MAANEET SS: THIS IS NOT THE END THREAD 1 - Page 13

wonderful ff...I really loved it...
hope soon maan realized his feeling for geet...
waiting for the next part...

oh no, Maan duffer go get geet before it is too late

awesome...but am feeling so sad for geet...continue soon n thnxxx...

poor geet

hi nice ff! could you please send me pms thank you!

aakriti read all the parts...
great ff..
really feel sad for geet..
plz continue soon

hey Lovely peoples m back wid another update of my SS. hope u all will like it. thanx a lot for ur overwhelming Love nd support so far. i really feel appreciated nd motivated wid ur comments. pls keep motivating me like dis only in future also. nw here's d Part 8 of my SS. hope u all will lyk it. pls feel free to criticise if u all dnt like it😊


PART 8:

He came out nd stops near d Door of his car. He himself don't know y he behaved in dis way inside. He was not like dis. he had never ignored any girl den y he ignored her today. Y he found it difficult to stay dere for a minute more. He couldn't understand d Turmoil going within him. He gets inside d Car nd started Driving furiously he dnt where he was heading to but he needs to go to d place where he can find all his answers, where he can get d solution of all his restlessness. He drives for almost 1 hr nd finally stopped at a Deserted Road. He was still confused dat wats happening to him. His mind nd heart both r not in Peace. He closed his eyes nd leans back at d seat. Wen he reminds of sumthing

"Wenever u feel alone or gets frustrated on sumthing start Listening to music"

"O really wat will happen den?"

"Nothing but we'll get relax for sum moment"

Yes dis is wat Geet use to say Everytym wenever he says to her that he's feeling low. He opens his eyes, switched on d Radio nd gets outside d Car Leaning against d Door. He looked upwards nd saw Clouds forming over dere making it a weather of Rain nd within no tym it starts to rain also but Maan didn't moved from dere because dis Rain is sumwhere soothing him. Getting him relieved from d Fire burning inside him. Hw could he ignore d Rains. He Remembers hw much Geet use to love d Rains. Dese Rains has always been d witness of dere special moments. Infact dere First Kiss has been also takes place in d Rain only. Hw could he forget dat day. It was their First Kiss ever

******~~~~~~Flashback~~~~~********

Maan nd Geet were returning from their Date. Weather was not Good so Maan insisted dat he'll drop her home to which Geet Agreed. Geet loves dis kind of weather a lot nd she knows dat very soon it will going to be Rain which she luves a lot.

Geet: Maan!

Maan: hhmmm

Geet: I think it'll be going to Rain outside

Maan: ya Geet I can sense dat datsy I want to Drop u home soon so dat u can reach home safely

Geet looks at him unbelievingly. Nd den again started looking outside. Maan notices it nd smirks

Maan: wat happen?

Geet: nothing. Just thinking hw boring u r

Maan: Me Boring? U must be joking

Geet: Boring nahi ho to kya ho. I m saying dat it'll be going to rain outside nd u saying datsy u want to drop me home safely

Maan: Geet, I know u love Rains but rite nw wats important for me is to drop u home safely nd on tym. So dnt think dat m nt excited after seeing u happy

Geet said nothing nd started looking outside d window nd soon she feels d drops of water hitting d window pane nd soon it starts to rain heavily.

Geet: Maan! Maan stop d car

He instantly stops it

Maan: Wat Happen Geet? Is everything ok?

Geet: Ya Maan. Everything is ok. Lets get out of d Car nd enjoy d Rains

Maan: Wat? Geet r u mad? Here u r getting late for ur home nd u r asking me to enjoy d rain

Geet: Maan, I can make any excuse to Mom nd moreover she'll understand dat I may be stuck up sumwhere but if we didn't enjoy d Rains now den we may be miss dis special moment nd den later on sumwhere in future we might Regret dat we couldn't able to enjoy dis moment. Come na Maan. Lets get wet in d Rain. Sometimes we have to enjoy d beauty of nature

Maan: Geet m not cuming anywhere nd waise bhi we r not kids dat we go outside nd gets wet in d rain.

Geet: Fine. Baithe raho ander I m going

By saying dis she goes outside d Car. Maan looks her from inside d Car. She's really a kid, he thought nd smiles at her carefree nature. Soon he gets mesmerized by her beauty. Everything about her was just perfect. He saw her dancing like a Kid. She extended her Hands nd looks upwards letting raindrops fall on her face. He unknowingly gets outside d car nd started heading towards her. Geet was totally wet. He can observe her Dress sticks perfectly to her curves. It seems lyk another skin stuck to her. She looks even more beautiful wen she's wet. Geet didn't realize dat Maan is standing just behind her until she felt his hand holding her wrist. He quickly twirls her around nd held her waist by his right hand. He looked deep into her big hazel eyes. Same eyes which has knocked straight to his heart right from d first tym he met her. Geet too couldn't manage without looking at his Deep eyes which shows immense love for her. They were lost in each others eyes. He scanned her from top to bottom. She's was just looking Divine in her wet attire. "Divine beauty" he thought. The raindrops were dripping from her face it seems like dewdrops on d leaf. He noticed d strands on her face due to d sudden pull. He slowly tucked dem behind her ears caressing her soft cheeks. She blushed nd closed her eyes feeling his soft touch. He lowered his head nd placed a soft kiss on her neck. She felt his warm breath on her neck nd unknowingly he coiled her hand around his neck. He slowly kissed her earlobes, den her eyes. Her breathing gets heavier nd she parted her lips. He couldn't hesitate d invitation nd finally he sealed his lips wid hers to which she responded at once. He gently sucked her lower lip drinking d rain drops fall on dem, gently nibbling dem nd soon his tongue gained entry in her mouth exploring each nd every corner nd dey both have a passionate kiss. Dey had no idea hw long dey were lyk dis. all dey know is dat dey were enjoying dat moment, enjoying each other in embrace.

They freed each other after so long to take breath. Geet looked down blushing, smiling while he looked at her lovingly. He lifts up her chin to meet her gaze wid his.

Maan: Geet, Do u regret dis moment?

Geet nods her head in no nd hugs him tightly nd he too hugs her wid same passion.

Maan: Thanx Geet, Thanx for making dis moment special for me. I'll never forget dis moment in my lyf.

Geet: Me Too.

She said slowly nd hugs him even more tight

******~~~~~~Back to Present~~~~~********

He opened his eyes only to find himself standing alone. He looked around nd it was still raining. Everything was same. D weather, D rains, D roads everything all wat has changed is today id d Tym. Today he was standing alone at d deserted Road wid no one but wid his Loneliness.

Maan's Monologue:

I don't know wats happening to me? Y its happening to me? I had break her Heart den y m I missing her? Yes I m missing her no matter hw Everytym I use to tell my heart dat m not missing her but d fact is dat I m missing her. Even in d Pub also where I use to forget every surroundings of mine dere also I couldn't get peace nd wen dat girl came to me den I dnt want to look at her, I just wanted to ignore her. I was not like dat den y m I doing all dis? y my eyes searches only for Geet? Y I wanted to know dat if she's ok or not?

I drove furiously I dnt knw where but I drove I just wanted to get d answers of all my questions, of my restlessness. For almost 1 hr I drove to nowhere nd den finally came to a halt. I was frustrated on myself dat I m not able to understand d turmoil going in my own heart. I leaned at seat of my Car wen I remember her words dat she use to say wenever I feel low. I switched on d music as it was her logic dat listening music will make one's mind nd heart relax. I came out of d car nd looked at d weather it seems dat soon it going to rain nd in matter of seconds it started raining also but I didn't moved an inch as dis rain was soothing me, comforting me. I remember hw much Geet use to Love Rains she forgets every surrounding of hers wen it rains, no matter where she is, all dat matter dat tym is dat she just wanted to enjoy dat Moment. I remember our special moment, our first Kiss. It has taken place in dese rains only. She said dat tym dat if we would miss dat moment dat may be sumwhere in future we would regret for dat but I cant regret dat moment in my lyftym nd m sure nor did she.

But wen I open my Eyes I faced d Reality nd reality is dat today m all alone. Everything around me was same except me who was standing over here Lonely remembering d special moment of my lyftym.

(Maan's Monologue ends)

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Geet was as usual sitting near her window wen it starts to Rain. She loves rain. She loves to watch d rain. She looks at her side nd Saw Misha lying on d Bed. She smiles as she knew dat she was angry dis tym nd wen she's angry she use to do dis only so she decided to not to disturb her nd again started to watch d rains. She always had a special connection wid rains. She forgets all her pain, all her worries wen she watches rains. Nd after d Moment she spend wid Maan in d Rain she use to love d rains even more. Dere most special moment, their First kiss. She cant regret dat moment never in her lyf. That was d most special moment for her den hw can she regret dat. She slowly switched on d Radio to listen the songs while enjoying rains.

Geet's Monologue:

I was dere near my window as usual watching rains. I love Rains. I don't knw wat special connection I had wid dese rains but I always forgets all my pain, all my worries wen it rains. All dat matters to me at dat tym was dat I just wanted to enjoy dem. Nd after our First kiss dese rains has became more special to me. I looked at Misha who was just lying in d Bed. I knw dat she's mad on me otherwise she too couldn't resist herself from not enjoying d rains. I again started to look at d rains.

Hw can I forget d moment which is so close to my heart. I dnt knw about Maan but as far as m concerned I can never regret dat moment as it was d first tym wen someone came so close to me nt even Rahul was never ever able to touched me. May be datsy he use to call me dumb. But It seems like Destiny wants me to remain pure for him only. I cant call dat moment as a weak one because if it I called it as a weak moment den it'll be a insult to my Love. it was a moment dat I would to cherish forever. No matter hw much it gives pain to me, no matter dat if remembering dat moment brings tears in my eyes but still I would cherish it forever.

(Geet's Monologue ends)

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He was still standing dere in d rains leaning against his car remembering Geet. Yes he was remembering her. For sumtym he wants to keep all his thoughts aside nd just wanted to lost in d memories of her wen he heard d voice of Radio nd realizes dat it was still on. He thought of switch it off nw as dese Rains r comforting him more den dese High beats songs wen he heard d voice of RJ nd sumthing inside his heart stops him from switching it off nd listen to him

"Good Evening my Lovely-Lovely Peoples. Dis is Radio Mirchi 98.3 FM nd u r listening to ur Fav Show apne dost PARTH k sath. Doston aaj Mausam bada rangeen hai aur agar aap apne pyar k saath hai to ye bearish aapke liye kafi romantic hai Par agar aap apne pyar k saath nahin hai ya kisi bhi wajah se wo aapse door hai to aapke liye ye Baarish aur bhi Khaas hai kyunki wo aapse door hoker bhi aapke Paas hai. Khayalon me hi sahi. Dooriyan to sirf raaston ki hai, dilon me to kabhi Dooriyan aati hi nahi. Aur fir ye Dooriyan hi to hai jo apko aapke pyar k aur kareeb le aati hai, inhi dooriyon ki wajah se to hum samajh paate hai ki jisse hum itna pyaar karte hai wo asal mein humare Dil k itna Kareeb hai k door rehkar bhi aisa lagta hai k wo humre saath hain. Haan ye baat alag hai uske bina hume kuch bhi acha nahi lagta, har waqt har lamha bus usi ki baatein yaad aati hai. We all feel empty without dem nd m sure har kisi k lyf me ek na ek din aisa zaroor aata hai jab wo apne pyar karne wale se door hota hai kabhi kisi jhagde k wajah se to kabhi misunderstandings ki wajah se but at d end of d day truth is Dat dey Love each other nd if d love is true den dey can never be away from each other for long. To yeh agla Song unhi pyaar karne walon ke liye jo is waqt ek doosre k paas nahi hai par ek doosre ko miss kar rahe hai. Here u go"

Music...

He increases d Volume of Radio nd once again leans against d door of Car

She closes her eyes feeling d depth of music

Ho Love of mine...

With a Song and whine...

You're harsh and Divine...

Like truths and a lie

He closes his eyes nd d face which comes in front of her at dat moment is only hers nd d moments he spend wid her started flashing in front of his eyes. He was living in a harsh reality that she's not wid him nd he had no idea y it was bothering him so much without her.

But d tale end is not here

I had nothing to fear

For my love is yell of Giving nd hold on..

As d lyrics of d song goes she remembers Maan nd d moments spend wid him nd den the truth dat he told her dat day that there was no love between us, that was just Attraction, which aches her heart but yet her heart couldn't stop loving him.

In d Bright emptiness

In a room full of it

is the cruel mistress ho ho o...

No matter hw much brightness was dere in his surroundings yet he feels dat he was standing in d darkness where dere is no ray of sunshine nd he had to live wid d Darkness of dis Loneliness

I feel the sunrise..

that nest all hollowness..

for i have no way to go.. not come...

she had every single person wid her who can comfort her in dis situation, yet she is not in peace as for her whole world is at one side nd her love is at one side. Its been 3 weeks since dat incident yet it seems dat it was a incident of yesterday only. No matter hw hard she tried to not to think of him but Everytym every incident reminds her of him. She was just physically over dere but mentally she's still wid Maan.

And i feel so lonely yea..

There's a better place then this emptiness..

He feels Lonely without her, yes he accepts d fact dat he feels lonely without her. He can only get peace wen she is around him. She has became his Habbit.

And i'm so lonely yea..

There's a better please then this emptiness.. yei yei yei ya'.

She too feels Lonely without him but he was not her Habbit, but her lyf nd hw can anyone live without their lyf.

(Music) Aa.. aa.. aa...

He saw at a distance a Couple is enjoying d Rain which reminds him of his nd Geet nd the tym dey spend in rains. A smile forms on his lips which soon vanish wen he faces d reality

She remembers d moment she spends wid him, wen he proposes her, wen she accepts it, their cute little fights, their first hug, their First kiss.

Tune mere jaana..

Kabhi nahi jana..

Ishq mera dard mera.. haaye...

Tune mere jaana..

Kabhi nahi jana..

Ishq mera dard mera ...

She leans back against d Window silently complaining To him dat he couldn't able to understand her love for him. Everytym it was only she who understands him but he couldn't able to understand anytym. Not even today. A drop of tear came out of her eyes

Aashiq teraaa..

Bheed mein khoya rehta hai..

Jaane jahaan a..

Puchho toh itna kehta hai..

He feels more lonely after seeing dat couple in rain. Yes he is lonely, he is lonely without her. It seems like dere is no one exists in dis world except him. D loneliness without her is killing him from inside. Every moment he spends wid her works as a Drug dat is curing him from dis loneliness. He wanted to tell her about his restlessness, about d storm going in his heart but is not sure hw to tell her.

That i feel so lonely yea..

There's a better place then this emptiness..

She looks at pic of him in her cellphone which she still haven't deleted nd wishes dat someday Maan realizes her true love for him.

And i'm so lonely yea.

There's a better place then this emptiness..

He wipes away d tear dat has formed at d corner of his eyes. He know dat he's lonely without her yet couldn't able to get d fact day y is he feeling empty without her if d thing between dem is not love.

(Music) Aa.. aa.. aa...

He gets into d car nd drove towards his home. He knows dat d storm inside him was not going end soon not atleast until he meet her

She gets up from d window nd lays into her bed nd slowly drifted off to sleep thinking of him.

(P.S. Listen to d Song while reading dis sequence)

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Next day in d morning Geet had a off from her college as dere was a presentation in her college in next week nd she has to prepare well for it becoz her marks depend on dat presentation only nd its very difficult to impress her design teacher very easily so she dnt want to take d chance. Therefore she has taken leave for 1 week from her college. Dere was no one at home as Misha is at her college nd her Mom is in her office. She was working on her project wen someone rings d bell.

Geet(To herself): Ab kaun aa Gaya

She gets up from her chair nd opens d Door but found no one. She shrugs her shoulders nd closes d door. She was about to go back wen she again heard d bell, she turns nd opens d door but again dere was no one. Dis happens for 4-5 tymes again which irritates her. She was sure dat it must be a mischief of any kid from her colony derefore gets more angry.

Geet (To herself): Ye colony k bacche, aaj ye log bachenge nahi mujhse. Yahan mujhe Project ki tension ho rahi hai aur in logon ko Shararat soojh rahi hai, Abhi batati hoon in logon ko

She said nd again goes to open d door. In d meantym she again heard d bell. She opens d door nd without looking at d person she started shouting.

Geet: Kya problem hai tum logon ki, kabse pareshan kare ja rahe ho, shararat band karo warna...

Nd rest of d words left unsaid wen she saw d person standing in front of her. Her eyes widened in both shock nd surprise wen she saw him nd a smile formed on her face wen he spoke to him

Person: Hey Kiddo!

Geet (happily): ARMAAN!!!!

So this is it Guys. i knw i knw i had a very weird imagination for d Song sequence. actually d situation i Actually picturised i couldnt able to write it in words properly. so forgive me for dat nd if u all will throw Jutis nd Chappals on me for dat den i'll happily accept it. So Do tell me hws dis Part. press d like button if u all will lyk it. nd do leave ur Comment/Criticism. its necessary.

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