

Shila- sorry...
Geet- it's alright... I have to stay with maan sir... & be safe from his detective brain!
Shila laughs...

Next day... Shila drove the three sibling to school but when Geet picked them up she had a urgent call from maan. She had no other option then take them with her.

Geet- stay in my office alright!
Rik- per Di....
Geet- shhh! Not Di! Mom... No! No! That's modern! Ma! Call me maa.
Rus- but we don't know Hindi! What if they ask us something?
Raji- yes Di! I mean maa!
Geet- great! Just great.
Geet- raji you know Hindi! Just talk in them! & you two! Umm... You two can't speak. Alright.
Raji- Di... I mean maa! Why can't you just tell them the truth?
Geet- because.... Geet closes her eyes. Because I can't! Now stay here. Don't go out. & no talking.
Geet runs out to attend the meeting.

After 40 minute maan comes back. Bit surprised to see children at geets office. They were all drawing... While Rajji helping rus.
Maan walks in & coughs. All three jumps instantly...
Raji was trying to think of some Hindi word... But even then she will have accent. The twins just hugged one another. Remembering what there sister have told them. Not uttering a single noise. All three looked so scared.
Maan thought... Well she didn't lie about children! Maan went to his deep thought... Why you thinking she lied????
Raji- au... Emm... Maa....
Maan- your mom will be here any moment... Maybe max 3 hours!
Raji- 3 hours!!!!
Shila was right behind to pick them up! But now... Maan will wonder!
Maan- umm! Are you three alright here?
Three sibling looked petrified. Maan looked at his reflection... Did he really look that scary?
Maan- umm.... He him self wasn't good with children! But again it's his fault that geet is stuck with work now... & wasn't just yesterday that he mentioned he will make juice out of this children!!!! He laughed at his thought... The twins were he'll scared!
Maan- umm... Flow me!
Raji told the twins not to move!
Maan- I won't eat you. Just flow me.
Maan took three to his cabin. All three made a baby face looking at shila! Who showed a sorry face...

Maan- do you three want ice-cream?
All three nodes a no! Trying not to talk at all.
Maan- so which school do you 3 attend?
Raji- xyz school.
Maan- very good. What's your name?
Raji- me raji... Rus & rik.
Maan- have you had your lunch? All 3 nodes no again. They were sitting holding one another. Terrified. Twines wanted to talk because he looked alright... But still they were petrified....
Maan- why do you look so scared?
Raji- mama said not to talk to strangers!
Maan- acca! What els did your mama have told you?
Raji- au....

It's been 3 hours... Maan & raji spoke & spoke... It was ironic... She seems to know perfect Hindi!
Maan- so tell me something about your dad? I know enough of your mum... What's his name?... Maan smiles...
Raji started to panic. She forgot that made up name! & now... If she say something wrong or weird! Oh no!....





next- wonder
Thanks for all the love & support
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hope you all liking this'
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pls do leave me some comments'





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