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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 130

He was reason for those tears. He was the one who asked Geet to go away. He was the reason.. he nodded his head lifelessly & left from there. Rano fell on the ground crying madly. Papaji didn't understand wat was happening. He tried to console Rano.
Rano hugged him & cried - meri bachi... ..sab meri galti hain. Mujhe unki shaadi ke liya haan nahi karna tha. I shouldn't have told him get registered married
papaji snapped - WAT?
She couldn't hold wat had been buried in her heart for past 8yrs. She didn't want to tell him anything until now because she was not sure wat happened between them. But now it didn't matter any more. She told the whole thing.
Papaji cried breaking down with Rano - yeh sab kya hogaya
Rano had never seen her husband breaking down.. but he did today..he broke down fearing the terrible pain his daughter might be going through that too alone.
Papaji - woh ek bar kahti mujhe se main Maan ke paavan tak pakade leten uskeliya
Rano was shocked her strong husband would do that for their daughter - shayad woh yeh jaanti thi. they couldn't stop the tears that fell down their eyes non stop.
Maan went to the outhouse & looked through all the incidents & tried to make sense. All he could understand was Geet doesn't have her family, her friends near her. Its all because of him. He really needs to get them all back to her. He needs to give her all the happiness she deserves. But how could he, he was not part of her life anymore. He didn't even know where she was ..now since he knows she is in Delhi he was not going to lose track of her. He wanted to seek police help but it may cause trouble to her personal life. He hired some personal agency.
Devansh & Anjali came to Maan & hugged him.
Devansh - uncle challo
Maan was in no mode to go out
anjali - but u promised
he seemed to hate that word now. He couldn't keep any of his promises to Geet. He halfheartedly got ready & accompanied them to the mall.
Geet took mk to the ice-cream shop & got her fav chocolate ice cream. After eating her third cone she was little better mode than wat she was in. All she was speaking was about her daddy. She still couldn't believe she actually met him.
She kept giggling & laughing when she saw him walking in holding devansh & anjali on either sight. Geet sensed her restlessness & followed her view. Maan instantly looked at them. Mk threw the ice-cream away & began to cry & ran out.
Maan looked at Geet & mk. He made devansh & anjali sit with the guards & followed Geet who ran behind mk. Mk made a face & ran to the down the steps. Geet was furious at Maan now. She shouted controlling her voice biting her teeth - pura delhi shar main aapko yahi mall mila tha
he was not sure why she said that. All he knew that she was worried about something..that too again because of him. The more he wants to ease her pain, he is landing up deepening the scars.
They ran behind mk ..she was crying & not liking her father with some one else. She rushed out in the traffic.. Geet instantly picked mk who stood in the middle of the traffic crying not knowing where to go further. Maan immediately hugged them & pushed them away from the car that just zoomed passed them. He held them like it was his life. His heart raced like it may just explode any time. His hand held them like a cocoon. It felt so earthy to have them close to his heart. Like it was just yesterday when Geet was in his arms in the hospital scared of prem's baby. His hold was like the blanket to all the pain & sorrows she has been facing all alone. It felt like home, this was she wanted , longing, craving, yearning, desiring.. just to be in his arms, just to be with him she probably may would have just melted .
He slowly let them out of his hug as three of them began to breath normally.
Geet - aise koi traffic main bhag tha hain kya
Maan was immediately reminded of her standing over the ambulance & firing. He snapped out of his thought seeing mk scared. - usse kyun dant rahi ho
mk immediately jumped to his lap from hers. Geet gave a glare to her.
Mk - da...da....d.....a.....ma.mmmma...guuu....s.....a.....he couldn't follow. He just kissed.
he turned to cross the road carrying mk.. Geet kept looking at their instant bond they seem to form. She thought he may envy it..actually she was loving, like it was so perfect. Before she realized his hand held her wrist & helped them cross the road, his grip around her wrist, like he cared, like it was his, like it belonged there, it send sensation she thought she may not feel again, or thought she has over grown such feelings it felt wired craving for his touch yet again. She snapped her hand -bachi nahi hoon main..she said it coldly. He knew she was angry. Though he could feel the effect of her closeness on him, also knew how uncomfortable she was.

When they walked back to the ice-cream parlor Mk was still angry about Maan coming in with anjali & devansh. She couldn't stand their sight. Her face turned red & annoyed.
Geet looked at him & nodded - u came to meet mk right
Maan just played along - umm
Geet - u got them to make frds with mk
Maan - umm
mk was no where listening. She was still fuming. Maan lifted her kissing her again. She immediately showed the other cheek. Her nose where all red & eyes filled with tears. He placed few more kisses on her eyes & nose. Geet turned away not able to bear the happiness & emotions. Her eyes did feel burned but guess tears had dried up, long ago.
Mk - ka...l. me..ra sa....ath bo...a,,,rd ga..m..e. k...yy.....uu..nn. n..a...h..i kh...el...a. MK k..i..th..n..aa w..a...i..tttt k..ii..y..a...
Maan couldn't follow a word. He looked at Geet while his long fingers wiping mk's tears & kissing her eyes. Geet didn't know how to explain.
Mk didn't even once get off his lap. She had so much to talk to him, play with him.
He fed her the ice-cream.
mk - muje..wo....wali ch..aa..hi..ya
he got her another one. She giggled looking at Geet.
Geet - u have already had
Maan - its ok, just one more
Geet - aap isse begad rahen ho
Maan - tum hona isse sudharne ka liya
their eyes locked, it was all so perfect. He looked at her eyes which had so many emotions locked up. No tears no complains, no fear, just cold emotion which he couldn't relate. She looked away & wore her glasses hiding anything that coud ever be seen.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UKAnr_x4-bc[/YOUTUBE]
THANXS NADDIYA- HAPPY BIRTHDAY
precap,
Geet meeting rano
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muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
FIRST TO COMMENT:- 🥳

THANKS FOR UPDATE 😃

RANO finally told Mr. Handa about Maaneet marriage.........felt bad for them 😭.......... MK is so cute ......... tht huge was awesome😳......... it will take time for geet to heal........ MK, Maan, and Geet look so perfect together......maan already spoiling his princess(which he doesnt know😡)........ a cute family
😳 ....... looking forward to RANO - GEET meeting 😍

Edited: muskan r we still getting tht party dadi had mention
Edited by komlika - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
MUSKI.,........ love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

really really really liked the update... I can see a faint green colour in front of my eyes now...


hope everything will be fine sooooon.

loved our sweet cute mk.. bilkul geet jaise...

me too remebered the ambulance incident.. kitna badal gayi woh...


Edited by febinyusuff - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: komlika



RAKHI ........... r u chup bilkul chup? (maan style 😉)


oh toh humara maan karega jab oh geet ko manofy karega, sab log kehega dekha maan is sweet heart🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
o o......abhi bhi kuch nahi pata chala......
plz want a happy update...................
plz plz.......end their misery now....... its almost 8 years now....
they deserve to be happy.......
Edited by libra25 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
diiii....loved d bond betw maan nd mk.....so sweet....
rano nd pappaji😭...

Geet - u have already had
Maan - its ok, just one more
Geet - aap isse begad rahen ho
Maan - tum hona isse sudharne ka liya.....i loved tis...mummy daddy wala baten...

maan beta...pull up ur socks nd get ready....u hv to manofy many ppl...nt only geet....so get ready...aur is bar apna gussa kam karnae ki gooli ka lena.... bulna mat😡....
Edited by eiya22 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i just came 4rm a dinner i was out nd on my way 2 home i was really excited😉 that its 1 am here so she must have update till now
i was so sure abt it i just came didnt even changed bt my sis b4 me chked on her mob my 1st bad luck nd told me that its written updating she laughed like anything on me😭
nd i just gt faint that more i have 2 wait 🤢
plz plz plz plz plz plz have sum mercy dnt test my patience anympre i gt up early n wanna sleep bt cant b4 ur update so plz plz plz muski darling update quickly
😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it...
plz knock some sense in maan😡....he still doesnt seen to realize that MK IS HIS DAUGHTER....
their bonding was so nice....😳
even geet felt it...but is hiding in order to not get effected by it....
next one is defo going to be an emotional one....cant wait for it...
n maan better hold onto the things that he said in the beginning....he has to make upto her....her friends...her family....
Edited by jyoti_l - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part. loved it.
finally rano told papa jee about geet's marriage.
it's big thing and hope
feel sad for them .
oh no man still not understand about geet's personal life and still in mu.
hey baba jee , give maan some sense
maan hired personal agency
hope they give correct info to maan.
not to any one else.
beautiful bonding between maan and jr mk.
i know when jr mk see devansh and anjali she will react like this.
thnk god still now maan not doing anything stupid.
loved maaneet this conversation.
perfect mama and papa
Geet - u have already had
Maan - its ok, just one more
Geet - aap isse begad rahen ho
Maan - tum hona isse sudharne ka liya
hope every mu will clear soon.
I expected geet's eaction like this.
maan will try hard this time to win her heart.but I know maan will win her heart again.
muskan pls mila do aur saare mu khatam kar do
jr mk, geet's parents every one need to see maaneet happy. and together.
pls muskan mila do unhe.
precap is nice.
update soon.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oooo muski darling fab update simply loved it amazing
ooooooo wat a bond they are sharing without knowing anything maan is just caring 4 her
so much like he knows that she is his daughter
oooo loved their bond loved their hug
finally geet is also fee
ling definitely coz she is nt a emotionless person soon wen he will realize n know everything she will b normal nt may b just like the way she was b4 bt everything will gt 2 its place
hey muskan just wanna ask u thing does jr mk stammers is there sum prob with her plzzzzzzz
clear my this doubt
coz me n my sis fyt on this she sa
ys everythign is normal n i say no the u way ryts it seems she cant speak probably so plz get it clear 4 me na
nd fianlly rano said everything to her
dad oooo loved her dad he cud have done anythign 4 his daughter same like maan can du
hope all get back soon to there place aal ge
t happy
precap luks really promising 2 the brighter side hopefully maan only will get everything ryt
he will make sure that she g
t her happiness back
bt u idiot try an understand u r her happiness she was so happy 2 c u with urz nd hers daughter she
really will bahppi if u gt 2 kno everything
hopefully maan n muskan will sort this out
hain na
Edited by muskaan_cute19 - 14 years ago

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