-truly magical- maaneet ff THREAD 13 - Page 54

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Posted: 14 years ago



70 + pages ho gaye aur main ab new thread k liye congratz kah rahe hoon

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh silly meeeeeeeeeee






yaar jn mk is tooooo cute



i hope mk ka name jald disclose hoga



comments me parha k mk khud MSK ko batae g k she is his daughter.


eagerly waiting for tat








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Posted: 14 years ago


I am doing that too.. Aur kitni der lagegi. I am feeling sleepy. But cannot sleep without reading your update.

Ab to adat si hai mujhko aise jeene me.
Edited by anuandavi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
di....... how much longer... n plz no MU coz of dadi otherwise i am so dead😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey baba jee update kab milega hume
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Posted: 14 years ago
di...waitng...iam on without sleeping to read ur updt,...so plz.
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Posted: 14 years ago

mee three😭😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
-truly magical-
part 131
He looked at her eyes which had so many emotions locked up. No tears no complains, no fear, just cold emotion which he couldn't relate. She looked away & wore her glasses.
Anjali - uncle mujhe games khalena jana hain
devansh - mujhe bhi
his didn't know how to deny them. Mk was still licking her cone & once in a while feeding him sitting his lap.
Geet - mk aap mama paas aajavo, they are going to gaming place now
mk snapped Geet hands & hugged Maan....nahi
geet looked helplessly at Maan.
Maan - why don't u join us.
Geet looked ay him reluctantly & then looked at the pleading face of mk.
She took a sharp breath & nodded.
As they entered the gaming zone, devash & anjali ran to play. Maan tried to put mk down she didn't get down.
Maan - aap ko nahi khelna
she shook her head
Maan - dehko kitne saren games hain
she hugged him & kiss him all over, she didn't even look at any of the games.
He tried showing her some games, but she didn't want to get off from his lap not even for a sec. Eventually he had to leave the game.
Maan looked behind for Geet to ask her wat mk likes but she was no where around.
Geet just stepped out to answer a call from office.
Ayur - u r not coming to office today
Geet - nahi medical pe hoon
ayur - we have some leads on Maan Singh Khurana's kidnapping
Geet - umm..
still looking at Maan who was looking for her.
Ayur - it looks quite misleading
Geet - why
ayur - it seems like second kidnapping may not be connected with militants
Geet - how can u say that?
She was still watching Maan & mk.
By then she notices some wired moment, some guy walking towards Maan ..may be 6ft well built. She scanned him, he had a gun tucked in his back which bulging under his shirt.. she instantly cut the call & reached behind the person while Maan was still looking away from them. She pulled her mousegun & pressed it at the back just above his belt while his hand was just about to take the gun.. She whispered softly don't move. He instantly tried to lift his hand, hands down, walk out without creating any scene. ..as they walked out, she maintained a smile & walked closely not to create a panic.. smile nicely ..as they reached more lonely place with no CC TV watching them.. stair way... he briskly turned to snap her, she was fast enough to pull the trigger just to rip his ribs. He fell on the floor holding his waist. She showed the pistol..in his mouth.. why are u here
Guy smirked she kicked on his bleeding rib washing off the smile on his face & fainted instantly. She wiped the gun on his shirt & her shoes too. She immediately called ayur to arrange to seal this mall & capture the CC TV footage & take him to hospital. She lifted this guy..couldn't, she tried to drag him to a safer place..she really couldn't with one hand, since she had bandaged in the other one. She held him from his collar & settled him on the steps that lead to the closed terrace. By then ayur had arranged for emergency alarm to buzz in the mall to evacuate the place. Few cops along with khan reached the spot. She handed over guy to them. Get him ready for interrogation.
Khan - aap tho medical
he couldn't complete she left from there.
Maan turned back, she was right behind him.
Maan - where were u?
Geet she was still panting & wiping the stain on her shoes - like always behind u
Maan - she didn't play any game
Geet - aap ho to she won't
he smiled ..but didn't understand that bit.
Geet - where are ur body guards?
Maan - neeche parking main hain
she rolled her eyes in frustration - aren't they paid to be with u
he quiet didn't get why she spoke about them may be because of this sudden panic in the mall he thought - mainne hi unhe
she didn't bother to listen to that & turned to leave. He held her hand - ghar nahi chalo ghi
her heart just skipped a beat. She was waiting for this for so many years. There was time when she expected, dreamed , longed cried , craved, every single minute, second for him to say this.. but when she stopped waiting craving, she herself didn't know, she didn't know when she stopped waiting because..she didn't know wat was she waiting for any more. Because waiting had become her life. She just kept walking along with him, tears wanted to fall, but there was no tear left. She didn't know when she sat in the car & when the car stopped infront of the handa hawali. He came around & opened the door for her. She was still not able to believe he actually wanted to take her home. He pointed at the door.. she just followed his gaze. Her dreams shattered ..came down like glass house shatters...again..like all her dreams... not her house..he meant papa - mama.. the smile which was forming expecting Khurana Mansion just died, she turned her face & walked away. He ran behind her, still carrying Mk.
Maan - ek bar mil tho lo
she couldn't refuse him, she could never. Not even if it killed her.
She just walked till the door. Mk jumped to her lap - mama ..kanha ja rahen
as they reached the door, Maan just stepped back, away he couldn't bare to see the tears, may be of happiness, but filled with grief & sorrow of 7yrs, pain of 7yrs. All because of him.
Before Geet could knock the door Rano opened it.. she instantly hugged her & cried
servants called papaji, raji & chinto. Geet looked behind for him, he was no where, again, left her. Left her alone to face every thing like always. She was used it by now probably very strong too, but wat mattered was he gave her, her happiness, her family.. her families happiness.
Rano - kanha tha beta?
Before she could say anything
papaji - koi kuch nahi puche ga meri bachi se
mk peeped from behind & looked at every one
Rano's heart missed a beat & tears just fell looking at the baby Geet as she reached to her. She looked just like Geet ..when Geet was a baby. Rano hugged her instantly - na..naaa..ni...
Rano nodded - naani
she carried her & took her to papaji & said - nanu
she smiled & kissed his cheek. - na...nann.uu
pic thanxs to aleena
precap,
gk .. interrogation
-PREV PART 130 NEXT PART 132-
hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
Really love reading them
please do keep commenting'.
Love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yepee m first to comment...v

mk is si chweeetttt😊😊😊😊...........doesn't want to leave her dady...!!!

GOSH!!! maan is so dumb😡😡😡😡😡...not able to understand wy mk is behaving like that...!!!

OMG gk is so brave n active...loved it this part of her...😊

maan again disappointed geet....!!!

babaji kuch maan ko akal do....😭😭


Edited by Rocks.Dhara - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part. loved it.
aww little mk don't want to stay away from her papa.
good girl chorna nehi aapne papa ko.
aab tumhi aapne parents ko mila sakte ho.

loved the way geet handle the situation but my gut feeling say cause of medical leave may be geet will face some problme as u mentioned in precap.

loved jr mk and sr mk scene.
jr mk is too sweet.
aww geet expected to go their house km but I guess maan want to give her happyness one by one .
first take her to her home , her parent's home .
precap is scary and interesting.
still our stupid maan don't understand about jr mk. hey baba jee maan ka kya hoga.
update is brilliant.
loved gk's action scene.
update soon.


Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
rrr

😭😭...ye ka kardiya di...iss maan idiot kab sudarehga......me can't see geet in pain further...maan is such a dumbo...but he atleast united her to her family as a first step...n plzz...let maan tell dadi soon...me going bonkers...😡...continue soon...luvly update..luved the milan of naanu-nani with their sweetest grandchild ever. n luved the way she was clinging on to maan forever..only she can make it alright....😳
N LUV THE PIC.....MUAAAHSSSS....😳😳

Rohini

Edited by Rohini20 - 14 years ago

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