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Posted: 14 years ago
muskan plz make our valentines day happy by posting the part 60 and make sure it is a dhmaka...plz update soon..cant wait
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey ....did anyone see "ajab prem ki kahani"...did anyone see gurtis performance???
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Posted: 14 years ago
~deewangi~
part 60

Geet - aap itne pareshan kyun ho?
he ran towards her ... madly, he wanted to kiss her like never before. He owed her apology big one..

****
Geet - wat can I do if he only wants to get engaged...maan just sprung her into his arms & hugged her madly. I am sorry...i am really sorry. The whole gathering was shocked to see him hugging her like that. Rimi was first scared & immediately smiled & cut the call she was caught off gaurd. His grip slowly over her weaken. He began to feel uncomfortable, the anxiety with which he hugged her just turned into turmoil of rejection. His whole body felt sick, his skin felt like he was burned alive. He slowly pulled away & stood there numb to have hugged her like this. The feeling of hatredness shot a different level, he hated himself for denying her even now. He just heard his heart beat, his life line she was on line, he saw her then why why when he held in her arms it felt like million needles pricking him. Every one surrounded them for the ceremony. Daadi gave the ring to him. He was dead ...he was surely going to be dead man if his fingers put those rings in there..he felt suffocated...he felt he was chocked ..
****
arohi - kya huwa
Geet - pata nahi line kat gaya
Arjun - phenk mat
Geet - kaha na line cut gaya
she looked really tensed unlike herself today.
Arohi - kya baat hain, aaj 4 saal main pehli baar tuje kuch bolte suna hain phone main
Geet - nahi pata nahi.. he was not fine..there is something wrong..drastically wrong, like he needed me, like he missed me more than anything, like he may just collapse now... she panted speaking those words & sat on the steps of the Kingston station. Arjun immediately passed her a bottle of water.

THAT MORNING...

arohi - Geet jaldi ready ho na
Geet - umm..

arohi - Geet yaar college ke liya late ho rahen hain
Geet - umm

arohi - kis ke liya itna saj rahi hain


she smiled & kissed his portraits image on the mirror & gave him a fly kiss.. I love u I love u I really love u all lot. Ummah ummah ummah....

arohi - deewani hain tu
she blushed - sirf inkiliyen

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xgIna2IhNB0[/YOUTUBE]

OUT SIDE KINGSTON STATION...NOW...
She couldn't drink, she was choking, she was scared & tensed she was feeling wat he felt there..suffocated...just then few guys stamped her duppata & pushed her making her jerk slipping her pallo. She immediately straightened herself while Arjun held that guys collar who smirked teasingly at Geet.
Arjun - how dare u?
He punched that guys face & stomach.. the guy ran away from the spot.
Arjun spat in anger at geet - wat is this with ur salwar.. can't u wear jeans & t-shirt
she rolled her eyes
arohi tried to calm Arjun down
Arjun - main tumhara BF kum iska body guard jada lagta hoon. Why can't she wear something that is more common here. Har dosare din guys are passing comments at her or ..he turns his face in disgust
Geet ignored it all eating her chocolate - jada footage khani ki zarorat nahi hain.. I need to make one call & he will be here in less than 8hrs...
Arjun - min 12hrs..delhi main traffic bhi hoti hain
she turned her lips - ok 12hrs
Arjun - so why don't u just call him & finish with all this
Geet - because I love him love him love him a lot.
Arjun - yeh kaise pyar hain tum dono ka...
arohi - yeh pyar nahi deewangi hain
Arjun - I am sure he has forgotten her. Have u seen the HOT girls he parties with. Abhi tak tho he probably slept with ...umm...let me count...50 minimum. & dated 100
Geet didn't bother.
Arohi - yaar Geet teri baat mujhe samjh nahi aati, how can u be so cool about all this.
Geet - because I know him. He can't even touch any other girl
arohi - wat if he does
geet smiled - then he might be thinking its me in his arms.
****
Maan held the ring ..turned it around & stood there struggling to cover the distance between the finger & the ring. The thought of hugging killed him. How could he... why did he ..but she just spoke to him on the phone...his brain, heart ..every thing just failed him yet again. He couldn't fight himself anymore. He inched close to her, could u please wear the ring ur self he pleaded. Rimi took the ring avoiding the media & others eyes & slipped it in her finger & announced they were engaged. He just left from there.
****
Arohi, Geet & Arjun boarded the train to the waterloo station.
Arohi - don't u think his taste would have changed in last 4yrs
Geet - I know him.. I know every thing about him
Arjun - arohi kuch seehk isse...dehk yanha rah kar bhi she knows wat he likes
arohi - great why don't u also stay away..probably I will understand u better.
Geet - aise mat bol .. it really hurts ..heart bleeds...everything seems meaningless without him.
Arjun - itna pyar karti hain to baat kyun nahi karti
arohi - woh bhi tho kar sakta hain na
Geet - woh nahi karenge
Arjun - yaar aaj bata hi de woh aakir kyun nahi phone karega?
arohi - really yaar I still don't understand why can't he come & meet u talk to u
she smiled
Arjun - nahi yaar u have to answer our question - if he loves u then why didn't he call u even once in last 4yrs...
Geet - he thinks I am angry with himself
arohi - so even more reason for him to call u right
Arjun rests his hand lovingly on arohi - mana ne ke liya..jaise mujhe isse mana na padtha hain
Geet blushed - unhe mujhe mana na ki kya zarorat hain
arohi - Geet u are confusing us now!!!
Geet - ok ok... he thinks I am angry..which he also know I can't be angry with him.. but then because of this anger ..I am studying ..not crying ' actually trying to finish this course fast & get back to wear I belong... his arms.. he knows if he comes to meet me... then parting away again will be impossible. If we talk on the phone then cutting the call becomes impossible
arohi - yaar that is true... I remember first 3 months.. Oh man.. I felt Maan actually lived with us
Arjun - tu sach main Maan ki deewani hain
she delightedly nodded.

walking into their flat which was filled with maan's snaps & paper cuttings. She madly hugged the picture & kissed it. Kya baat hain ..itne pareshan kyun raheten ho aaj kal..
arohi got her dinner - kya huwa Geet?
Geet - pata nahi.. from last one month or so I feel he is very upset. Pata nahi kuch ajeeb se pareshani. I am just not able to concentrate on anything.
Arohi - official work
Geet - nahi ' he is missing him.. like he wants to see me desperately
Arjun - that should be always there right
Geet - hain.. lekin.. he knows I will come only after 8months.. then why is he getting so restless, like agar main abhi unse nahi milli tho kabhi nahi millo ghi.

PRECAP
maan going deewana

~PREV PART 59 NEXT PART 61~
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...
hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yipeee.............happy valentines day to all.....
now who is this lady acting like geet at their place.......
please this is too much now...
they should meet
its high time......kahin this girl is not some who is from geet's hoshiarpur family
as she knows a lot of family stuff.....

Edited by libra25 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
love u...love u ...love u....😃
thank u ...thank u...thank u....😃
knew there was something fishy....now to we know...😉
god..*phew*...we were going mad thinking about all this...now *a sigh of relief*...
i still can't believe what happened....😕
some stupid girl...rimi😡...simi.😡..whatever...trying to fool them...😡....trying to fool maan...😡
maza to ab aayega....😆
love the entry of arjun n aarohi...geets true friends....
loved how geet is still the same....maan ki geet...😳
loved the connection between them....her realizing something is wrong...him realizing she is not geet...
now just waiting to know who she is???...who she was talking to?? n what r they trying to do?? get his property...??? is she geets twin??look alike??
ohhh...too many questions...but for now just happy that she is not geet...🥳
ab bas geet jaldi se wapas aa jaye ya maan jaldi se use dhoondh le...
one last question..is she not aware maan is getting engaged...after all he is famous...n the engagement news wud surely have made headline???😕😕
Edited by jyoti_l - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
❤️whooooooopieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee🤪....🥳

OMG I m goin nuts!!! crazeeeee...... bananaaaaaaassss...... Love you sooooo soooo sooo much!!!🤗❤️
I am D.Y.I.N.G for the next part!!

And why is Maan goina go deewana?!😳..... 😃... god!!! I ve lost it today!!! yayyyy!!


(PS: is that Rajinder who planted Rimi!!)
Edited by ninand - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh gosh so that girl is not geet.....ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
Woww fantastic update ❤️❤️
Now everyfings bak 2 normal 👏
Dat gurl is not Geet but sum1 els fink she'z only here 4 Maans money
Yayy love Geet & her deewani 🤗
Awww Maan wnt touch any1 besides Geet & he showed it by telling dat rimi gurl 2 put da ring on haself
Hope Geet comes bak 2 Maan soon
Nice precap 😊
Cont soon Xx...
Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yipee... thats not geet........ 👏 thanks muskan for the update
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Posted: 14 years ago
So the Rimi is an imposter............Kisne use Bheja...........

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