Abhiya FF: Dark Angel~ completed - Page 4

Originally posted by: Reti.15

its amazing. plz cont.

Originally posted by: shyamz

why did u stop???? i know my question sounds idiotic but but but........i wanted to read more.....when are u updating???is it possible to pm me?

please............

it was wnderful especially with the mythical touch and what does tht book contain????

Originally posted by: RB81

hei,
tat was really wonderful one..pls do continue soon..if possible send a pm after updating..
luv,
ramani..

Originally posted by: meetdolphin

Good one I read it and enjoyed it waiting for the next one..

Originally posted by: charmingkiller

hey nyce part !!!!!!!!!

continue soon

n plz add me to pm list

i will be waiting

Originally posted by: sushups

absolutely amazing and eagerly waiting for more

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

amazing

waiting for the next part

i wish muhje bhi aise book milti

secrets wali

i just love them.

do continue

bye sumi

Sorry i would have posted earlier but my computer had a formatting and all my work was lost... I was trying to revive everything and i couldn only get back my stories. All my other videos and songs are lost. I will have to load them. I dont think i will be able to post tomorrow or soon enough because my exams can be hectic and if i get time i will surely PM you when i update.

Okay apart from the rambling. You guys are awesome... I never imagined so much encouragement for a story. Thanks a lot guys... You made my day and i hope this time i will get even more comments and poco will read it. I want her to read it cause she just is the best mythical writer ever. Her ff just keeps you addicted!

Chapter 2~

"Got to go Pia. My driver will be arriving soon so… oh and the internship starts from next Monday… not the coming the one, the one next to that okay?" I nodded.

"I will meet you in college tomorrow?" she asked I nodded and then she scratched her head awkwardly… "You think that… There is a psycho killer in the woods?" she asked anxiously. I shrugged.

"Pia you are not going into the forest okay… You never know" she shuddered. Like I care… my Abhay will save- no he won't. He is sick and tired of saving me so I might as well take her idea or become suicidal and dwell in the forest in the middle of the night.

"I won't go there. I have no brothers I can meet there" I said sourly, she laughed at my comment and then walked away. Giving me a wave from above her shoulders, she sat inside the car. I rubbed my hands together. It was quite cold today and I hadn't worn a sweater or a shawl. I went inside the hostel.

I took the first sip at the coffee and looked at the book. The lock was unusually familiar. My hand roamed in my neck and then I realized how familiar it was. The lock was like an S just like my locket. I opened my locket and placed it beside the book scrutinizing the similarities. I placed my locket over the lock and there was a click sound. The locket pressed against the lock fitting perfectly. The lock started to revolve like a metal piece on the frame of the book. I gulped and then I heard the locket click to the floor. My locket was fallen on the floor I bent to take it and a quite laugh startled me.

I stiffened and looking around the room found no one. The whispers came this time… 'waskandamish' it chanted over and over again. The voice came from within the book. I had been with vampires what could be worse than that? I opened the book in one go and found pictures with black ink. It was a girl sitting on the floor with her head between her legs and crying. I recognized it soon enough. It was me in the library, today. I gasped and stood up. Taking steps back I ended up on my bed…

A certain cold wind blew through the room and the pages of the book turned. The whispers became louder and the book…. 'It was levitating' I chocked. I tried to scream but my voice was caught in my throat. The book came closer to me and then I saw it…. just black scribbles of the ink and nothing else. A pull worked and I clutched on to the bed sheet… it came with me.

This time I screamed painfully hard. My surrounding was dark and blank. I kept falling and I kept crying.

"ABHAY" I shouted futilely. He was not here. Maybe this was the end of my story. I would keep falling into this pit forever. It seemed like forever when suddenly the cutting pain in my leg made me open my eyes.

"Oh my!" I heard a female voice. "I didn't know it was you mistress. I thought it was some spectator who had got the key. I am so sorry" I kept my eyes shut. The voice wasn't helping at all.

"Let me see that" the voice said and then I felt a hand on my leg. The pain slowly faded and I opened my eyes relieved.

"I am sorry" the girl said. She had piercing black eyes and a pale face. She was a foreigner I guess. She wore a T shirt and a short skirt.

"I should have known it was you" she said with a laugh. "But I thought you died that day in the fire" fire? Was she talking about… who I think she is?

"What are you talking about?" I asked her trying to know if she was telling about Maithili.

"That day when they burnt you alive. I thought you were dead and so was Abhayendra. But I found him soon a vampire had found him and changed him." She said with a sigh. "He came to where to be burned so many years after that too… Where were you these days?" I looked at her blankly. She knew about Abhay being a vampire and she also seemed to be quite present during their era.

"Oh what am I asking…? You turned immortal after drinking his blood didn't you? But you never came to meet me" she said sadly.

"I think you misunderstood. I am not who you think I am" I insisted. She laughed.

"Oh sorry I called you mistress… Sorry Maithili its just an old habit…" she laughed again.

"I am not Maithili. I am Pia. I know I look like her" I looked away.

"YOU ARE WHAT?" she shouted. She took deep breaths. "How did you have our spirit. Your spirit is just like hers… Are you an angel too?" she asked.

"No" I said and shook my head furiously.

"I will have to erase your memory sorry… and I would like a good snack too" she said licking her lips… My eyes widened.

"Okay no don't do any of the two. I don't want to forget Abhay or anyone… and don't eat me" she laughed.

"You know Abhay?" she asked curiously. I nodded. "Ahh. Abhay is just the same. He is a very naughty boy. Always making the same mistakes… First the most powerful angel and now a newbie" she said with a laugh.

"Angel?" she looked amused. "It was good till vampires but now its just ridiculous" I snapped.

"Oh so you know a lot don't you?" I nodded. "Just what I was looking for. Give me your hand" she ordered. I raised my hand. She took it and concentrated.

"You are Sugandh's daughter?" she said with a smile. I nodded. "I have been waiting for you for a long time now." She looked past me.

"She was one of the greatest angels I had ever seen. She died a good death" she looked at me.

"SHE DIED OF CANCER" I told her.

"That is better than what fate actually has for our kind." I gulped.

"Your kind? What do you mean?" I tried to stand up but she waved her hand and did something to make me sit down forcefully.

"Sit" she ordered. "Now listen. You need to calm down. I have to show you and tell you what I am and you are" she closed her eyes stood up. And the next thing that I saw was the most beautiful yet the most terrifying thing I had ever seen.

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