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Posted: 14 years ago
so as this thread concludes I will write what I felt
pls muskan don't mind
I can't help myself😆
feeling her so close he could feel himself hard just the way he did when he was around his wify. An urge long forgotten.. long gone, he thought it would never happen again, was setting in him exactly the way it did. Hating himself.. he pushed the curls behind & held her hair & tilted her head backward in anger. She opened her eyes instantly feeling the pain in his grip.. but something she didn't mind.. she cherished even this. His lips were inches away from hers...his breath fanning her lips... her scent intoxicating him...tum us din kyun royee thi?
A tear threatened to fall from corner of her eyes.. he instantly kissed it away.. feel of his lips again was the most beautiful thing she thought.
His grip getting harder now - kyun choda mera haat
she didn't know he would ask her that.. she was not prepared for that..
she was at wars, not able to understand what was going on; the only thing she understood was that he was in pain and the root cause of his pain was she; but what has she done to give him pain, to irritate him what?
he asked her to go to London and as per his wish she spent her last 5 yrs away from him; she waited for him to call her in holidays but he never did, he wanted her to come only after 5 yrs after she completes her degree; she did every thing as he wished her to do; she never questions him never, how can she? whatever he does is as oer her wish, and thia sending her away was her papaji's wish which he fulfilled; and today also when he decided to get engaged with that girl I did not question him because I know that no one can take my place in his heart I am his soul, I would not have interferred in his life in which he looked content if my Mangalsutra had not broken
she came out of her thoughts when Maan tightened his grip on her again asking "Kyo choda mera Haath"
I just did know what to say, but as he insisted again and never go against his wish I said "Haath hi to choda Saath to nahin choda"
he jerked my hand and pushed me hard against the wall, I lost my foot and was about to fall when his strong arms encircled my waist and saved me from falling, when I opened my eyes feeling myself safe in his arms I found him staring at me.
he then asked "tum kaun ho"
I looked at him in wonder and thought Jaano your Geet but checked my self from spilling the beans
just then Adi interrupted " sir...rr..r she is your personal associate.... Me... ee...t Kh...ur..ana"
Maan shot him a fuming look, and then turned to face me " you come to my cabin with your resume and file, NOW"
he left and made his way to his cabin
Adi gave me a stern look as if thinking now those refrences for yours will not be able to save you
I took my file and went to his cabin, I knocked and asked for permission to enter composing my heart and mind
I entered the cabin to witness him lost in his thoughts, as soon as stepped furthur his gaze lingered on me making me remember all the times when I have been here, all those drooling sessions flashed in my mind, I felt shy, and wondered if circumstances had been different I would have just run to him and hugged him and I shied furthur
he was looking intently at me, and after a life time he asked "why are you blushing?"
I was again taken aback by his query, now what should I say, he is not recognising me; and his heart is caling me.
I did not as much as uttered a word and extended the file to him, he went through the file, Arjun has taken care about all that he will never know that these are false papers.
as he went through the papers he fumed and called therefrences stated in them and found nothing fishy everything was foolproof, he got angrier and angrier, he suddenly threw the file and came near me and grabbed my hand and dragged me out of the cabin and pushed me out of the KC main enterance {the precap has to be accomodated 😆}
I did not ask him anything and just did what he wanted me to do I sat in the parking lot not knowing now what to do, I have to find some way to be near him I know something is wrong somewhere he is dieing inside I can't leave him like that once I find what his problem is will fix it up and leave without questioning him I know he loves me I can always read his breath his heartbeats he never needs words,
I saw his car standing in the car park, I sneaked in the back seat my slim form allowing me to hide, then I saw him coming, he snatched the keys from the driver and drove off, he turned back quite a few times as if sensing my presence, I held my breath, but he seemed to be at wars, finally holted in front of a pub and went in I followed him from a distance, keeping out of his way, he drank hard, he was pouring drink after drink then finally the bartender refused to serve him, he came out and tried to open his car, but he failed I came forward and took the keys from his hand, and called the cab
he looked at me with confusion I asked the driver to help me get him in the cab, he said "Khurana Mansion chalo"
I said " is halat mein ghar nahin jaavooge"
he looked at me in confusion "phir"
I gave the cab driver the address of gurgoan flat
and took him to the falt, I opened the flat with the key I had and took him inside.
I was shocked to see the condition of the flat all the walls were stained with blood I reealised his blood, I took him to the bedroom, removed his shoes, belt and coat and made him comfortable, and as I was about to leave he pulled me towards him and hugged me my heart was aching for this I was dying to feel him near my heart to be held by him a she always did,
he murmured "koi nahi karta mujhe se pyar.. aab woh bhi nahi karti..woh bhi nahi karti..woh bhi nahi karti..kitna badal gai hain woh......... ab woh meri Geet jaisi nahin hain......... woh koi aur hain"
I was shocked to hear this I had to know what he was saying I asked him "kaun badal jai hain"
he said "sab kahte hain ki woh Rimi Geet hai par mera yeh jo dil hain woh nahin manta, maine sab check kiya, woh uske jaisi hi dikhti hai kuch kuch, uska passport saare papers sab, aur Maa aur Dadi bhi use Geet kaheti hain par mera dil nahin manta, main kya karo" he sobbed bitterly hiding his face in my bossom
I were confused something was definately wrong and I will find that out but first I have to sooth him I said "karti hain..aapki Geet sirf aapse pyar karti hain..jab boh hain tho kisi aur kya zaroorat hain"
he nuzzled "nahi hain..boh ho tho kisi ki zarorat nahi...kisi ki zarorat nahi..aur mujhe koi nahi chahiya..mujhe sirf Geet chahiya..sirf Geet..par boh ahin kahan... kya tum meri Geet ho... bolo.... kyunki boh to meri Geet nahin hain... tum hona meri Geet...bolo.."
he fainted,
but even in his unconcious state he held my wrist tightly, I cuddled against him and he pulled me and rested his head on my chest encircling me in his arms he slept peacefully he was home their home with his little wifey.
DONT MIND😆
Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
tat was brilliant muskan
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Posted: 14 years ago

You know I definitely would have different feeling for all parts .......... if i wudn'v read the whole update in one go cuase I was too desperate to know the whole story that din wait to comment and then read next part ...........and now I regret it spoiled the all fun ......... now i know rimi is not geet ..........but still i'l give my feedback but I'm still curious to know who is this girl is she send by geet's relative ??? nd I'm loving this flow just the pain maan is going thru is little disturbing ...........

My feeling until i get to know the girl rimi is fake geet ......

Part 58 : maan has kept her name creature great !!! one thing i din get if this gal is here for money then why she wud break the relation ........confusing ........

the gal in disguise of geet is failed to cheat maan's heart .......his brain is only doing obligations ..........just in obligation he dznt want to hurt fake geet .........😔

i kind of had doubt that she is not geet but when she stated wearing clothes of maan's choice i thought just for time being she was influenced she is geet only

i was too angry to read that she cant where to find maan and when she did not notice his wound ..............

i so wanted maan to open up with geet and ask why he can't relate himself to her........... i wanted him to sort out things with geet before engaging to her .......

Part 58 : maan's condition makes me so sad .....geet not noticing maan's wound ,choosing the costliest ring instead not noticing the similar ring maan had gifted her .....even if she was real how cud maan love her ...........
she instantly hugged him & kissed his cheek. He moved back in shock. She actually did wat his wify used to do, pounce at him & kiss his cheek, brain was all thrilled his wifey was selfless...i though old geet is cumng back i was too happy of her this act .........

brain - her dress???
heart - my love is not so shallow
brain - her not working in KC???
heart - that really doesn't matter
brain - her not calling u jaanoo
heart - it hurts
brain - she even kissed u like the way she did before
heart - thats exactly wat is my point.. even if she did all that wat she did before.. I for sure now know that she is not my little wify
brain - u r not making sense
heart - U R NOT MAKING SENSE Exactly my point maan's love is nto that shallow that little change is geet wil stop him loving her ......... ....

call gave me doubt .....the girl talking to maan was real geet but girl in party on phone fake geet .........but like maan even i was confused

part 60 : arohi - kya baat hain, aaj 4 saal main pehli baar tuje kuch bolte suna hain phone main ........ pehele bhi boal hota toh aaj itni confusion nahi hoti

see geet can never change .........she can feel maan's restlessness .......she still wears her choice of clothes .........

Arjun - main tumhara BF kum iska body guard jada lagta hoon.

Geet ignored it all eating her chocolate - jada footage khani ki zarorat nahi hain.. I need to make one call & he will be here in less than 8hrs...
Arjun - min 12hrs..delhi main traffic bhi hoti hain
she turned her lips - ok 12hrs
Arjun - so why don't u just call him & finish with all this
Geet - because I love him love him love him a lot.
Arjun - yeh kaise pyar hain tum dono ka...
arohi - yeh pyar nahi deewangi hain

Arjun - I am sure he has forgotten her. Have u seen the HOT girls he parties with. Abhi tak tho he probably slept with ...umm...let me count...50 minimum. & dated 100
Geet didn't bother.
Arohi - yaar Geet teri baat mujhe samjh nahi aati, how can u be so cool about all this.
Geet - because I know him. He can't even touch any other girl
arohi - wat if he does
geet smiled - then he might be thinking its me in his arms.

i seriously loved this part geet's trust on her love .............and the last line so true and awesum ...... everything in this part was just fantastic👏 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

part 61: ..........you know i just loved lat two updates ..............they both are deewane .........i love their deewangi ........they each other so well that even the distance is only between their bodies not soul ........ its just not heart to heart connection it is soul to soul connection ......no1 can understand this other than them .........maan stabbed his heart proves how much i misses geet ..... when we can't accept this fake geet how can maan ....... heart wrenching update

i really can't she the torture maan is in ......... nd geet ........i love her deewangi...onky she can love maan selflessly ........

part 62 : Arohi - how can that be, if he loves her he won't get effected by u
Geet smiles - effected '.u don't know wat effect I have on him.. happy she still knows her effect on him geet ,arohi and arjun's convo was very touchy and emotional ....❤️ ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Geet smirked - no one can take advantage of him
arohi - Geet I think u should meet him
Geet - nahi yaar.. tu samjh nahi rahi hain
arohi - samjha de..waise bhi teri deewangi I can never understand
Geet - he knows I love him a lot...
arohi - umm
Geet - if I go in front of him... he can read my eyes in a sec & sense that I still love him, that will make him feel guilty & sad
Arjun who stood near the door listening to all this - aur deewani kabhi usse duhki nahi kar sakti
arohi - if he truly loves that girl then why will he feel sad for u
Geet - because he loves me... because he owns me.. she knows he loves her then why is she not bothered to know why he got to engaged sum1 else
Arjun & arohi pulled each others hair - GGGGGGGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRR i also reacted in same way GRHHHHHHHHH even i dnt understand what she wants.....😊

Geet - idon't know bag main hi tha.. the searched her bag..they rushed back to the flat.. looked for every where her passport & certificates where no where to be seen
Arjun yelled how can u be so careless
Geet was sinking..she could breath..it looked like the whole world was conspiring to separate them..jaanoo she screamed & fell on the floor crying.. first time ever did Arjun & arohi saw her in tears..she was never the crying types, always filled with life & happiness OMG !!!!😲😲😲😲 its becumgn very difficult ......how cum rimi got all geet's identification proof .......I'm scared even if geet wants she cant prove she is geet to any1 i guess no1 wud trust her except maan ....... .

I loved the last bit ............ ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

part 63 : I hate u ..I hate u....she cried hitting on his chest meekly with all her strength that she could gather at that time... exactly the way maan had thought about geet's reaction when he got the news she is cumgn back😳😳😳..........again it was an emotional update but very beautiful👏👏👏👏......... don'l blame arjun ......he is only worried for his frnd .......

part 64 : first i thought she will choose creative designer .........fighting with brain and heart 😔......when ur brain and heart are not agreed on same thing you always go in dilemma bit geet is back in maan's life she will change his world again like she did before😊 .........he kissed her tears .....😊

all updates were jsut fantastic some were too emotional and touch and some juet made cry ............but i'm loving where the story is leading 👏👏👏👏👏👏

Edited by anu_luv_maan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i eish muskan aisa koi twist de luved spl in subconsious mind he spoke every thing his fear his heart not accepting rimi everything
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey frends, sorry i dont understand one thing. Is rimi not geet or are they different characters m a bit confused? 😕
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Posted: 14 years ago

read all the parts in one go..!!!!!😍

*hatss off & two thumbs upP...!!!*~👍🏼👍🏼
its really one of the most interestin' and innovative stories i've ever read on IF..!!*~☺️

You handled MAAN & GEET's feeling so well, flawlessly written..!!*~👏👏

the title *dewangi* is *puurrrrrr-fectllyyyy* relatin' with MAAN & GEET!!!!!*~😳

The execution of Pain, happiness their feelings towards each other was awesomely written...!!*~👏

i must say you have GREAT WRITING SKILLS..!!*~😍😍
*bow down*

Please add me to your PM list...!!
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would love to read another FF's of yours...!!*~😃

p.s i got the link of this FF from GEET page on fb!!*~
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Posted: 14 years ago
poor maan it is really painfull to see him like this muskan do some thing yaar

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