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Posted: 14 years ago
plz update again....plz plz plz plz plz plz
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 15

dere eye contact didn't break until dey heard karan's voice..
.......
karan - ok guys...nxt gal plz..

she sighed in relief....
she is not dreaming..he is actually dere.....
she looked at him wid her almod deep eyes...
his eyes were as expressive as he is....
his hand on her waist was tight...
he holded her litle gently..or her petal like waist vil just smash...he thought...
she loved his dominance...d way he pulled her without even asking her.....

he was gazing into her eyes...
he may just melt in her looks he thought...
she seemed nothing less dan a princess he thought..
her scent.....her fresh smell.......was driving him creazy.....
omg....
her red dress....hugging her tight....
small red diamond ear-ring tops.....which looked just perfect on her.....
her white magical skin.....
he was desperate to see her face......
but rule is rule....
he couldn't take her mask untill n unless all pairing r done....lol

she was perfectly set wid no more jeweleery other dan ear-rings ......
n a very delicate ring in her forth finger of her right hand....
he didn't even miss dat....
he gazed her almost top to bottom....

she was delicate more dan a petal.....
god has made her was for him..just for him...he smiled...
maan's another hand holded her hand softly..carrasing her skin...
SHE NOTICED D MARKS ON HIS HAND........
her eyes filled ........he notices her gazing d marks...
he whispered softly - its ok...
she parted her lips to say sorry.....
but he caught her words in herlips by putting his finger on her lips....
he whispered again - tumhe haqq hai....
she smiled looking down...
d touch of his finger on her lips was making her insane...
n get lost into him.......
he seemed her lips delicate dan anything possible....
he was mesmerized....
............
dey hav nothing to explain to each other...wat dey feel for each other..
dey both were very well aware of each other's emotions....
dere touch was so expressive...
he slowly moved near her ear....
whispering - aaj koi bahot khubsurat lag raha hai...
she blushed.....maan loved her blush..
she slowly slipped her hand on his shoulder...

dey never needed words to know each other...
she looked into his eyes.....
for d 1st time she saw his eyes......
b4 she could say 1 word....
......
dere was a big sound..
karan - ok guys..d pairing is done...
shweta - u can remove ur masks if u want.....
dey took out deir masks too....
nupur n her partner removed deir masks....
she almost faint to see dat its sumone else...
nupur - hoyyeeee......tum kaun ho...
dat person - tumn mere pichhe kyu padi ho..
n again wore his masks..not to see her again...
nupur made a baby face to see mayank was tagged wid annie...
annie was surprised to see mayank.but definitely more surprised to see karan n shweta...
annie - omg guys..u both here...
karan - ann..how u hav been...aftr so long time yaar..
annie - m cool as alwz..so tum dono yahan kaise..
shweta - actually humne ek nayi company shuru ki hai as partners.....
maan - organizing functions...all kinds of functions..
annie - hmm...sounds ineteresting....
annie introduced dem wid all frnds...
continued....
nisha may faint to see dev again..
dev - mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai..ke tum muhme interest le rahi ho...
nisha - well agar tum aisa lag raha hai..let it b dat way..i dnt seem any problem baby...
dev - wohhh..tikhi mirchi haan...
nisha - wat u think...
dev - hmm..nicy nicy.....meri behen ki tum log sab kya halat kardoge man...
nisha - yah right..
dey continued wid deir spicy talk...


......
maan removed her mask....
he never asked her for anything..n just did....
which she liked d most.......
OMG........she just looked flawless.....delicate dan any silky melted chocolate....

he didn't hav words to say..his eyes said it all......
he was gazing every single inch of her face.....
he stated gazing from her eyes.....
almod eyes...wid reddish shades on eye lids....a perfect conbi....
he eyes slowly moved to her cheeks.....
even more red..like a tomato..he may jst eat her.....
his eyes slowly moved to her lips....
her already pink lips..were shining like a milestone in dat red shade of lipstick.......
he gazed her curly hairs..which were making her look bubly......
he may just keep looking her his whole life..if dat was possible....
...............
she noticed it.....her cheek tunrned more pink.....
omg..he may just faint in her beauty now.....
he slowly moved to her ear again....
whispering - kisiko etna haqq nahi ke koi etna khubsurat lage......
dat was d most perfect words to praise her beauty..she thought..
she looked down..bluhing..
he could not take his eyes off her...
he raised her chin wid his finger softly..till his gaze....
her eyes were shining like a diamond in d spot lights.....
her hand slowly slipped to remove his mask....
he held her hand....making her turn in a jerk....

she took a turn wid her back sticking his chest......
she loved dat too.......she wondered...
his chin slowly slipped on her shoulder......carrasing her hair starnds slowly wid his nose....
she shivered wid his touch.....
he knew wat exactly was she feeling.......
music was so soft to play wid deir emotions.....
his hand slwoly slipped from her wiast to her stomach..holding her tightly.....
he seemed her body like a gold fish wid shapes......
she was getting insane wid his touch.....
she didn't remember anything.......her friends....nothing...
.......

mayank to her partner - hoyyeeee......tumhara naam kya hai...
boy - kyu..chutney banani hai.....
nupur - nahi..sambar..ab batao...
boy - mera naam pinky hai...khush...
nupur - sun pinky..ab tumhe chun hi liya hai...to unfortunately hume dance to karna hi padega.....

boy - mujhe dance nahi tha...
nupur was getting literally irritated - dance nahi aata..teri toh me...toh yahan kya muft ki bhajjiya khane aaya hai..gadha kahin ka.........hooyyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeee......
.......
boy - oyye..zasi ki rani..mene nahi kaha tha...mujhe chhunne ke liye...
nupur - agar mayank ko pata chalega na..ke tum mere sath etna rudely behave kar rahe ho..to tumhari khair nahi....
boy - omg..me darr gaya..mayank kon hai..tumhara bodyguard...
nupur - oyye..wo mere hone wale patidev hai...hoyyyyeeeeee
boy getting irritated - to fir usse kyu nahi chuna...y me..mujhe ye torchure kyu..
nupur making baby face - wo me galati se..mujhe laga mayank hai..
boy - ohh..like dat...
finally d boy understood dat she is half mad....
n danced wid her

.........
annie - tum aur nupur kab se relationship me ho...
mayank - its been more dan 2 yrs now...
annie - wow..dats great..she is very sweet.....
mayank - hmm..tum dhire dhire usse janne lagogi na..to sure ho jaogi ke wo bilkul pagal hai....
annie - geet se to kam hi hogi......m sure.....

mayank laughed - obviously..is mamale me geet ko koi takkar nahi de sakta....but geet is d heart of our group....
annie - ya...she is unique..
mayank - so tell me..tumhe kabhi kisise pyar nahi huva...
annie - nahi..actually i do believe in love..par abhitak aisa koi mila nahi jo mujhe samajh sake...
mayank - humari prince ka prince jald hi mil jayega...
annie gave a cute smile..
dey continued..

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nisha - so annie ke behen hone ke alava kuch aur b pehchan hai ya...
dev - hello madam..KC join kar raha hu bahot jald...matlab halfheartly but still...
nisha - jarur gf ne force kiya hoga...
dev - nahi yaar..usse kuchh prob nahi hai..par mere bhai..godd..
nisha - hmm..annie was talking wid him in d moring..very caring...
dev - bro is d best in any way..no gf till yet..MD of KC..piller of our family..wat else to say..n

new music started...
dev - heyy..lets rock d floar..wat say...
nisha - n i say yessss....

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PRECAP : tumhara naam kya hai GEET...????? LOL
plz press like button..n post ur comments.........
thnqqqqq
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey thnxxx for these lovely updates and pics.
i love the story
keep writing
love ur ff a lot
melody
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Posted: 14 years ago
they dont need any words to express their feelings..............ohhhhhhhhhh that was a cute update..........loved each and every part of maaneet interaction...................and him holding her from seeing his face.........uff kya dominance hain...........aise kuch din chalega toh acha rahega..............loving it............i know i am getting greedy but any more updates today.............its ok if u say no..............but definitely tom v will need the update.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting for the next part dear........................
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update
loved it
pls cont next update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Angelic really super selection of photos yaar love u😛😛⭐️⭐️ waiting for ur next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
'she is dreaming..she was sure she is dreaming like dat phone call...she thout.."😍😍
someone tell her her that she is not dreaming..😉😉
that is real.........
omg..........
i m just loved it.................👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh these last four parts 12,13,14 ,15
parts r dam awesome yaar supreb
i cannot wait for the next update
oh god😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
"SHE NOTICED D MARKS ON HIS HAND........
"her eyes filled ........he notices her gazing d marks...
he whispered softly - its ok...
she parted her lips to say sorry.....
but he caught her words in herlips by putting his finger on her lips....
he whispered again - tumhe haqq hai...."😳😳😳
that awesommee..........👏👏👏
maan is really swt...........😳😳
dey both were very well aware of each other's emotions....without saying anything........
Miss Kisssss mam chose the WRONG person he he he....😆😆😆
"tumhara naam tkya hai GEET...????? LOL"
who ask this i m confused......😕😕
i think its Ranbir...
tumto use vul e gayi yaar...
use partner mila k nehi... LOL.........😆😆😆
update soon.......
Edited by butterfly.tanu - 14 years ago

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