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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.

Muski,

I m happy that you are updating.
But wanna know something....
I M TOO SCARED TO READ THE UPDATE.....😭😭 BECAUSE YOU SAID GEET BREAKING DOWN😲😲😲😲

no ..dear I didn't say that
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

MUSKI DEAR,
YOU DID....PLEASE READ ABOVE IN GREEN .......IT SAYS
"Geet breaking down"😭😭

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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.

Here she said geet breaking down in the context of whatshe felt when Maan lead her to her mother instead of their heaven (love nest / KM where they took their step to bring jr. Mk to this earth). Not some more brak down.....................

Jaya

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: deejagi

Oh God!
Thanks for clearing that part...I was honestly worried..

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Posted: 14 years ago
plzzz...update soon...😒
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Posted: 14 years ago
plz update...i am dying waiting here
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Posted: 14 years ago

All ur questions will be answered in details as the story unfolds
Q.1 wat Maan thinks of Mk?
Q.2 why does mk talk like that?
Q.3 mk's name...?

-truly magical-
part 132

Rano nodded - naani
she carried her & took her to papaji & said - nanu
she smiled & kissed his cheek. - na...nann.uu
mk turned & looked at the door - mama..da..da...da...da......da...d..dy
Rano kind of understood wat mk meant
geet - office gayen hain
Rano asked in shock - Maan ?
Geet nodded painfully.
Chintu & raji took mk to their room. Rano took Geet to geet's room.
Nothing in her room was changed. Every thing was maintained the way she liked it.
Papaji came from behind - tumari mama ne kisi ko room nahi aane dena hain. She cleaned it every day.
Geet hugged papaji & hid her face in his chest. She felt so guilty to have just left like that. But at that time she didn't know wat else to do. She was 4 months pregnant. Maan was no where listening to her. She couldn't have gone back home & told every one she was pregnant. Some where she knew, no one will disapprove but one finger against the little angel whom Maan desired so much, she couldn't accept it.
Wat if they would have asked her to abort the baby just to for the sake of family name. She was not even mentally prepared to bear the child. But when it was left to her ..only her to choose wat she has to do with the tiny life in her, she chose to do wat Maan would have wanted, even though she had no clue how she was going to manage all that. But the happiness in Maan's eyes carrying mukti's baby lingered in her thoughts. She had never seen Maan so happy & contended before. She couldn't kill his soul in her. She couldn't kill their love. It was theirs..he was angry not breaking off. He just wanted some time to calm down. Couldn't she give him even that.. he waited 5 months for her to accept the wedding itself, he always understood her then why can't she for once.
She was not sure whether she could stay in handa hawali any more like this. It will be too much of pressure on both the families. It could even create humiliation. No ways.. they were married legally. Then humiliation..was insulting their relation, insulting their love, insulting the faith Rano had on their love. She checked her pants she had few thousand rupees notes, her key set & some envelopes. She didn't know where to go, whom to seek help from. She was just threw away the envelopes..some passing by kid handed over it back to her.
Kid - didi aapka gir gaya tha shayad
she checked it was the envelope which she discarded. Just out of nothing to do..she read it..it was her appointment letter for civil services. But is was of no use to her. The joining date was after 6months. She smiled. 6 Months .. she laughed... she will be with Maan & their baby. Maan would not let them a minute away from him. He will be so happy, she couldn't wait to see that delight in his eyes. she could do anything to see him happy & the feel that she was able to give him that happiness was beyond happiness.
She didn't know anyone other than her 3friends, she was not sure if it was good to seek anyone's help, because that would put their relation in question. No body will understand him the way she did. They would only see maan's anger not the love that lay down there. No one knows how much he loves her. He looks tough from outside but deep in he loves her unconditionally the way she loves him. She can express herself in all different ways because that is her, but he is the Maan Singh Khurana..he couldn't be running around trees & singing songs for her. Then she better not fall for him. Even when she had those tablets almost dieing, he still yelled at her. She smiled... gussa tho naak pe rahta hain uff.

She knew it ...she is in love with the Maan Singh Khurana, she is his wife now. She had to do every thing to keep the relation respectful. He had an image to carry & so does she now being his wife. They had difference.. actually not even differences he just needs some time. He said he will come for me. I know he will.

******
She wanted to cry, cry out loud to her parents, but she couldn't. She couldn't cry..it would look as if she is complaining, she couldn't say anything against Maan. There was nothing she had against him. He had given her the most beautiful thing in the world love..their daughter. She didn't say anything just hugged papaji. No tears no anguish, no pain.. just a feel of sorry for not understanding them at that time. Being a mother of 7yr old she understands there pain better now. Actually she can't even imagine their pain.. now she knew it is unbearable.
She put all her wits together - sorry
that's all she could say. & she knew they don't even expect that. They didn't they just hugged her & consoled her instead. Probably that's the power parents have.
******
While having dinner Geet's phone rings. She excuses her self.
Khan - hosh main aagya gk
gk - umm... tum log basic information pucho. I will be there in an 1hr.
She abruptly goes to her room & tucks in the mousegun from the purse into her back. Rano jumps up in fear.
Rano - yeh sab kya hain?
Geet - relax mama. I have the license for this
Rano - lekin gun kyun...suniyen...suniyen woh Geet ...geet ke paas gun hain.
Geet holds her head & looks at mk.. mk shakes her head. She goes to Rano & pulls her kurti
mk - naani..mama is a cop
the whole family was shocked.
Geet - wat?
Papaji - so u did join civil services.
She nodded.
Papaji - how dumb, why didn't I even once thing about it.
Geet's phone rings again. She puts the call on mute...- I need to rush
Geet to mk - nana-naani ko tang nahi karna
mk kisses Geet - umm.
Geet - mama, nanny knows wat mk would need.
Rano lifts mk in her arms - meri nathi hain, I would know her better..hain beta
mk kisses Rano - mk loves naani
she answers the call while getting in her car.
Khan - mo nahi khol raha
Geet - background check kiya?
Khan - sab clean hain
Geet - kya matlab.. he was held in possession of a gun, uska kya
khan - gun ke details track nahi ho parhen hain
Geet - tum s**** se kuch kam teehk se nahi hota
she reaches the police station. She walks in straight to her cabin & pulls out the report
she yells - reports kanha hain?
Constable - ek min mam
gk - pechle 5 hrs se kya c**** saf kar rahen the?
khan walked in wiping his sweat & tucking in his shirt - gk bahut dho diya use, mo hi nahi khol raha.. abhi bhi ice pe letaya hain
ayur walks in - do u want to try sleep deprivation
Geet - we don't have that much time.
Khan - haan , ek attack 2din pehle aur dosare ki tayari agle din.
Ayur - yah ..that was quick
Geet - ayur wat information do u have
ayur - see this was not militants that's wat I feel
Geet - why?
Ayur - I think it was more for ransom kidnapping
khan - aur s**** ke paa..he couldn't not complete
geets left hand went around his head & smashed it against the table real hard. He was totally caught off guard. He didn't expect that, he had seen gk angry & this was furious. He was bleeding & trembling struggling to stand back.
Ayur - gk stop it
her eyes sparked fire. She could kill him for disrespecting Maan. She would just simply do it. Two constables took him out before gk could reach him again.
She straighten herself - wat more details u have.. like nothing happened
ayur was a senior person even though they held similar designation but she was no where close to the officers he had ever met in his 13yrs of service. Almost double her experience. She was ruthless he had heard but was shocked to encounter it. His was little shaken
he cleared his throat - I need some more time to put the facts together
she was restless now - how long? She spat
Ayur snapped & threw the files infront of her - god dam.. why don't u get it. We cannot conclude anything unless we have solid evidence. See these people are far from our reach.
She was no were to get intimidated. She flipped the papers while he continued.
MORE ON GEETS PAST WILL FOLLOW..AS STORY UNFOLDS
precap,
gk interrogation continued!!!
-PREV PART 131 NEXT PART 133-
hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
Really love reading them
please do keep commenting.
Love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
we are waiting
and please let us know how and when maan will come to know abt the child
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Posted: 14 years ago
rrr
luved the update...hmmm...interoggation....at last geet's parents knew evrything abt her...n the way u described geet's feelings were too gud...luved it...so she is giving in time for maan..7 long yearsss n still he doesn't come forward to tell their relationship to the whole world...so ridiculous..though can understand his confusion abt geet at this time...still..poor geet...luv MK...cutie knows where her moma works n doesn't fear rifles..😳..!!continue soon..!!

Rohini


Edited by Rohini20 - 14 years ago

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