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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updates
loved them both
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
thnx 4 da double dhamaka beautiful update
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update....loved the movie part...maan has become mystery man..hmmmm...waiting 4 the party now....update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 12 :
Lovely update. It was so sweet of him to think of her before having his lunch. "usne khana khaya b hoga ya nahi.." And so sweetly he says that "usse baaton se phursat mile to na"
He was so happy seeing her giggle and smile. Hai...

Loved seeing her restlessness. The way she felt that he is around.
The part outside the washroom left me blushing yaar. You are a too good writer.

The new name is good too. Pehle Mishty and now Ms. Chocalaty. Wow yaar.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 13 :

Oh, she just could not share that chocolate with anyone. How could she? It was given to her by her, oopps, she doesn't know his name.

I really missed a beat when Maan said "
tumhe darne ki koi jarurat nahi hai geet....me zindagi ke har lamhe me..har mod par..tumhare sath hu..chahe wo lamha kitna bhi bhayanak ho..me tumhara sath kabhi nahi chhodunga...m dere to stay forever....." These were beautiful lines dear.

The precap left me disappointed. What does it mean? Is Maan not going to the party? Now I am waiting for the party.

Do continue soon.

Thanks for the PM
Edited by anuandavi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome update simply supreb.
love it.
maan was amazing.
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Posted: 14 years ago
IMP - i hav created new account for PMS...so dose who wants to be pmed for my maneet updates, plzz add me..

Those, who vil not add me...vil not gets pms for m any story from further on...





Part 14



hmmm PARTY...
...
or rather say POOL SIGHT PARTY...
1000 of beautifull variety shaped candles set at preopr places...glowing d area...
benfector tables preoperly places at d sights of pool...
cloudede sky showing different shade...
making d palce look more romantic...
colored spot light..more of blue...plced preoperly glowing d area...
orchids flowers..beautifull decorated...
white table cloths...carpets at required places...
water showing diffferent shades accordingly d spot lights n candles...
ladies wid ellegant standard..designer clothes...
roaming..wid glasses in hands...
n masks on faces accordingly deir dresses...
men too very appropriately ready..wid masks...
waiting for d gals to choose...
unlimited masks provided at d entry...
overall d place looked beautifull or may b more dan dat...
any person just feel calm in such a place...
perfectly place to fall in love wid sum1...
geet has arranges everything so beautifully...may b much more dan wat she decided...
but she just wanted to spread d winds of luv everywhere...
d place was her farm house..

...
8:15pm
ranbir reached at party side...
looking for any of deir group n almo for dose who r invited by him...
got in wid sum frnds n mixed up...
ranbir called mayank..
mayank - bol..

ranbir - party aaj he..yaad hai ne...
mayank - arre yaar..bus 5 min me pohoch raha hu...sab aagaye kya...
ranbir - dnt know yaar..koi pehchan me hi nahi aaraha...
mayank - wat else to expect from geet..catch u soon..bye.
...
nupur n annie came at d same time...
selected deir masks n got in...
nupur - omg...
annie - wat happened..r u ok..

nupur - ye party me mayank ko dhnudna matlab mumbai ke station pe zamin par gira coin dhundna...hoyyeee

annie - dnt worry...let just search others...
annie got to search her frnds to whom she invited...
annie called dev - hell bhai..aap kab pohoch rahe ho..aur maan bhai aa rahe hai kya...
dev - me 9 baje tak aajaunga...maan bhai..m not sure..y dnt u ask him..
annie - no ways..let him decide.busy honge to mujpar gussa karenge..nwz u cum soon..
...
mayanks got in wid a mask...in search wid his ms.morella...
nisha n dev reached at sane time..
dev flirtingly - hey..m dev..n u angel..??
nisha read his flirtiness - m nisha..dev..??

dev - dev khurana..
nisha - ohh..annie's bro...
dev disappointedly - u know annie...ok..dnt tell her i was flirting wid u..plz..or she vil kill me...

nisha shook her head...both got in...

geet reached d party...
all boys were just frozen at d place to see a gal in bloody red dresses till her knees..
but hardly any1 recognized dat its geet coz of mask...
geet was happy wid overall arrangements dat she made done via a company..
n also invited dem in d party - karan thakkar and shweta mallik..
but could not recognize dem..
everyone was behaving like starnger to each other...
geet was searching here n dere...
but whom...her frnds...i dnt think so...
she was passing her glance to each n every man to see her mr.chocolaty...
but how can he be dere..she doesn't know him..she didn't invited him...she wondederd...
all required perople reached for party...
party was greatly passing through its different shades...
drinks...food...everything was just superbly aaranged...
nupur sumhow found nisha n annie..chatted wid dem...

nupur - me in sab me mayank ko kaise chunungi...mujhe mayank ke sath hi dance karna hai...
annie - tum uske posture se usse pehchan lena na...isme kya...
nupur rolling her eyes - mujhe abhitak uska gesture samajh nahi aaya..postute kya khak samajhega...

annie nisha strted laughing...
nisha - tu kabhi dimag wali baten kar sakti he kya..galati se b..
nupur - hoyyeee...dimag ka contract mayank sambhal raha hai..let me handle ye fun wala contract...
suddenly she saw a boy wearing black coat...
nupur ran tords him shouting...mayankkk...mene tumhe pehchan liya dekho...
d man gets scared - aye pagal..tu hospital se kab chhuti..chal..
mayank tries to cum dere getting angry of nupur...
his frnds stops him..enjoying d fun
...
nupur wid funny face - oyye...pagal kise bola..teri to me..
man got scared n ran from deir...
geet reached deir. - kya huva..sab thik hai na...
mayank - ab tu kon hai...
geet roled her eyes...
annie - ye geet hai...

YE GEET HAI...
everyone's eyes popped to see geet looking so pretty even in mask...
ranbir just lost in her...
he was desprate to see her face..
she seemed sweet..beautifull.angelic..smart...hawttt...n much more...
geet - finally...mujhe kisine to pehchana...me etni buri alg rahi hu..heyy babaji...mujhe rajji puchh ke dress select karni chahiye thi..ab..
nisha - geet tu insaan hi lag rahi hai..ghabra mat...
geet made a face...
annie - tum bahot jyada achhee lag rahi ho...
geet smiled n went to meet d karan n shweta..
as dey only hav to anchor for making couples for d party...

9:30
all gals at 1 side...
all boys at 1 side...
karan n shweta in d centre...

karan - heyy frndz...dis is karan thakkar...
shweta - dis is shweta mallik...
karan - 1st n for most...i wud like to thank ms.geet for believing us in organizing d party...
shweta - i hope u guys liked our arrangement...
a boy shouted - we didn't like d flowers...
karan coldly - well..nxt time..we vil definitely see to urs suggetion..
all shook deir head laughing at dat boy...
shweta - we i gues..we shud strt d pairing now...
karan -
hmm...as d party is organized by geet...so only gals vil get chnce to choose...
shweta winking at boys.. - sorry boys..u hav to pair up wid d gal who vil choose u..u dnt hav options...
dev - desprately looking forwrd to it...winking at shweta...
annie shook her head...
karan - u guys r allowed to remove ur masks only aftr all d pairing r done..dose who don't want to remove can keep it throughout d party...
a man standing at d corner sipping his drink..smiled in relief...

but who was it...ahem ahem...
...
nupur came forwrd - i vil choose 1st...
mayank straightened himself giving her signals...
funnily she landed up choosing a strange guy...
but she was still sure he is her mayank..holding his hand tightly...
mayank burried his face...ohh man...kya karu me iss ladki ka...
nisha landed up choosing dev...
annie choosed mayank...
many gals landed up choosing deir respectives...
it was geet's turn now...
she was a bit scared...
how can she pair up wid any body..other dan him...she scared
but how can he b here...
she was not sure of her own thouts...
wats wrong..she only decided dis surprise..n now she only confused...
wat if he didn't like sumbody touching me...she wondered..
but dey dnt know each other..den how can dey bcum possessive for each other...
y m thinking dis all...she wondered...
i just hav to choose a person for sum hrs...dats it...
sum 1 was enjoying her restlessness sipping his drink...
stood up..came a bit forwrd...
...
her eyes felt litle relief..but y...
is he here...y m feeling like he is here for me...m i going mad...geet sochna band akr...par shayd wo...bas bas...ek aur baar uske bare me socha na..to...
karan - we r waiting lady...
geet came forwrd...
passing through each n every boy...
but not finding him...
finally she came near him...
a smile teased her lips..n so his...
b4 she could choose him...
...
maan pulled her in a jerk..holding her waist...
her almond eye popped..
she got shocked almost falling on his broad chest...
her smile widened...
she knew its him...
she is dreaming..she was sure she is dreaming like dat phone call...she thout..
she got so lost in his black eyes...she may just get melt in it..she wondered...
maan waas looking at her eyes as if he was watching dem for d 1st time...
...


PRECAPS : SUM1 is still in sum1's arms...doing sumthing sumthing...:P
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IMP - reader, i need good response from u all...d lack of likes n comments every time in every update of any story makes me sad...n i dnt feel like updating...if u want more n more updates from me...dnt forget to like n comment..it takes a sec to LIKE n a min to COMMENT..dnt i deserve a min or ur time aftr d update ??...i request all silent readers to listen to my request !! THNQ !!

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MishTy
Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it...why did u stop it...i was simply loving it...can we get more parts today?.....i just love reading ur ff...update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOWWW AGREAT SITE
WE JUST LOVED IT DEAR........
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update................mishti pl update the next one pl i am sure that will have more of maaneet moments.................

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