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Posted: 14 years ago
Annie !!!!!🤗

Fantastic & mindblowing update..👏👏

2000+ words..😲😲dat needs a bow...⭐️⭐️

This was simply a treat to read..all the customs...& their cute nok-jhoks & math's between them..was very sweet..😳😳

Cont soon..

Love ya..🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updt
can't wait for the next part..
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Annie,
grt update dear ... thank u so much for this long update.
hmmm...2000+ words ...grt huh ... warna tu to ekdum gyithi 😈

now come to this update.
it was brillinat ...beautiful ...wonderul ...n hilarious.😃
mayur phone convo was hilarious ... they still same.😆
poor mayank ... bhul hi gya tha k aaj uski sagai hai ...lol😆

Nupur: Aaj hamari SAGAI HAI!!
Mayank:OH! Main toh bhool hi gaya.. by the way, purani ring doosre haath mein pehen lo han.
Nupur: Kyun?
Mayank: Kahin tum phans na jao.
Nupur: Woh kaise?
Mayank: Woh aise ke agar raat ko maine tumhe angoothi pehnane ke liye tumhara haath pakda aur tumhare haath mein pehle se hi angoothi hui toh...
Nupur: Toh main bata doon ke tumne pehle se hi angoothi pehna di.
Mayank: Kyun tum shaadi se pehle hi widwa hona chahti ho?
Nupur: Mayank! You are so impossible.
Mayank: 5609.

hilarious.🤣
poor mayank ... nupur ko tease karna nhi bhulta ... nupur pissed off him ... bechari🤣
love their convo ... shadi se phle hi bidhwa ...🤣
ohh ... i just love mayank's counting ...😍
so mayur unfortunately ... actually fortunately met at shop ...n they shocked to see each other.😛
n now...mayank ws back to his work ... teasing nupur 🤣

Nupur: Mujhe koi shok nahi hai.
Mayank: Mujhse sagai karne ka?
Nupur: Nahi! Tumhara peecha karne ka.
Mayank: Yani' sagai karne ka shok hai?
Nupur: Nahi!
Mayank: KYA!! Tum mujhse sagai nahi karna chahti?
Nupur: Mera matlab tha.. karna chahti hoon.
Mayank: Yani mujhse sagai karne ka shok hai?

most hilarious convo of a going to be Fiance jis ...🤣
poor nupur was so confused.🤣..mayank ne kitna confused bana diya by god🤣
loved it.😊
like mayur sagai scene.😃
i can imagine whole mayur scene ... nupur looks so beautiful in lehanga...n mayank look too much handsome in sherwani.😍
lol ... sagai se phle hi ye dono suru ho gye.🤣

Mayank: Nupur... arre han yaad aya bachon ki toh baat wahin reh gayi... toh, kya decide kiya, kitne chahiye? Mujhe toh 10 chahiye.
Nupur: Theek hai. Toh khud hi peida karna 10 bache. Urghhh. Biwi chahiye ya nahi?
Mayank: Chahiye na.. Tum nahi hogi toh bache kaise honge.

hilarious.🤣
only mayank can say like this on his engagement day.🤣
wo nhi sudharnewala.🤪
baapre ...10bacche chiye ...agar 12 bolta to ek puri team ban jati aur wo bhi extra player k sath...🤣

When she disconnected, Mayank said "I love when you actually get irritated of what I say."

this line was so sweet ... it shows how much mayank loves her.😍
this was d witness of his true love for her.😍
loved it.😊

love engagement scene ...n also like their cute lil nokh-jhokh.😊
itwas grt ... i loved to watch mayur cute lil nokh-jhok😊
hayyy ...love nupur's mehendi ...hayyy dark-maroon color ...mayank kitna pyar karta hai usse yaar.😍
mayank' k naam ki mehendi ...hayyy😍
yaar...i alwz thot k sameer jarur kuch na kuch karega ...par thank god, usne kuch nhi kia🤔
hayyy ...mayur marriage.😍
it was so beautiful ... i can imagine whole marriage scene.😃
u wrt beautifully ... u knw, this marriage scene was more beautiful than mayur marriage in mjht.😃
grt writing dear...hats off to ur writing skill.👏
like their silent vows along with ritual.😍
it was so grt to watch them married.😍
excellent Annie.😃
fab job.👏
continue soon.😊
thanks for the pm.😊

aur next part mujhe 3000+ words me chiye ... kyunki precap sounds interesting. aur tu to romance+humor ki maharani hai ...to itna to kar hi sakti hai ...😳
aur haan main tujhe request nhi kar rahi ... dhamki de rahi hu ... warna 😈 tu janti hai 😈

Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
MIND BLOWING UPDATE
I LOVED IT
Thank u so much a dear for this Lovely part
So beautiful and cute
waiting for there suhag raat
thanks For Pm and Big part
cont soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG Annz ,main to mar gayi yaar.
Mayank Nupur ki sagai aur shadi ek hi update mein.😍
lovely update, do continue soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting for next update soon🤪
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update annie
loved it
do cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

i am happy that finally they got married...😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome di..no words.plz cont soon...

LOVE...❤️❤️❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter Eighteen(a)
The barat was just about to go back taking the bride to her new house. The last tradition of "vidai" was done and finally, Nupur had to leave with Mayank, to her world of dreams... Mayank and Nupur got seated next to each other in the car and driver was driving, no one else was in the car.
Slowly, seeing those moist eyes of Nupur, Mayank cupped her face and gently wiped her tears fearing the make-up will get removed, but the make-up didn't.
"Don't cry Mrs. Mayank Malhotra." He said while giving her a handkerchief. "Mrs. Nupur Mayank Malhotra... finally!" he muttered while giving the happiest smile he could.
Nupur slowly put her head on his chest and said,
"I love you." He smiled and supported the hug.
Finally on reaching the home, both of them got out of the car and stood in-front of the door where Mayank's mom did there "aarti" and then did let them in.
Eyes full of dreams...smiles full of promises...everything moved perfect. "Greh-pravesh" was done. Nupur entered the house where she had to spend her whole life... with her now-husband, Mayank Malhotra.
Girls took Nupur to the room which was now decorated with flowers and beautiful floating candles were floating on the surface of water, in the big jars. A soothing smile had touched her heart, the fragrance of roses.
Her heart was nervous, Nupur did not know what'd happen... but yes a hope for the coming life being beautiful had been exciting her mind. Even the thought of being "one" tonight was just exciting her nervous system.
Mayank finally entered the room; Nupur looked up and got shy.
Seeing her getting shy, his cheeks got red too. He came and sat near Nupur.
"Mrs. Mayank" he winked and held her hand.
Nupur smiled.
Mayank took out two gold bangles out of his sherwani's pocket and slowly helped her wear them in her smooth hands.
Mayank: Aaj tum bohot sunder lag rahi ho Nupur.
Nupur went shy again.
Mayank: Kya baat hai... baat karne ka mood nahi hai kya?
He said winking again and slowly unpinning the duppatta of her hair removed her jewellery. He kissed her forehead and the cheeks which were becoming even redder. He removed her bindya and kissed there too.
Both of them freed each other's organs removing everything. The hot feeling inside the room letting the tempo of the feeling even rising more...
While kissing her back and the collar bone he felt a love that won't ever end. Kissing her everywhere, she kissed him back. Hands in hands and their bodies eternally in each other's body.
The next morning...
Nupur woke up earlier, seeing him lying beside her, she felt so good.
"You are mine." She said as she creased her fingers through his spiky hair. She slowly kissed his cheek.
She kept on staring him and then, he woke up.
"Good morning Mrs. Nupur Mayank." He said with his cutest voice ever.
Nupur: Good morning husband.
She winked.
Nupur: By the way tum kal se mujhe "Mrs. Mayank Malhotra." "Mrs. Nupur Mayank." Waghaira kyun bula rahe ho?
Mayank: Kyunke acha lagta hai.
Nupur: Matlab?
Mayank: Tumhare naam ke saath mera naam, kitna acha lagta hai na.
Nupur: Mujhe toh yakeen hi nahi ho raha. Hamari shaadi ho gayi haina. Abhi 2 mahine pehle hi ham mile aur shaadi. Haye.
Mayank: Toh tum kya chahti thi? Ham bhi unn purane couples ki tarah 3-4 sad gaane gaa kar milte?
He laughed.
Nupur: You know what, Mr. Malhotra?
She smiled.
Mayank: What?
Nupur: Mera pati paghal hai.
She said and went inside the bathroom.
"Yeh pehli baar bola." He giggled while teasing her.
She closed the door harshly with all angry face.
"I love you." He muttered while smiling.
The dining table,
Mayank and Nupur sat there with Mayank's parents.
Women of the house; Nupur and Shilpa sat opposite to the men on the four-chair dining table.
Meanwhile they all were conversing with eachother; Mayank just slowly seductively moved his foot on her legs.
When Nupur noticed it... she just coughed a little and did it back.
She was doing it on Mayank's leg, but someone else was feeling it. It wasn't Mayank's leg actually; it was her father-in-law's leg.
MD: Nupur beta...
He said giving a naughty smile.
Nupur: J...ji dad?
MD: Beta... yeh mera peir hai.
Nupur hesitated and Mayank giggled a little.
Nupur: Han dad.
She said, hesitated, coughed and went upstairs.
Mayank too excused both, and left behind her.
When he entered he saw Nupur giving the shy laugh seeing her in the mirror.
Mayank: Kya baat hai Mrs.Mayank... bada sharma rahi ho.
Nupur: Tum apni taang aik jagah par nahi rakh sakte.
She glared at him.
Mayank: Tum apne pair nishane par nahi sehla sakti?
Nupur: Tumne apni taang kyun side pe ki?
Mayank: Tumhara nishana ghalat gaya.
Nupur: Tum ghalat the!
Mayank: Excuse me... yeh koi tareeka hota hai apne husband se baat karne ka?
Nupur: Theek hai, you deserve something better, right?
Mayank: Yes.
He moved his cheek forward expecting a kiss from Nupur.
But what he recieved was a pillow hit hard on his back.
Mayank: Apne devta-samaan pati pe haath uthate sharam nahi aati.
He said sarcastically.
Nupur: Nahi!
She said while hitting him hard again with the pillow. Mayank too picked up a pillow and started hitting her with it. She hit him... he hit her; just like two little children would do if they were left alone in a room.
Nupur meanwhile slipped on the wooden floor's tiles and fell on Mayank. Both of them while falling on the bed and getting unbalanced got their lips been touched with each other.
Both of them gave those little hesitated and blushed smiles. While they looked in each-other's eye, they felt like the heat in the air, both got a little suffocated feeling each other's breath that they had to move.
Finally, they both sat on the bed resting their backs. When Mayank slowly came behind Nupur and hugged her tightly from backside.
Mayank: Yeh sab aik dream lagta hai.
Nupur: Kya?
Mayank: Yeh sab. Ham dono husband-wife hain... hamari shaadi ho gayi... aur tum hamesha mere saath raho gi. Is this less than a dream?
Nupur: I feel complete.
Mayank: And I don't.
Nupur: Matlab?
Mayank: Abhi toh mujhe aik junior Mayank chahiye.
Nupur: Itni jaldi? Kam se kam 9 mahine toh lagte hi hain na.
Mayank: 9 mahine I don't mind... atleast confirm toh ho jaye.
He said winking.
Nupur: Dhat!
She said while pushing Mayank back. Mayank tightened the hug naughtily.
Mayank:Nupur... pinch me.
Nupur: What!
Mayank: Pinch me na.
Nupur just pinched him on his hand.
Mayank: Ouch! Thank God! Yeh dream nahi hai.
While placing his mouth on Nupur's shoulder.
Nupur: Mayank...
Mayank: Han?
Nupur: I love you.
Mayank: 38.
Nupur: Phirrr?? Urghhh!! I hate you so much.
Mayank: 3906.
Nupur: Tum baaz nahi aoge na?
Mayank: 7668.
Nupur: Tum nahi sudhroge bas!
She said with all angry face.
Mayank: Tum? Haw. Aap bola karo... I am your husband. Balke aajse mujhe "ae ji sunte ho..." kehke bulaya karo.
He giggled.
Nupur: Ae ji... sunte ho... mera aik kaam karo ge?
She said and picked up the vase infront of her and while giving him the vase.
Mayank: Kya karna hai?
Nupur: Isse apne sar mein maar lo.
She said and went to her cupboard.
Nupur: By God! Shaadi ho gayi hamari... aur tum abhi tak inhi harkaton par lage hue ho.
Nupur kept on saying such words while folding her clothes, like typical wives. Mayank kept quiet and kept on listening to her "dantt" while he sat texting on his mobile, like typical husbands.
Nupur: Tumhe zara bhi farak nahi padh raha ke main kya keh rahi hoon?
Mayank: Nahi!
Nupur: Kyun? Urgh!
Mayank: Because I am the husband.
He smiled and left the room.
Nupur stood with her shocked expressions seeing Mayank so relaxed and chilled even after a long session of being scolded.
The next day... the sun rays had just touched Nupur's eyes because the curtains had been opened.
She opened her eyes and saw Mayank coming out of the bathroom after having a bath. He was dressed in cute business-man attire, looking really handsome.
Mayank: Good morning patni ji.
He said while standing in-front of the dressing-table's mirror.
Nupur stood with a shock; she looked at the clock which ticked "8:00 am". Mayank Malhotra was himself awake, early morning? Huh!! She was shocked and surprised.
Nupur: Mayank!
Mayank: Yes?
Nupur came near him and touched his forehead.
Mayank: Yeh kya kar rahi ho?
Nupur: Bukhar toh nahi hai.
Mayank: Yeh bohot dukh ki baat hai, right? Nupur yeh paghalon jaisi harkatein kyun kar rahi ho?
Nupur: Bukhar nahi hai toh tum itni jaldi kaise uth gaye? Pakka kuch gadbad hai.
Mayank: Main office jaa raha hoon.
Nupur: Kyaaa!!!
She said while making up expressions as if fainting and falling back. Mayank caught her.
Mayank: Dramas bandh karo Nupur. Main late ho raha hoon.
Nupur: Chalo mere saath.
She held his hand and was taking him somewhere.
Mayank: Kahan?
Nupur: Doctor ke paas.
Mayank: Kyun?
Nupur: Kyunke pehli baat tum subah subah uth gaye, Mazak nahi jar rahe ho, office jaa rahe ho aur late nahi hona chahte. Toh bimari kaafi serious hogi na.
Mayank: Arre wah. Pehle khud hi bolti thi ke zimmedar bano, ab shaadi ke foren baad zimmedaar ban gaya hoon toh tumhe yakeen nahi ho raha. Kaisi patni hai meri... acha who sab chodo aur mujhe batao ke yeh tie kaise bandhte hain?
Nupur laughed.
Nupur: Ghode jitne ho gaye ho aur ab tak tie nahi bandhni aati?
Mayank: Nahi.
Nupur: By God! School mein kya karte the?
Mayank: Mummy bandhti thi.
Nupur: Mummy? Awwh! Bechara Mayank!
She laughed hard while bullying him.
Mayank: That isn't funny Nupur.
Nupur: Acha? Aur jab tum meri har baat ka Mazak baanate ho tab?
She laughed again.
Mayank: Ok then. Main apne full form par aa jaoon phir?
Nupur: Nahi. Issi tarah better ho.
Mayank: Thank you. So please ab yeh tie bandh do. Mujhe office jaana hai.
Nupur: Leikin kahan jaa rahe ho?
Mayank: Shayad tum bhool gayi, Malhotra industries? Mere dad ki hain? Right?
Nupur: Toh?
Mayank: Main aaj se wahan ka managing director hoon.
Nupur: Kisne kaha?
Mayank: Dad ki taraf se... wedding gift.
Nupur smiled and took the tie from him. Slowly went near him and started tying his tie. Mayank kept on noticing her while tying his tie with full concentration. When she was done...
Nupur: Yeh lo Mayank... ho gaya.
Mayank saw her and kissed her forehead.
Mayank: Bye Nupur.
Nupur: Bye Mayank. Best of luck...
She said while passing a fly-kiss.
Mayank looked back while climbing down the stairs and winked at her. Nupur blushed and went inside.
-End-
Thanks for the awesome replies people.
Loved them,
Thanks for reading this part,
Hope you are going to like this.
Love,
-Annie
Edited by -Annie- - 14 years ago

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