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Part 12

all d group went to a ice-cream parlor 1st...
1 of d famous parlors of delhi...
annie - as im new here...ice-creams from my side...
geet - mere liye choclate ice-cream wid double scoop...
all rolled deir eyes...as if dat was sumthing new...
ranbir - mera aur nupur ka favourire strwaberry burst...
nisha - choclate for me..
mayank - annie..ye sab alsi ke shehjade hai..me tum sab ke lite ice-creams lata hu...wat vil u prefer...
annie - i vil prefer butter scotch...
while having ice-creams...
geet - tum kal hi admission form submit kardena..so u can join soon...
mayank - wat hav u refered till now...
nupur closed her ears...ranbir tapped her head...
nishu - ok..ye padhai wali bate chhodo..annie..mujhe batao..tumhara koi bf hai...
annie's eyes popped...den smiled - nahi...not yet...
ranbir immediately cleared his throat naughtily...
nupur - oh...1920 ke diye..shant hoja...
nisha - good 1 nupur..
geet was busy wid lavishing taste of her ice-cream...
making sounds...or say funny sounds...
annie's phone rang...
annie - ji bhai...rolling her eyes...
b4 maan could manage for another lie...
he heard dat voice...he knew its her voice..her lips..her tongue..dat is enjoying...
...
mayank - kya kar rahi hai geet...jaise zindagi me pehli baar ice-cream kha rahi hai...
maan's mouth went dry...he wished if he should b dere wid her sharing same ice-cream...
geet giglled...as if she can feel he is hearing her n wanting it...
maan - actually dadi maa la phone aaya tha..lunch ke liye...
annie - bhai,most probably i vil hav lnch out...
geet shouted near phone - certainly...
without knowing who is on d phone...
maan smiled..loving her ziddi nature...
maan cut d call...
...
n dey continued...wid deir fun...
roaming in malls...other places n all...
fighting..talking...n blah blah...pulling each other's legs...lolz
...

2:30
LOCATION KC
maan was about to hav his lunch...
he remembered her...hav she done her lunch or not...
he didn't feel like eating..."usne kuchh kahay b hoga...kahan se kahyegi..bakbak se time mile to na..."
he smiled of his own thouts...a gal he met ystrday..she has not even seen him...she hav not yet given a place for him in her world...or she...
n he is behaving as if she belongs to him..
n he only has d right to take care of him...
he shook his head...picked his phone..."nah...annie vil kill me now...par kaise pata karu...usne khana khaya b hoga ya nahi..waise mujhe pata hai unka sab plan ..kaha khayenge..kahan jaynge n all..."
he immediately kept d lunch aisde...n left...
reached at d place dey were having dere lunch...without letting dem know...
stood at d corner admirring her...
he was mesmerized to see her looking so beautifull in white dress...she looked like a white princess...
she was having her dinner..giglling wid frnds...n her blah blah session..lol
he could just smile n gaze her d whole day if dat was possible..he wondered...
...
she felt sumthing..she started getting restless...
maan just loved her restlessness..which for him..he knew..
she looked all around...but he was enough hidden to b out of her gaze...
ranbir - kya huva..chocolate ki yaad aagayi...
mayank - nahi..chocolate milkshake ki aagayi hogi...
geet made a grumpy face..maan just loved her innocent anger...
nisha - choclate ki aagyi..m sure...
annie - ya fir kisi chocolate jaise ladke ki...
MAAN SINGH KHURANA N CHOCLATE...NO WAYZzz..!!!!
geet - he he..joke of d day...
maan immediately bought a dairymilk choclate...
geet - me fresh ho aati hu...n moved to washroom..
geet was about to enter in d washroom...
maan held her hand from back...
and immediately puts his 2nd hand on her eyes...
she chukled wid his sudden touch...
maan was frozen to hav her close...
she knew it's him...she didn't protested...instead a smile teased her lips...
maan undersood she recognized him...
her lips seemed more delicate dan last time for him...
d pink color of her lipstick was driving him insane...
her white silk dress was teasing him to pull her closer...
his hand from her wrist slowly loosed...
she was happy..she was excited...
she didn't even say a word to take out his hand from her eyes...
though she was desperate to see him...but she loved his dominance...
all she could do to hav lost herself on him..as if she belongs to him..only him...
maan was delighted by her gesture dat just made him feel special for her...
his scent was driving her creazy..d same situation wid him...
he face slowly moved near her ear...
slowly teased her earlobe wid his lips...
she was jolted wid his touch...all she could do was hold herself from hugging him...
she was loosing her control...
maan whispred in her ear - choclate bahot pasand hai...
a soft smile teased her lips..wid more of blush...
he slowly handed her d chocolate passing it to her hand..slowly carrasing her skin...
she felt as if she may just crush in his arms...
maan again whispered - u can if u want...
she would hav almost jumped in happiness...how did he read her mind...he is magic man...she was sure...
her lips parted to say thnx...
but his finger ran on her lips immediatly not let her speak dat word...slowly pressing her lips..carrasing dem...
he kissed her ear whispering - dare u say thnx again...
she loved his belongingness...as is she is his..only his...
maan whispsred - dats right...
how did he read my mind again..oh god..how...she was smiling..blushing...
she turned facing her back to him...
he knew she is blushing...he loved dat too...
he moved closer to her from back...
n slwoy whispered - i m gonna miss u...
her smile widened...
she turned around to say d same...
he was gone...
she felt as if she dreamed...den looked at d chocolate...
she jumped in air - yesss...
maan saw her jumping in joys in airs...
he was falling for her evry single stupid..innocent..loving n mad thing she do...
he may just fall for her every second...
she is magic woman..he was sure...
she never preotest him..never questions him...never doubts him...he just loved her more for that...
he knew she loves him...unconditionally...
she is miss.choclaty...my miss.chocolaty...he named her...
he left halfheartly for office...
...

PRECAP : *horror movie...OHHH NO...OR...OHH YES...;)

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomee update dear...👏
loved it........
HORROR MOVIE...........interesting..
update soon...........

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Posted: 14 years ago
loved loved loved it.....................................i am so happy to c ur update...............omg that was awesome...........the way she trusts him and blushes....................the way he loves her and teases her with his surprise visit and all...............i am just loving this................hey u hv updated after long r u gonna update next part...............pl cont soon.........cant wait for the next update................will maan b with her in the theater........................
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Part 13



aftr calming herself...cuming out from d hangover of meeting him again...
she tried to b normal..n came back...
nupur noticed d choclate in her hand...
annie - etni der geet...
nupur - mayank..u won...wo apne choclate ko miss kar rahi thi...
geet surprised how cum she know dat she met him...her most fav choclate..her mr.hide n seek...her love..
ranbir snatched d choclate from her hand...
geet got angry...
all strted playing wid d choclate...
her heart beat stopped wid d fear of not having her chocolate in her hand...
geet sat on chair making baby sad face...
annie took d choclate from rabir's hand n gave to her...
geet kissed her cheek almost 10 times...
she hever looked so pleasant...
dey suhow compelted deir lunch targetting geet n her choclate..oopps...for fun...
geet never minded of deir tease...but sumthing was different 2day...
dey got sure she is losted it 2day...

...

aftr cuming back to office...
maan had his lunch preperly relaxing she had her...
thinking of her lips..d way his fingers touched..he kissed his finger...
neeva was staring through d folding..she knew he was happy...
y is he so happy now-a-days...she wonedered...is he also started loving me...or its sumthing else...she couldn't make out...
n he...he is was nowhere to stop smiling today...
she smile..she loved my touch..rather she likes me...she accepted my touch..his feeling were slowly getting burst out dat he never showed ever in his life...
but wat about her dat makes him loose himself on her...behaving childish..choclate for a gal n dat too MAAN SINGH KHUARANA..he wondered...
but its not just a gal..its GEET..maan ki GEET...ANOTHER NAME...
he shook his made...
continued wid his work

...
MOVIE...OOOPSSS.
...
dey went to buy tickets...
but which movie to watch...
LOL
nupur - mayank mujhe shah rukh khan ki movie dekhni hai...
ranbir rolled her eyes...
annie - shahid ki movie nahin hai kya...
geet rolled her eyes...
nisha - well cum to d fight...
annie didn't understand...
geet - mene tumhe kal kaha tha na ke salman or shah rukh ko lekar fight...
annie - tumne mujhe kab bataya...
geet just remembered dat all dis talk she blabered in her imagination wid her...oooppsss
mujhe unka naam hi nahi pata..unhe kya kehke bulaungi...she was confused...
mayank shook her hand snapping her out of her thoughts...
mayank - ya to fight band karo warna movie ka idea cancel...
annie - i dnt hav any prob wid any movie...
geet - mere pass superb idea hai...
nupur rolled her eyes...
nupur - tere ideas me aur humare moralla ke pados wali sheila chachi ke ideas me kuchh jyada antar nahi hota...
hooyyeee...
nisha strted laughing...ranbir patted her - kyu sherni ko jagah rahi hai yaar...
annie - atleast listen wat idea she has...
geet - finally...ok...v vil watch horror movie...wat say...


nupur - mayank meri tabiyar jara kuchh thik nahi lag rahi...hoyyyeee...agar me abhi aaram karungi tabhi raat ki party ke liye fresh dikhungi...chalo tum mujhe ghar drop kar do...
geet stated giggling...
annie - i think nupur is right..hum sab kafi thak gaye hai...
nisha - annie u tooo...roflll
ranbir - yahan pe sabse jyada darpok geet hai..u dnt hav to worry...
geet made a face...
mayank - guys ...maza aayega...horror movie ko comedy movie bana denge...
ranbir - me geet ke pass nahi bethungi...
mayank - me b nahi..me mayank ke sath bethungi...
geet started getting a bit scared now... - to fir mere pass kon bethega...
annie - i vil sit...tum log kyu mana kar rahe ho...
nisha - dat u vil cum to know while watching movie...
all 3 strts laughing...

...
mayank took tickets for all...n dey moved in...
...
all sit as per decided...
mayank - nupur - nisha - ranbir - annie - geet - ...
d place was empty...
did sum1 hear deir discussion...ahem ahem...god knows...
...
geet was desperately waiting for sum1 to sit dere...
1 to horror movie n side place is empty...sounds more horrible...
d movie was about to start...
lights OFF
geet closed her eyes..praying to babaji - babaji mujhe bahot darr lag raha hai..plz kisi gadhe ko meri baju wali sit pe bitha do...i promise me nakhun nahi marungi...plz plz plz babaji...
sum1 whispered - me hu na...to fir kisi gadhe ki kya jarurat hai...
her eyes popped...his voice...he is here beside me...
she immediately holded his hand tightly..feeling litle comfortable now...
she was happy like anything..whenever she needs him..he is alwz dere like magician...she wondered...
she wanted to see him...but she couldn't due to darkness n wid dat thank to d horror movie...
her eyes were half time closed tightly...
wid her nails burrying on his hand due to fear...
he loved dat too...
he holded her hand more tightly whispering - darro mat...me hu na...
she holded him more tightly burrying her face in his neck sidewise...
he just loved her...her scared face..closed eyes...her nails dat were hurting him continuously...
he was so lost in her...
she didn't open her eyes n was just scaring wid horrible voices...
but sum part of her body was feeling safe as he was around..she knew...
he kept admirring her throught d movie...
...
movie almost to end...
he cupped her face softly...
her tight eyes litle loosened..still clowed...
he whispered - tumhe darne ki koi jarurat nahi hai geet...me zindagi ke har lamhe me..har mod par..tumhare sath hu..chahe wo lamha kitna bhi bhayanak ho..me tumhara sath kabhi nahi chhodunga...m dere to stay forever...
his words..rather say his emotions touched her heart...
her nails loosened his skin...
she wanted to feel his existance...
nothing mattered for her now..neither dose scaring voices nor anything else...
...
d movie got over...
she slowly opened her eyes...
he was not dere...
he was again disappeared like alwz...
she blushed wid herself...her smile was nowhere to stop...
his words sticked to her heart...
she looked around...
mayank nupur annie ranbir n nisha were standing staring at her...
she got confused - kahin unhe dekh to nahi liya...aye lo..abhitak mene nahi dekha..ye log kahan se dekhenge...heyy babaji..bacha lena...
...
dey were still staring her wid strange expressions...
geet - wat..?????
ranbir checked her forehead...
nisha - temp kitna hai...
geet rolled her eyes...
mayank - geet tu sach bata..tuze hum log kitne dikhayi de rahe hai...
geet - ye kaisa sawal hai mayank...
nupur - mayank..kahin picture ka bhoot iske andar to nahi chala gaya...
annie - we were watching horror movie...n u r smiling...i mean...
geet knew y she was smiling..but she couldn't tell dem...
geet - abb...woh...haan..actually me bahot darr gayi thi na...to mene khud hi joke cracks kar rahi thi aur khud hi hass rahi thi...
annie - ohh...dats nice...
mayank - uyye...bewkoof bana rahi hai.kya nice...
ranbir - waise b ye kuchh b kar sakti hai...
geet gave a funny look...
nupur - omg..not even a single nail mark on annie's hand...
now annie came to know y dey not wanted to sit wid geet...
annie - noh ..she didn't do anything..she was quite looking to another side...
...
omg...geet just realized..she hurt his hand so much by burring her nails on his hand...
she wanted to see his hand..carrase d marks..but he was nowhere...
but she loved making claim on him...ofcorse she cursed herself for hurting him...
but his words were enough to make her smile again n again...
...
maan went back to office...
ofcorse apart from d meeting he didn't work anything 2day...
he sat on his chair...
carrasing d marks on his hand...its was slightly bleeding...
he kissed his own hand thinking of her...
he loved her ownership on him..her claiming him...
only she has d right...he was sure...
raat ko party b hai..maan bete ab thoda sa kaam karle...he ordered himself...
lol..as if he was actually gonna works...
her thouts were enough for him to distract from his works...
...

...

PRECAP : MAAN in geet's party...NOWAYS...!!!!! :p

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IMP - reader, i need good response from u all...d lack of likes n comments every time in every update of any story makes me sad...n i dnt feel like updating...if u want more n more updates from me...dnt forget to like n comment..it takes a sec to LIKE n a min to COMMENT..dnt i deserve a min or ur time aftr d update ??...i request all silent readers to listen to my request !! THNQ !!

love
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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
a marvellous update
loving it
keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
two updates....
yippie...
read both of them
they wer simply awesome
keep writing

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Posted: 14 years ago
love u for updating the next scene.......wow i am amazed with ur scenes.............i am just enjoying and relishing each and every scene u r writing..................ab pl yeh mat kehna maan geet ke party mein nahin hoga............i am just loving the way maan reads her mind and answers her acc................u r superb writer reading ur updates really brings the smile on my face..............😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW!!⭐️
maan is so sweet.........😊😊
i just loved it..........
""carrasing d marks on his hand....its was slightly bleeding...
he kissed his own hand thinking of her....""😳😳😳
MAAN in geet's party.......thats going to be more interesting...............
Edited by butterfly.tanu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
haayeeeee mar jawa is maan par love both the parts its totally awesome love it plz update soon😳

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