Love's Acid Test - A 2-Part Short Story (updated) - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viji79

Oops I didnt realize I was posting my reply from my dads account. Sorry for the confusion. By the way his account name is my son's pet name in my parents place.

Thanks for clearing the confusion. I was wondering who this new person is! Yes, Geet has become like any other romantic comedy and the initial emphasis on the social cause has taken a backseat. Yesterday Geet was even asking that pannipuri lady why she was still working in her seventh month. Looks like Geet herself has no intention to resume working. I also did not like her saying in that office scene that the mothers, wives and children of the staff will be wating for them. What about the female staff? Would their families not be waiting for them? Geet's attitude and comments of late reflect the sexist leanings of the male writers of the show I think.
By the way have you read the other three one shots I had written recently?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Opti

Thanks for clearing the confusion. I was wondering who this new person is! Yes, Geet has become like any other romantic comedy and the initial emphasis on the social cause has taken a backseat. Yesterday Geet was even asking that pannipuri lady why she was still working in her seventh month. Looks like Geet herself has no intention to resume working. I also did not like her saying in that office scene that the mothers, wives and children of the staff will be wating for them. What about the female staff? Would their families not be waiting for them? Geet's attitude and comments of late reflect the sexist leanings of the male writers of the show I think.
By the way have you read the other three one shots I had written recently?

Oh yes, I did read them, sorry for not commenting. I liked all of them. I should not have given you the opportunity to ask me, sorry, there is no other excuse other than laziness.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg...It was really heart breaking...😭😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome first part di... awaiting for the next Poor Geet and Maan... ma question does Geet nw abt the baby...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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LOVED IT ....... NEED PM . THANKS

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nilam2010

omg...It was really heart breaking...😭😭😭

Sorry to have made you cry!.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aarthirajendran

awesome first part di... awaiting for the next Poor Geet and Maan... ma question does Geet nw abt the baby...

No Geet does not know about the baby as on now. She is still in a state of shock and she has not come out of it as yet. She will in the next part. Thanks.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: maansee

LOVED IT ....... NEED PM . THANKS

Thanks. Will PM you when I update next.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was sad.......awwww poor maan and geet...
the baby gone....😭😭😭😭 and maan feeling guilty....
waiting for the 2nd part...
awesome as always opti
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Posted: 14 years ago
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excellent . plz update asap.

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