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Posted: 14 years ago
hey dear!
i just got done reading this ff
it's amazing
i love it so far.

two of my best things together.
FBI- mystery things and interns!
they rock
thank you so much for thinking the concept this way.

U know, i just love readin stories etc on AR and FBI secret mission sort of things.

Continue soon
it's been long since u last ud'd
Pls!

a humble request from ur newst reader. 😉

love khushi
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one thing i forgot to mention.
PM me whenver u ud.
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I want the ud of AR version.
Not ArSh. love AR more than ArSh 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Princess_Khushi

hey dear!

i just got done reading this ff
it's amazing
i love it so far.

two of my best things together.
FBI- mystery things and interns!
they rock
thank you so much for thinking the concept this way.

U know, i just love readin stories etc on AR and FBI secret mission sort of things.

Continue soon
it's been long since u last ud'd
Pls!

a humble request from ur newst reader. 😉

love khushi


Welcome to Saviour sweetheart..

n thnx for ur lovely comment...

n dont worry...update is coming shortly...im working on that only...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Princess_Khushi

one thing i forgot to mention.

PM me whenver u ud.
u already r in my buddy list
😳

I want the ud of AR version.
Not ArSh. love AR more than ArSh 😛


add anumeha_PM in ur account...

n i'll PM u surely...😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

NOTE:


firstly im sorry for being super late once again...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat


Welcome to Saviour sweetheart..

n thnx for ur lovely comment...

n dont worry...update is coming shortly...im working on that only...


Thank you di!
Ur most welcome.
Will be regualr in commenting now that i know how amazing the FF is.
Oh great. Me waiting then.
Guess it's my lucky day today. 😳

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i sent request.
it says u r already in my buddy. 😆

WAITING! UD SOON! 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago



PART 6...


REcap: finally Armaan n Ridhimaa came face to face...




But Ridz was in shock'''duty wid this loser'where as Armaan smiled'''..get ready for the fun Dr.Basket''''n gave her a cute n sweet innocent look'which made her agitated''n she left cursing again'but Dr.Keerti this tym'for giving duty wid Mr.Arrogant''..



Ridhimaa already left for her work in the General Ward'n Armaan followed the suite'they both entered the ward together'.which was filled with patients n nurses b wardboys were also there takng care of them..



Ridhimaa moved towards her patients n started checking them'where as Armaan was still standing on the door..trying to understand wat to do'yes he studied medicine..n also wanted to be a doctor,but he was completely blank bcoz he didn't handled the patients at all...he knows hw to handle the criminals'.being rough n tough wid them but wat he do wid the patients..



Armaan: [praying in his mind..n mummbling] aaj tu bacha lena bhagwan ji'.


N then move towards the patients'a big fat old lady'''


Armaan: 'picking up her file n reading.' Hello aunty kaise hai aap'.


Lady: oye..meenu lady na bol..bada old lagta hai'tu mein preetu bola..mera na [name] Preeto hai ga ji'


Armaan: ji preeto ji... 'said wid a fake smile'


Preeto: oye preeto ji nai sirf preeto..tuwade lae [just for u] ' 'she said a bit smiling n shying''


On the other hand Ridz was having tough to control her giggles seeing Armaan's bechara face..n when Armaan looked in her direction to get some help..as his so called lover PREETO was not leaving him she turned around n started doing her work'after a lot of requests n pleasing wid a promise to be back again'she finally left Armaan...n he just ran from there n started checking his patients'in between questioning Ridhimaa wat to do..where is the place n wat not'like..


"Dr.Ridhimaa'yeh diabetes ke patient ki medicine kaha hai?" She answered him but again after few minutes a question pop out'


"Agar kisi ko emergency mein ICU bhejna ho tu who kahain hai?" She again answered wid a fake smile n Armaan was enjoying irritating her'


"Dr.Ridhimaa yeh caf kahan hai"


"Dr.Ridhimaa mujhe pharmacy jana hai can u guide plzz"


"Dr.Ridhimaa'aap kitna kaam karti hai na'Dr. Ridhimaa this'Dr.Ridhimaa that'.." n wid all these questions..her face was red wid anger n she was just going to burst out anytime'


Armaan seeing her face'..knew that he had irritated her a lot''.n ran from there n again started doing his work'where as Ridhimaa was still fuming n ready to take revenge'


While on the other side in Path Lab..Atul n Anjali were doing the experiments n doing there work'n Atul was asking her few things..


Atul: Anjali waise hum yeh Path Lab mein duty kyun kar rahe hai'humne thodi na koi scientist banae hai jo yeh log humse yahan duty karwa rahe hai'


Anjali: Atul just shut up'.


Atul: arey but mein tu genuionly pooch raha tha'


Anjali: Atul tum chup chap apna kaam nahin kar sakte kya' 'she said wid a glare wich can kill'whereas Atul just nodded n again started working''



After few minutes Atul again started speaking'


Anjali tum beth kyun nahin jati'thak gaye ho gin a'.


Anjali tumhein bhook tu anhin lagi na'.etc..etc' making Anjali rolled her eyes seeing him like this'but he can do he also fell helplessly in love wid her'on the mere first sight''


Abhi n Nikki were doing there work'wid Abhi guiding her n throwing all the work on poor Niki'n on the other side'Rahul n Muskaan as usual fighting rather than doing the work given to them'n that is to check patients n take care of them'


Well all this was going on but someone was there a shadow'keeping eye on all the interns n specially on Ridhimaa n Anjali'.he took out his fone n left from there'


Shadow: 'voice of a man can be heard' Hello yes boss they r in the hospital doing their work'.im keeping my eyes on them'will let u know all the details'' n getting instrustions from the other side he left'


General Ward:

Armaan n Ridhimaa were doing their work''..n Armaan was taking care of Nana..who was ready to move out from the bed'n keeps on telling Armaan'how many Natak n Films he have done..


Nana: oye apple'tu sun raha hai na'


Armaan: ha nana mein sun raha hoon'aap bas ab aram se beth jaye aap ko araam[rest] ki zaroorat hai'


Nana: arey mujhe kuch nahin hua acha khasa hoon mein'awein hi mujhe yahan pakar ke rakha hai'


On the other side Ridhimaa was busy making a guy agree to have the injection but he was not ready being scared of injections n she was having really hard tym'.


Ridz: arey mein keh rahi hoon na kuch anhin ho ga'


Arnav: nahi mein ne kaha na mujhe injection nahin lagwana'


Hearing all this Armaan moved towards them''.


Armaan: arey bhai kyun nahin lagwana injection aapko..


Arnav: actually mujjhe injection se darr lagta hai'



Armaan: oh acha waise mujhe bhi lagta hai..mein bhi nahin lagta' 'here Ridhimaa was confused is he helping her or creating more trouble as the guy will never agree to take injection"


Armaan: waise yeh chot kaise lagi'


Arnav: oh yeh who mein bike se jar aha tha''he began his story n Armaan give signal to Ridhimaa to give him injection which she did'n till the tym the guy got to know it'she has injected him''


Arnav: aap ne mere saath cheating ki'


Armaan: ab tum aise bachoon ki tarah daro gae tu yehi ho ga na'waise tumhein mujhe thanks kahna chahiye'


Arnav: thnx kis liye'


Armaan: arey bhai tumhein itni khatarnak[dangerous] aur darawni[scary] Dr.Ridhimaa se bacaya hai'warna agar tum injection na lagwate tu yeh tumhein kacha chaba jate' 'hearing Armaan Arnav laughed out loud n even couldn't hold his giggles seeing Ridz face..wich was red wid anger''


Ridz: kya kaha tum ne'mein tum darawni lagti hoon'



Armaan: uhmm'nahin'actually correction''..lagti nahin'darawni hoo' 'he laughed n moved from there but next second'he was on the floor'''.how'."


Hearing him Ridhimaa fumed in anger n put her foot in his way..n he fell down..coz he didn't see that'seeing him on the floor'Ridhimaa was laughing making other patients laugh also''


Armaan felt embarrassed n getting up..clean his clothes..n glared at Ridhimaa'.


Armaan: tumhein tu mein dekh loon ga.. 'n he again got back to work'



Wid this there first day finished'Armaan n Atul were rite after Ridhimaa n Anjali's car'so that they can reach home safely and after they left the other officers take their post n started protecting the gals'


***


Next Day Armaan n Atul were already there in the locker room as they have to discuss few things abt the case wid Niki n Abhi'so after few minutes they were also there'All four have a chat regarding the case n talking for few more minutes the stopped knowing the other interns would be coming soon'''


All went towards there lockers n soon Rahul Muskaan came bickering on something..


Muski: oye khoote de puttar tera na mouh[face] torh doon gi'


Rahul: mufte ka samjha hua hai kya'cheepkali nah hue tu..


Muski: tujhe kisne kaha tha mera dabba phekhne ko'


Rahul: tu meri ghalti'tu mujhse takrai'nazar tu waise bhi kharab hai..andhi na ho tu..


Muski: mein andhi'tu ne mujhe andhi kaha'andha ho gat u..tera pura khandan,'


Rahul: oye dyaan [witch] khandan pen a jaen mere..


Muski: jaon gi khankhajure'kya kar le ga'


Rahul: kya kar loon ga..abhi batata hoon' 'n wid this they start pulling each other hairs..trying to harm the other one a lot''


Where as all others were in shock..seeing them like school kids'at the same tym Anjali n Ridhimaa entered n where shocked seeing RM fighting'more than that physically hurting each other..


They both shouted together'. 'yeh kya ho raha hai'' making all come out of the shock n run towards the duo n boys pulled Rahul where as gals pulled Muskaan'


Muskaan: choro mujhe'is kamine ko tu mein zinda nahin chorongi' 'she said trying to pull out from the gals who were pulling her back'.'


Rahul: arey choro tum log..aj is bandariya ko bataon mein cheez kya hoon''he was also trying to pull out'


All other'as RM were keep on going on n on'. 'SHUT UP''..'


N this made Rahul n Muskaan stop'after the fight ends'n all made their way for their respective lockers..to get their labcoats n important files as it was tym to report for the duty'


As Ridhimaa opened her locker''..she screamed loud''.. AHHH''..


Ridhimaa was panting n breathing heavily n she scared others also coz of her scream'actually what happened when she opened her locker'a lizard fell on her files'n before she could scream a spider was hanging on the edge of the locker'making her gasp n scream hard'..


Seeing her soo scared face..Armaan just couldn't stop himself'n laughed loud''.n seeing him..others laugh also..when Ridhimaa pulled out the plastic lizard n spider''.n was fuming now'



Armaan can see the devil horns n smoke coming out of her ears''and she was ready to pound on him anytym''Armaan moved back'but Ridhimaa didn't miss the opportunity n both started running in the locker room..around others'n seeing Ridhimaa after Armaan..they got to know it was Armaan who played prank on Ridhimaa'



But hearing the announcement all moved out..wid Ridhimaa giving Armaan a warning..


Precap : A prank which was about to take someone's life...

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ok that's it for now guys...

hope u like the part...plzz Do Comment n Press the LIKE button...

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from now onwards i'll try my best to update the ff once in a week...keeping in mind the other 2 FF's also...

Sorry for any grammatical mistakes...

waiting for ur comments...

loads of luv..

anu...




Edited by anumeha_rajat - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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EDITED****
haha amy knows nothing.
well, loved the way he annoyed her by asking silly questions!

Hmm! so anji is just like in the show. telling bechara atul to shut up
but atul's so caring
love it.

Whos this preeto ji he attracted now! 😆
great to see nana here again!

well, what to say, amy just knows how to distract patients.
their fight after arnav incident is so cute!

haha he falls down!
being a FBI agent, isnt he always supposed to be aware of his surroundings? ~! 😆
how did he not c the foot then..

OMG! RM are too much.
but love their tone and way they speak.

ha ha ha plastic lizard nd spider!
WoW! hilarious

Uh-Oh. precap seems freaky.
Waiting for next part now.
Ud whenver u can

Love khushi
Edited by Princess_Khushi - 14 years ago

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