Destiny's Play-Pt XXXIII(Pg 144) 4/3 - Page 75

the last two parts were just too good........loved all maaneet's conversation...continue soon...btw i lovd sameera as well....

Originally posted by: zaara2212

loved the update...it feels so right that emotional bonding is necessary between couples, and this ff proves that...

way to go

Thanks zaara. Maaneet have emotionally bonded first. Physical bonding will come eventually but for now they have put it on hold.

Originally posted by: panchjun5

@Opti....Again a fantastic update which shows the groW*H of the relationship between the couple.

And the resolution of the Sameera issue, ends that chapter of the past in Maan's life. Thus enabling Maan and Geet to start on their new journey afresh. This is my perspective about how Maan and Geet feel....but what Sameera feels. well that's a different issue altogether...😛

Sameera's character is an enigma coz she lets others see what she wants them to see and everything else is hidden....It will be a treat to see her unraveling

The last line seems to forebode some upheaval in Maan and Geet's life. It is like the calm before a storm....I'm intrigued....😊

Thanks Kavi. Yes, Sam's issue had to be sorted out if Maaneet had to move on and Geet had to hear it from Sam's mouth that she has moved on. Sam appears to have moved on too. Lets see how her life shapes up. In the original I had a separate track for her because the actress who played her part was liked by many although she turned negative. I'm not sure whether to retain that track or shorten it to just let the readers know what happens to her life because here Sam is a character which has not yet been introduced and readers may not feel for her as much. I will be changing the story here a little to make it more believable than the original.

Don't worry the next update will be a happy one.

Originally posted by: preethia

just went for few min u updated it.....................

loved it...................

u know the essence of ur ff is the simplicity of the emotions u portray and also simple gestures of love which makes it very dear to me...............

i hv never had any chance to celebrate the festivals like this with all ppl around..............so its nice to read something like this.............

their cute and romantic moments hv just started so i know that there r more loads to come........if i am not commenting abt it in my future comments just take it as default that i just love those moments u hv written and i just adore it........

there r going to long way for them to understand each other.............

first time i hv ever liked sameera's character in a ff..............simply superb.............she is one best friend i wud like to hv in my life and wud do anything for her............she is the best thing happened in maaneet's life.................

default question dear when can i expect the next update...............i am sorry i am hungry for ur updates..............u hv made it a habit of mine............ur ff is always open on my browser and i keep refreshing it............

Thanks preethia. I'm a Christian so I've not celebrated any of these festivals myself but have seen it celebrated around me. Yes, they will constantly be learning things about each other and their understanding will keep growing. True, Sam is the best things in Maneet's life.


Will update in the evening.

Opti,

Originally posted by: amzu32

wonderful update....sameera and geet conversation👏👏👏

Thanks amzu. Glad you liked Sam-Geet conversation.

Originally posted by: JayaR

first of all thanks a lot for the PM Opti....

parts 29....
lovely convo btwn Maan n Geet..... at last they have cleared all the mu they had.... n had a heart to heart chat abt their future.....

i think thats the best thing to do to keep your relation... it will only strengthen your bond...
n also loved that sweet n naughty things they were up to in the beach....

and as for part 30...

again a superbbb one....

really liked the part where Sameera how coolly n beautifully explained Geet..... n assured her that there is nothing for which she needs to feel guilty of....

loved it Opti.....

cont soon

Thanks Jaya. Yes, free and frank conversation is the best way to clear things between couple or friends.

Originally posted by: serialwatcher16

Opti,

You were not well? Hope you are fine now. Take care.

Thanks for the update. I really want to know how you are going to take this forward. Will wait. Your updates give me energy to do all the things i am doing. Please keep them going.

Yes, Had a severe headache yesterday but feeling much better now. Wait and see how the story progresses from here. I'll be showing how Maan goes ahead in his marriage and work.