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Posted: 14 years ago
so sorry for replying late.
Annie, tune itna short update kyun kia???
aur wo bhi itna rush???
it was a gud update ...bt very rush.
wow ... m expecting something like DDLJwala scene ... matlab dost ka dost banke aana.
par humara mayu to hero nikla ... ek dum sach bata k sab kuch thik kar dia ... love him.
like mayur convo.
it was so nice ... lil funny ... so felt so gud.
u knw what was d most beautiful n touchy line in this update.
d last line ... when mayank touch d phone n counted her shut up.
it was so nice.
this was d essence of this update.
loved it.
waiting for next update.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Annieee
kuch zyada hi E nahin daal diye in ur name???🤔😆
SACHI Mein sis
I love love love love ADORE diz part !!
sope finally loser chindhi Sameer ka chehra in front of Nupz daddyz face
n den he zor ka SLAP him 🤣
n he askez Mayu who is he
n Mayuzz like mein hi hoon Nupur ne jisne kaha tha bachke rehka
n his mouth hung open 🤣
em sooo happy Mayur getting married
plezz plezz plezzz continue ASAP
kant wait to read about Mayur weddingzzz 😍
doli mein bitha k sitaaro se saja k zamane se chura k liyee jaee ga ek ros Nupur ka ura k jiyeee Mayank haan hahhahaha
sowwie 4 terrible voice my throat hurtzz bc of soo much orange juice
n den going inside cold swimming pool n swimming in 6 feet
😭
arrey behen did u notice something??
I tell my entire life story 2 u 🤔🤣
ok ok let me shut up
I really need 2 but diz zipper
🤣
haan haan ek aur baat I 4got 2 mention
by gawddd I talk so much na
🤣
Mayank: By the way Nupur... tumhe bache kitne chahiye.
Nupur: WHAT!
Mayank: Nahi maine socha ke ab shaadi kar hi rahe hain toh bachon ki baat bhi ho hi jaye... nahi dekho mujhe aur koi problem nahi chahiye specially shaadi ke baad.
Nupur: SHUTUPPP!!
She said while disconnecting the phone.
Mayank slowly touches the phone to his chest and says "6298"
Smiles and falls on his bed.
diz partzz choo cuteee
n funny 🤣
man I HEART krazzy Mayu
🤣
my math genuis
🤣
*kneeling down on knees* (dunn worry em not purposing u)🤣
just saying plezz plezz plezz continue ASAP na sis
love ya tonz n tonz 🤗
-Lina naam toh suna hoga
*em serious Lina o Lina dil tune cheena mein my name waz there!!!🤣)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb update
Mayur r going to married..Gr8
Cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome Annie !!!!!👏👏

Wow...dat was so quick...& jhakaas...
Nupur's dad slapped Sameer...
He deserved some more slaps from Mayank too..😉😉

The last part..Mayank talking abt kids...& when he is again counting her SHUTUPPs was so cute..😳😳

Lovely update Annie..⭐️⭐️

Cont soon..😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Grand Update <3
Chapter Seventeen(b)
And the sun rose! The day of Nupur and Mayank's engagement had arrived. Nupur had woke up early, it seemed like a dream, she could hear the "dhum dhum" voices of the hammers as the people downstairs were fixing the lights and the flowers inside the house.
It was all a dream; there down in the garden she could see a little board saying "Mayank Weds Nupur".
Heavenly, she thought. Mayank, the man she loved was now about to be her husband.
In the coming week, they both had to tie the knot, had to promise eachother for being there in every condition, beside eachother, forever.
And then, "Nupur beta... shopping pe nahi chalna kya?" she heard the voice of her mother and replied, "Aayi maa.".
She called Mayank. Mayank as usual in his half sleep.
"Bolo Nupur.. phir koi problem hui" with a dipped voice.
Nupur: Main kya sirf tumhe problems par hi phone karti hoon? Aaj hamari sagai hai Mayank!
Mayank: Toh?
He wasn't conscious enough.
Nupur: MAYANK!
She shouted and Mayank came back to the world.
Mayank: Han.. kya keh rahi thi tum?
Nupur: Aaj hamari SAGAI HAI!!
Mayank:OH! Main toh bhool hi gaya.. by the way, purani ring doosre haath mein pehen lo han.
Nupur: Kyun?
Mayank: Kahin tum phans na jao.
Nupur: Woh kaise?
Mayank: Woh aise ke agar raat ko maine tumhe angoothi pehnane ke liye tumhara haath pakda aur tumhare haath mein pehle se hi angoothi hui toh...
Nupur: Toh main bata doon ke tumne pehle se hi angoothi pehna di.
Mayank: Kyun tum shaadi se pehle hi widwa hona chahti ho?
Nupur: Mayank! You are so impossible.
Mayank: 5609.
Nupur: Shuckss!! Mayank mujhe mom bula rahi thi aur main yahan tumhe call kar rahi hoon. Chalo I am going. See you tonight, hone wale fiance ji.
Mayank: Bbye, hone wali wife.
Nupur went downstairs and went to her mom.
Nupur: Maa main ready hoon, chalein? Designer ka bhi phone aa gaya hai. Size aaj doon gi tabhi toh parso tak dono functions ke lehenge banne ge.
NM: Beta aik kaam kar tu jaa main jeweler ki shop pe milti hoon. Ghar mein bohot kaam hai na.
Nupur: Kya maa!
NM: Beta tu jaa na.. main tujhe miloon gi na jeweler par.
Nupur: Ok.
She said while making a sad face and then leaving.
There,
"Mayu! Beta jaa apni sherwani ka size de aa!" Mayank heard this voice there from downstairs.
Mayank:Acha mom!
Mayank and Nupur, both went shopping and by chance, there shops were opposite to eachother.
When, after giving there sizes they both came outside' they both saw eachother. Were shocked but still as they both werent allowed to meet before the wedding, both hesitated.
Mayank: Nupur' peecha karne ki bhi hadd hoti hai.
He said casually.
Nupur: Mayank!! Main nahi tum mera peecha kar rahe ho.
Mayank: Jao. Apni baat cover karne ke liye mujhpe ilzaam na lagao.
Nupur: Mujhe koi shok nahi hai.
Mayank: Mujhse sagai karne ka?
Nupur: Nahi! Tumhara peecha karne ka.
Mayank: Yani' sagai karne ka shok hai?
Nupur: Nahi!
Mayank: KYA!! Tum mujhse sagai nahi karna chahti?
Nupur: Mera matlab tha.. karna chahti hoon.
Mayank: Yani mujhse sagai karne ka shok hai?
Nupur: Mera matlab hai.
And Mayank started laughing.
Mayank: By God Nupur!! Tum kitni confused ho.
Nupur: Nahi... Main kahan confused hoon... main toh bas aise hi.
Mayank: Acha bas han. Aage peeche kitni cool bani phirti ho. Nazar aa gayi aaj "Nupur the great"
He said while cracking up laughing again.
Nupur: Tumhara kuch nahi hoga. Bye.
Mayank: Kahan jaa rahi ho?
Nupur: Apne ghar!
Mayank: Kyun?
Nupur: Hammein sagai se pehle milna allowed nahi tha... Remember?
Mayank: Woh sab aewien bakwaas ki baatein hain.
Nupur: Tumhare liye hongi. Main chalti hoon. Bye, hone wale fianc ji.
She went.
Mayank: Yaar... yeh raat kab ayegi.
He smiled.
Nupur's house,
Mayank's house-In Mayank's room, while wearing the sherwani he felt so good as never before. That was because he wore sherwani for many times... but today he knew the one who'll look at him and will comment on his sherwani or look was his love.
He had never felt happier than this.
Mayank called Nupur, habit to be blamed.
Nupur was getting ready with girls all around her. She just excused them and went to a corner and said "Hello Mayank! Thoda intezaar nahi kar sakte tum kya?"
Mayank laughed at this.
Mayank: Nahi na.. mujhe shaadi aur sagai ki kuch zyada hi jaldi hai.
Nupur: Tumhe toh bachon ki bhi jaldi thi.
She said sarcastically.
Mayank: Nupur... arre han yaad aya bachon ki toh baat wahin reh gayi... toh, kya decide kiya, kitne chahiye? Mujhe toh 10 chahiye.
Nupur: Theek hai. Toh khud hi peida karna 10 bache. Urghhh. Biwi chahiye ya nahi?
Mayank: Chahiye na.. Tum nahi hogi toh bache kaise honge.
Nupur: Urghhh. I hate when you tease me.
She said and disconnected the phone.
When she disconnected, Mayank said "I love when you actually get irritated of what I say."
He said and continued gelling his hair and turning them spiky.
Whereas Nupur had got totally ready. She stood in front of the mirror. Dressed in a lovely pink lehnga with beautiful silver embroidery on it and having the duppatta on her right shoulder chaining to her left hand. She looked beautiful, she thought in her mind, and the thoughts that Mayank would love to see her like this' excited her mind. Loving the fact that now with all the traditions done, she was about to be declared as the fianc of Mayank Malhotra and the future wife too.
She remembered the moments of their first meeting, and this made her smile. Both didn't know what the destiny had in it. But now that the destiny was kind to their story, finally' she loved the fact. Her feelings had no words to define them. Just heavenly enough to drool upon the fact that she was finally getting engaged to the person she loved' the most.
She took her old ring off and wore it in the other hand and emptied up the place for the new ring.
Finally, Mayank... Along with his family and all other relatives had reached Nupur's place.
Few girls brought Nupur downstairs. While seeing her climb down the stairs Mayank had been feeling so lucky that the "most" beautiful girl of this world was today going to promise him to be his. And in another week'she was going to be his forever, eternally.
Finally when she came downstairs' she comfortably sat on the sofa beside Mayank's sofa. Sitting on the stage they both felt like laughing hard. But somehow controlled there laughter, but when their eyes looked at each other. They both did burst out laughing. But, when everybody grinned at them, they both became silent.
Mayank whispered "You look beautiful today."' "Isse zyada sunder tum pehle kabhi nahi lagi."
Nupur whispered back "Aaj se zyada handsome tum bhi pehle kabhi nahi lage Mayank' leikin tabyet theek toh hai na tumhari?"
Mayank wondered why this question was asked. He was fit and fine' and he knew that Nupur knows this.
"Main bilkul theek hoon' leikin tum yeh kyun pooch rahi ho?" He whispered.
"Tumne pehli baar meri tareef ki hai' zara shock lag gaya tha." She whispered back smiling and giggling a little.
"Hone wali Mrs.Mayank Malhotra ji' kya apko pata hai ke apke mazaak zarurat se zyada LAME hote hain?" He whispered sarcastically.
"Han han jo bhi' By the way' yeh rasam kab shuru ho gi?" she said eagerly.
"Badi jaldi hai Mrs.Hone wali Mayank Malhotra." He said winking.
"Thak gayi hoon main! Issi liye keh rahi thi." She said with her angry face.
"Sirf 4 minute hue hain tumhe yahan mere saath baithe hue aur tum itni jaldi thak gayi? I wonder poori life kaise guzaro gi."
"Shut up." She said while cutting the conversation off.
"7678." He muttered, smiling.
Some things never change.
Finally all the traditions started.
Mayank and Nupur were asked to stand up for this custom and were given rings in their hands to continue the "rasam" or better to say, the custom.
Finally, Mayank held Nupur's hand and slowly inserted the ring in her finger. Nupur and Mayank smiled at eachother. And Mayank brought his hand forward for Nupur to complete the custom. Nupur too did insert the ring and then' completed the custom.
They both sat on the sofas again. Mayank whispered in her ear "You are almost mine now."
"I love my maths student." She said while blushing.
"I love the moti teacher too." He winked.
That night, both were just too happy, looking at their rings, and thanking the God that the day was just about to come.
5 days later..
Nupur was getting mehendi on her hands and feet. She felt so good while Mayank's name was being written in between the floral design. She had always feared the name here to be Sameer but thanking the God it was Mayank's name there.
After the mehendi was done, she sat in her room to let the mehendi dry but rather than doing something else she just sat there' kept on reading Mayank's name on her hand, and drooled over it.
So finally, the night had arrived; Mayank and Nupur were very happy and there smiles were the perfect example/proof to this.
A day later'
Nupur was sitting in front of the mirror with two beauticians had surrounded her. The jewelry, the red gown, and the make-up were just enhancing her beauty. The mehndi on her hands had the dark-brown, almost black colour which proved how much Mayank was going to love her after the wedding. And after all was done, she slowly looked up in the mirror with all the innocence in her eyes, she saw the most beautiful bride in herself.
She just wondered what will be Mayank's reaction seeing this. If she was looking great Mayank wouldn't be looking any less, after all she had the most handsome bridegroom ever, she knew.
There, at Mayank's place, the baraat was all-ready to depart. Mayank was wearing a white sherwani with splendid red and golden colored work on it.
Mayank and Nupur, both were really excited for this day. Eternally they were about to be each other's. Lovely feeling'
Finally the baraat departed. It took them 30 minutes to reach Nupur's house obviously because baraats have to move slow.
Finally, the voices echoed in Nupur's ears, girls ran here to there "Baraat aa gayi!!" Butterflies flew in her stomach. Mayank had reached to steal her away. Her prince was there to make her his forever.
Mayank had sat in the mandap and the priest recited the mantras.
"Dulhan ko bulayie." Priest said and Nupur's mom sent three girls to bring Nupur downstairs.
Seeing Nupur come downstairs, he was left mesmerized. He had never seen such a beautiful doll anywhere. Yes, she seemed more than a beautiful Barbie doll dressed up in a wedding-gown. The "chan chan" was heard as she walked with her heavy dress and the jewelry. Mayank's heart was beating with Nupur's every step towards him.
The girls made her sit near him, when with the innocent and beautiful eyes, she looked at her groom' she found him too handsome to be adored. In the sherwani and the pagdi which had covered his head, he looked no less than a hero. They kept on looking at eachother until their attention was been diverted to the mantras. Finally, the hands were in hands' and they were asked to stand up and take the "pheras". First' second' third till seventh' the pheras were complete and the seven promises were done. And there eyes promised to never break any promise.
Sitting down again, Mayank was given the sindoor to fill Nupur's "maang" with all the dreams and his love. Picking up her "bindya" he completed the custom. Then, he tied the "mangal-sutra" in her neck and his eyes promised to keep her happy forever. The "kanya-daan" was done, and Nupur now belonged to Mayank, eternally.
"Aaj se aap dono pati-patni hue." And the happy smiles came to their faces. They were tied in the biggest relationship now. Both of them promised to never leave each other, through their eyes.
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Hope I have succeeded to write the biggest part of my Fan fiction.
It has 2000+ words.. Totally 2,111 words for you, Suja. *winks* (111 extra of my drya-dilli)
Love you all,
Precap: The First Night Together; "Suhagraat."
Thanks a lot for reading.
Hoping for an awesome response to this part of my fan fiction.
-Annie
Edited by -Annie- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u sooo much for updating...
will comment details mein bt aram se ok...
love ya...🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fabulous update
Loved mayank teasing nupur n her got irritated was mindblowing and loved their fight.
When they laughed sitting there on the sofa made me giggle too.MayUr r just unique couple.Who laugh on their engagement day.
Lovely
Beautifully written
Plz cont soon n tnx fr pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb update..
Now they are united forever..😳
cont soon annz
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks to your darya dilli Annie...for this beautiful update...
very nice...
though precap interests me more..*winks*(lolzz...just kidding)
very nice...
this FF hasturned out to be beautiful from the initial cute nok-jhoks...
very nice..
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow annie it was wonderful update dear
simply beautiful
lol lol mayur abhi bhi bachho jaise fight karte hai.
i really loved this couple- so cute and adorable
Engagement , mehendi and finally shaadi everything was just perfect..
excellent job hun
now waiting for mayur first night...:D


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